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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome

I loved their trip mariam..There were many things in this chapter which took my mind somewhere else..Like when maaneet were stuck in the lift,i was reminded of Salman Khan and Ayesha takia's lift scene in "wanted",though your maan was a true gentleman unlike naughty salman in that scene..

Ha ha! I don't think Maan in this story will be half as noughts as Salman was in that scene! 😆
Secondly,when maan started walking on the roadside,It reminded me of one of my favorite advertisement these days..I loved maan's gesture here..
I think I know which ad you're talking about and it's my favourite too these days. 'Bande acche hain!' 😳
and Mr. Darcy reminded me of "yucky noodles-maggie"..Its her favorite book...
I knew her fascination about the book. And it's my favourite book too. 😃
I am lil worried for "Anayush"...Hope their prob would be sorted out fast..
Oh they got a new clubbed name! I like the sound of it! 😊
and at last,kodak moment was just perfect...
The Kodak moment has been captured by Ayush. 😉
over all beautiful chapter mayonnaise...😊🤗
Thank you Palin! I'm glad to know that! 🤗

PS- I felt bad for mutant "jess"...and yes her nasal voice reminded me of "himesh reshamiya" and "Mika singh"...

This comparison cracked me up! 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

chup bilkul chup yaha bhi aa gaya...
mujhe laga ye wala maan use nahi karega MSK special diologue..
Kuch aisi cheezein jo MSK special hoti hain chaahey wo kisi bhi story ka MSK ho. 😳[/I]
i loved ayush's prank.. my brother used to do that sometimes and used to get a nice beating from my sisters..
Jo bhi aisa prank karega maar hi khaaye ga! 😆
ohk aisa lagta hai ab mujhe P&P padni padegi.. iss darcy character ne mujhe bahut preshaan kar rakha hai..
I'll say zarur padho. 😃
nice update mariam..
and CONGRAATS ON TURNING RED..🤗
Thanks Mannu! I'm glad you liked it. 🤗

btw humaare forum pe kitne doctors hai ek aash dusri onir.. or kitne hai????
Pata nahin, ek ek karke baahar aa rahey hain. 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Mari 😳😳


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

My 100th Post. Yay. Reserved. Still 100 to go for me to change color. Wails.
Not any more I guess. 😃
Edited after ages:
Never mind about that!
I know. I KNOW the pains of trying to read a book when you are going out on trips. You can't I mean CANNOT concentrate on a single word. I love to read books sitting in a window seat, occasionally looking out at the moving trees, and then going back to your page, but then I don't dislike the disturbance much too. It brings a smile on your face watching the excitement of others. The singing rather screaming of songs, the attempt at dancing in the tiny place, the loud jeers, the comments thrown, the wails at a simple turn, it makes you want to laugh. The carefree moments brings a smile on your face.
I think every person who loves to read and who has to travel knows the pain of trying to read a book at such times! 😆
Oh and about shopping at such places, I always end up irking my friends because I tend to think aloud of what to get for whom, and once I get all gifts for everyone I know, I get bored and instead of my friends' asking me to take something for myself I do not. This reminded me of an incident happened last month, when I've been to a place in another city. Me and my friends have been to this mall and we bought gifts to everyone and they asked me to get something for myself and were showing me different things to take, for which I was throwing tantrums at everything, and the shopkeepers were throwing glares at us. Finally I liked a bracelet and was trying it and when I asked the price, mera fuse ud gaya and my friends were already clutching their stomachs laughing. I told "Bhayya take this bracelet out na" and when he took it off my wrist, we didn't give him a moment, everyone of us went "Bhagooo". And that kamina, I heard from one of my friends was smiling at us.😆
For me, it happens like buting gifts for everyone but never bothering about myself. Not even looking at things to be able to throw tantrums on what I should buy for myself. But your 'bhaagooo' made me laugh! 😆
I loved how instead of a talk about Ayush Anaya, some simple gestures and incidents are revealing about their relationship to Geet, and to some extent to Anaya herself. Anaya going panicky on his missing, them holding hands, simple gestures but speak a lot. And Anaya being disappointed I think is because she might be wondering that he is being his usual flirty self. For reasons unknown I always felt Anaya felt for Ayush.
Actions do speak louder than words and so did happen with Geet noticing Anaya and Ayush's relationship. About Anaya feeling for Ayush, go with your feelings and maybe you'll be right. 😉
Mr.Darcyyy!
I know!
I need to quote somethign from an interview I recently had.
Interviewer: Which Author's books have you read?
Me: Jane Austen, blah, blah,...
In: Oh Jane Austen? Which book is your fav among hers?
Me: P&P
In: Who's your fav character in that book?
Me: Mr. Darcy
In: *Snorts* Predictable. (turns towards another panelist who's a young girl and who's grinning at me) You girls always like Darcy, aren't you? (turns towards me) Why do you like such a arrogant, egoist? He doesn't even think twice before lashing out at people. He's so imperfect.
Me: Yes sir, he's imperfect. He jumps the axe and lashes out the first person, he jumps to conclusions and doesn't have the patience to hear other person out, but he's one person who would accept his mistakes and would truly regret them and would do anything in his means to redeem himself. Everyone makes mistakes but very less have the guts to face them and I admire people like him.
In: Bottom line, you girls like guys who would listen to you.
He grinned then while I returned his grin.🤣
The way you answered about why you like Darcy, I can almost kick myself on not taking your opinion before writing down the dumb explanation in the chapter!
But the interviewer's reply had me in fits! 😆

