If Only You Saw Me (6) - Page 64

Originally posted by: Onir

Phikar not yeh nahi toh koi aur technique dhoond hi lenge hum sab... 😆😉

Becahri dukhyari Sweety padhai mein dubbi hui hogi...

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Huh! Demands ke aaget kuch dikhta nahin hai? Mujh masoom bachhi ki hasi se bhi problem hone leagu hai! 😳

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Main aur Sweety ko taunt karungi? Meri tauba! 😲

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Keep trying then!
Sweety did come last night after all. Bohat late aayi thi.

Originally posted by: Onir

Keep trying is become my motto with you... 😆

Hmm i read the previous comments from her... I fell asleep yesterday after some time... 🥱

Originally posted by: Onir

Mayyo I loved this part so very much. There are many reasons to this. It was like a walk down the memory lane for me. It reminded me of so many treasured, loved, precious moments I have spent with my friend's group 3 years back when we went to a trip to Rajasthan for 15 days before we graduated, & to create memories before each one of us flew to different destinations for our careers & specialisations. Everything from the bus ride, travelling, pics taken, singing songs, chatting, everything took me back in time. I love you for doing this & bringing this part in this way. Their sharing of cold drink in the cold weather reminded me of the times when we friends used to daily after each meal have an ice candy of different flavours & then compare whose tongue has coloured into a darker shade. Later crib that it was too cold to have such cold stuff. Nevertheless we used to enjoy it all.

I'm glad, Onir, that you could relive your precious memories thorugh this chapter! 😊

The walk on the road post shopping, with Maan into the protecting mode after a car went zooming by was so chivalrous & charming. She loved his subtle attempt for protecting her. He can be both active & passive saviour. This scene too reminded me of an almost similar incident from the trip though the situations were slightly different & gifted me a very good friend, so another memory relived. Also I liked how she on her own started noticing the changing equations between Ayush-Anya... though they're quite subtle & gradual but well portrayed, mainly observed by the one who I wanted to notice these - our Geet madam. Its normal for friends to hold hands. Yes indeed it is. But the varying warmth that radiates & that one feels shows the intensity & depth of the bond & whether it has progressed to more than friendship. So much so that even the person observing the hold feels the change even if it is for a moment.

Actions speak louder than words and for an observant person like Geet, it would've been out of character not to notice the two things - Maan's chivalry and AA's bonding.

See I knew it, I so knew it that Jess' presence would be for the betterment. Her arrival has certainly opened many opportunities for M-G to come closer. Though not very serious but something is always better than nothing. Jess hasn't been the jealousy inducing factor but has been the bonding together & causing some close moments to be shared factor for our tortoises here. The touches, eye locks, comfort, smiles exchanged, ease in conversation ... Everything was slowly progressive & most credit of all this goes to Jess as she was the catalyst to lead to such moments ...

Since Geet hasn't even thought about how she feels for Maan or if she feels anything at all for him, jealousy on her part wasn't possible. But certainly, her help extension to a friend was and that she did - which has brought her closer to Maan, all thanks to Jess. 😳

Their night walk was another one of those special moments of the trip that will add to their sharing of comfort & something related just to the two of them. Loved the special mention about the comfort both experienced sharing even the silence among them. I am a big time fan of comforting silence among couples. It just means so simple yet very deep & beautiful. It shows the level of bonding two people have reached in their relation, and it's just not related to couple in love but any relation be it even friends. Again the chipkali related talks led them ultimately to know the persona of the individual that they are looking for in their life partners. Geet came to know of his description of his dream girl. Also the indirect confession form Mr. Oh- so- slow was such that it brought a big smile to my face. His frank talks & descriptions hit the nail yet were within the bounds of whatever they both share for now.

Now writing that part was a little tricky for me. But I'm relieved to know that I did get the message across! 😊

Again the emotional rollercoaster experience between M-G during the ride on the ferries wheel was again an added bonus due to Jess chipkali. The hand holding, firm & soft hold though somewhat awkward felt initially by Geet but eventually let it be as she never doubted Maan.

Well, not only her, I never doubted Maan! I'm sure everybody here has the image of a shareef baccha that Maan is! 😆

Anaya's concern while Ayush went supposedly missing & later covering her pain & worry in the mask of Anger was so picture perfect for me. A-A quite a progress must say. Also through all of this some of Geet's doubts are gaining clarity. Enjoyed it too. It was like ek teer aur do shikar.

Progress indeed!

The lift scene caused me to recollect & remember all those scenes from the serial. I'm telling you this part was so much on memories for me. Hayee the famous Chup bilkul chup... *My dil goes hmmm hmmm ...* . Their close moments, the contact & touches was so romantic (I know some of them wanted more form you here, but I felt it too good a progress at this stage ... something better than nothing. ) Her relaxing & easing by his presence, also being assured that she can face this if he is beside her, I so loved it all.

Oh you noticed the 'chup bilkul chup'! I love those words too and so I shamelessly added them here. But I'm happy to know that you're satisfied with their progress. 😊

Ayush's entertainment Bhooton ke style mein was so hilarious. He is a unique & antique piece & one should have people like him in your gang. I too have one of my friends very much like him. The fall & hold between M-G again a memory straight from the serial. The horse ride again reminded me of my trip. But with a small twist to it. It was a camel ride through the desert for me & my friend, and it was our camel who turned out to be the slowest of all, so where others took 25 minutes to reach the destination we took 1 hour to reach. At the end of it we were completely gone. Sorry if I'm so much so harping on my memories. But this whole part was a memory walk for me.

Yes, straight from the serial, and I'm not sorry about it! 😳

Why are you saying sorry for sharing this with me?! Ask me, and more than half of this chapter has come right from my personal experiences! 😊

Geet's answer to Jess' taunt was so good. I was feeling like to come there & give a pat on the back to Geet & kick *Maggie style* to Jess. Again Jess madam just became a channel for Maan to confirm what he knows of Geet's strengths.

How will Maggie react to simeone else kicking Jess in her style? 😆

Ayush finally did confess, but now Anya's holding back. But good progress & I hope they will certainly sort this issue completely. The thing that I adored the most here was Ayush not backing down even after it all. He still was by Anya's side. His pursuing will surely & hopefully reward him. I wanted to sing for him here *banda yeh bindaas hai*

For Ayush's himmat I'll say, persistence pays off! 😃

The return bus ride was so romantic & cute. The Kodak moment at the end was the cherry on the cake for me. Loved it all.

Haaye! 😳

The call I guess is something in relation to Ranbir.

You'll see. 😃

I just want to thank you my dear behna for making me relive all my precious & treasured memories with my friends & making it all the more nostalgic for me. Loved this part.

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Thank you dear behna for sharing your memories with me! 🤗

Originally posted by: mayyo13

And that is my exact motto to evade all of your teasing and not-so-nice demands! 😆