SS- Suicide- part 2,3,4,5,6,7,8 page 5,10,12,16,18,21,25 updated(30/04

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1

Standing over the bridge geet was cribbing to her babaji -" babaji , mai ab is duniya me aur nahi rah sakti. Main aa rahi hu aapke paas bas yaha se niche kudna hai phir sidhe upar.

Geet once again glanced in river and started her self talk-" Soch kya rahi hai geet kud ja. Maana uchai thodi jyada hai aur tere ko dar lag raha hai par ab tu piche nahi hategi"

She was going to jump in river, so she glanced sideway, no one was there to stop her. So making her mind she jumped in river.

Maan was swimming in river in his own world of thought,he daily practiced swimming here in night, for the college competition which will be held after a week . Suddenly he felt disturbance in water.

Geet has closed her eyes tight while jumping in anticipation of death. After hitting surface of water she drowned inside but suddenly felt she have sat on something.

Maan felt his back had been hit hardly. He was already swimming inside water surface stopping his breath. But sudden hit on his back moved him further inside. Somebody have sat on his back with legs on both side of his body.
He quickly moved on surface of water.

Geet first felt the thing on which she sat started to drown inside. Then stopped and started to started to move out.

As she felt she came outside water. She opened her one eye then another. She noticed that she was going toward shore of river sitting on a man's back.

Maan quickly reached shore in mood of a hostile meeting.

Geet felt him coming in standing position as they reached near shore.
So she jumped from his back into water and standing on ground she came out.

Maan looked at her with anger filled eyes. But geet was not looking in his eyes. Maan followed her gaze which was on his chest and abs. She was openly drooling on him.

Maan moved his hand infront of her face but no response. Then, he just closed her eye with his hand. But geet, just moved his hand with her soft hand and continued her drooling session.

Then he just grabbed her arm and shook her hard. This bring her out of trance. She looked in his anger filled eyes and then whole turn of events crossed her mind.

"You idiot, duffer, stupid. Why did you saved me? Mere saare suscide plan ko barbaad kar diya."geet said in anger and then looked upward she said-"babaji maaf karna, aane me thodi late ho jaungi. Par aap to jaante hain na main late nahi hoti.. Bas iss baar iss duffer k karan late ho jaungi."

Maan watching her talking nonsense just loosed patience and roared-"ENOUGH..., ek to tum mere pith par kudi aur ab tum mujhe hi doshi thahra rahi ho. Marna hi tha to kahi aur kudti. Meri kamar kyu todi."

"haan haan, jaise ki mujhe pata tha ki aap waha dubki lagaye baithe hai."

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Sphinx thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its hilarious... marne jaa rahi hai par drooling karna nahi chodti... LOL
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its ajust awesome start...OMG geeet jump and directly fall on maan...😆...
amazing concept and story continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg omg 🤣 🤣 🤣
"bas yaha se niche kudna hai phir sidhe upar."...superb dialogue 😆
waah kya nishana tha geet ka 🤣...
n a moment ago she attempted suicide n nxt moment was drooling over him 😲 🤣...sharam haya naam ki koi cheez hi nahi iss duniya mein😆
"Marna hi tha to kahi aur kudti. Meri kamar kyu todi."
"haan haan, jaise ki mujhe pata tha ki aap waha dubki lagaye baithe hai."...🤣 🤣
hilarious dialogues
bechare ki kamar tod di ...ab uske swimming competition ka kya hoga😆
luvd it😛



Edited by Diva7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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🤣 amazing update.. 🤣
waiting for next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sphinx

its hilarious... marne jaa rahi hai par drooling karna nahi chodti... LOL




Bechari geet ka dil nahi maan raha to kya kare
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Edited by amks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanam1234u

its ajust awesome start...OMG geeet jump and directly fall on maan...😆...
amazing concept and story continue...




Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG Its so hilarious!!!!!
"Ek toh tum mujhpar kudi aur ab mujhe hi doshi thahra rahi ho.Marna hi tha toh kahi aur kudti meri kamar kyu todi."

Oh God I jst cant stop laughing.

It was fantastic.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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a very sweet start
please cont soon
AKSashadow thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Diva7

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">omg omg 🤣 🤣 🤣</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">"bas yaha se niche kudna hai phir sidhe upar."...superb dialogue 😆</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">waah kya nishana tha geet ka 🤣...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">n a moment ago she attempted suicide n nxt moment was drooling over him 😲 🤣...sharam haya naam ki koi cheez hi nahi iss duniya mein😆</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">"Marna hi tha to kahi aur kudti. Meri kamar kyu todi."</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">"haan haan, jaise ki mujhe pata tha ki aap waha dubki lagaye baithe hai."...🤣 🤣</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">hilarious dialogues </font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">bechare ki kamar tod di ...ab uske swimming competition ka kya hoga😆</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">luvd it😛</font>







Thanks for loving it and all your comments.
Aur maan ka to wohi hoga jo manjure khuda hoga.

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