Okay this comment has become more like a recollection of memories sort, so i am stopping my nonsense, but before that even I think the call is related to Ranbir.
And I really enjoyed reading the recollection of your memories. Thanks for sharing them, Shika! 😊
You'll find out about the call soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Sheen!

Uff! I so loved this entry! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13


Hi Sheen!

Uff! I so loved this entry! 😳



Mee too 😃
Kidhar busy ho 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: april12

Awesome update

Lovely trip
Maan, Geet, Ayush, Anaya bond.
Ayush confesses😲
Anaya is angry
Maaneet sleeping on bus
Who is this caller?


Glad you liked it. You'll find out about the caller soon... 😊

Originally posted by: dreamy4ever

Beautiful update. Ayush proposed to ananya 😃 wen will b Maan's turn.


Thanks! You never know when he might propose. 😉

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

awesome dear
thanx for the pm
cont soon


Thank you! 😊

Originally posted by: ramyayuppy

awesome part jus luved this
the whole trip is jus escatic
thnks fr pm
update soon


Glad you liked it! 😊

Originally posted by: spvd

part 12
awesome dear...
cont soon...


Thanks! 😊

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Superb Update Mayyo 😃😃
Loved It Really 😳
I cant Find more words Sowie 😆


Glad you like it Sheen! And no sorry! Samjhi! 😊

Originally posted by: x.Maaneet4eva.x

Loved the update...Thank u for the update :)...Eager to know what the person on the other side said...x.


I'm pleased to know that you liked it. You'll be finding out soon what the person said! 😊

Thanks! 😊

Thank you! 😊

Originally posted by: sree10

Great update and you have made such an insightful remark about Mr. Darcy, my favourite hero.

Love you yaar.


I'm glad to know that you liked it! Mr. Darcy is one of my favourite characters too. 😊

Originally posted by: lehr

awesome update dear
loved it


Thanks! 😊

Originally posted by: Ru_21

Amazing update...loved it


Glad to know that! 😊

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

awesome update
i loved ayush's honest confession to ananya
hope she understood him soon
& geet reply to jess was amazing


Thank you! Happy to know that you liked it! 😳

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Lovely desrciption of trip
Loved anaya & ayush but at the end there is indifferecne bet them when ayush confessed his feelings
Lift part was nice...loved that maan & geet's bonding is increasing...but they are very slow...
Whose phone call was shocked maan


Glad you like it! And slow and steady wins the race! 😉
You'll know about the phone call.
Edited by mayyo13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi



Mee too 😃
Kidhar busy ho 😉


Comments ke replies kar rahi thi. Just finished with that. Aur ab going to write the next chapter. 😊
Where are you and Naureen these days? Bohat kam OL aatey ho. Done with the wedding?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13


Comments ke replies kar rahi thi. Just finished with that. Aur ab going to write the next chapter. 😊
Where are you and Naureen these days? Bohat kam OL aatey ho. Done with the wedding?



Yup Done 😉
Shadi ki waja se hi kum arahe thay 😃
Aaj aashu ki bari 😳
Wednesday Aapki 😉
Me waiting 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yep, just saw that Aashu is updating today. 😊

I probably won't update on Wednesday..

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