PYAAR AUR JUNOON! Chapter 3 on pg9

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This is the story of an obsessed lover. A guy who was so obsessed for his childhood friend that in order to beget his love, he claimed her freedom. He went so far as to cross all the limits in order to prove his love, the extent of his madness. He thought he could conquer the entire universe. He thought that he was invincible. But then, a day came in his life. A new morning dawned which made him realize that he too, was a human being like everyone else and he too, had to live as every other creature of the earth.

Guys, me planning to give all of you a new dose of entertainment regarding our dear maaneet. This is my first time and first attempt at writing something in this forum, so I'll need all the help and co-operation you can give me. So, please read this little intro and let me know your opinions. It'll help me to understand what exactly needs to be done regarding this story.

I'll await your replies.

my regards,

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Part 1 pg3


Part 2 pg5








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Posted: 12 years ago
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go ahead.. wud love to read story on maneet...👍🏼
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please do go ahead with it
would love to hear from from you on this
waise is it maan who is the obsessed lover
and geet the person he is obsessed about right
course it is this is maneet fic na me can be so stupid somethimes
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looks likes interesting
congrats dear
waiting for the first part
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Hello!

me treasuretrowel just joined india-forums yesterday evening.

me want to know more about india-forums.

And another thing, can i get reader/writer support for myself if i begin any stories out here?

How shall i know whether my work is liked or not?

I will wait for replies,

hope to receive them soon,

regards,

treasuretrowel
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ye Maneet ka magic dekho,
kitne writers milrahe hai!
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Intresting dear :)
plzz continue soon
loved to read
congrats on new ff
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very interesting...

I am sending buddy request...

please send me pm when u update...
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Originally posted by: treasuretrowel

Hello!


me treasuretrowel just joined india-forums yesterday evening.

me want to know more about india-forums.

And another thing, can i get reader/writer support for myself if i begin any stories out here?

How shall i know whether my work is liked or not?

I will wait for replies,

hope to receive them soon,

regards,

treasuretrowel


hey treasuretrowel...

u will get i am sure all support from Maaneet FF writers and readers here...

u can get idea about whether ur work is liked or not from the no. of likes u get in ur updates...and how many people comment in ur work...u can very well see that so many people respond to ur first post with even get pm from u...it is more than many FFs get...so continue with ur story...

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Pyaar aur Junoon! Part 1 Updated



1) The News!




It was a dark night. Inside the large palace in Marlow , on the third

floor was a large and spacious bedroom. A large crystal chandelier

had been suspended from its ceiling, which glowed with dim lights. It was

held in place by four strong metal chains which clanked slightly as the

breeze slowly blew from the large open window. Right in the middle of

this room was placed a large circular bed. It was covered in expensive

pillows, little cushions and life-size large duvets along with warm

blankets. There was peace and quiet inside this room, the only

disturbance being soft, slow whimpers which were caused because the

little princess sitting on the bed resting her back upon the cushioned

headboard of the bed. She was a delicate, sweet and beautiful creature.

Creamy white complexion, warm and endearing purple eyes with a long

curvaceous body and slender neck defined the innocent beauty. She

had all the luxury and comfort in the world you could think of, the

most loving family, friends who admired and loved her more than their

life and a handsome male companion whom she loved with all her life.

Her life had been perfect until now, but today she had seen some of the

worse things and felt the cruel play of destiny. As she remembered the

events that had occurred few hours ago, her lips quivered and eyes

filled with tears not of sadness and longing, but pure terror and

helplessness. The poor soul was so baffled and confused that drowned

in her thoughts, she did not even care to glance all around her sleeping

chamber. Though it was a magnificent room, but there was something

about it's internal appearance that would send a chill down your spine.

Because, upon the walls and ceiling, were carved and etched hundreds

of eyes! Big and small, horizontal and vertical, even in diagonal

directions as per the orders of the person supervising the arrangements.

He was a man of terms and actions, a person of lesser words, actually.

He loved his family intensely, in fact he loved them to the height of

madness.


As a tear slowly trickled down the cheeks of Princess Geet, she blinked

and happened to glance around the room. It was then that she saw those

eyes, hundreds of them, staring at her from all directions. It seemed

that the walls and every single thing inside the chamber were glaring

at her, making her face her worst fears.


Terrified, geet turned her head to the left and the door opened. It was

slightly dark in the corridor outside, so she could not recognize the

person who was slowly coming towards her, approaching her bed, and

was trying to get close to her. She was about to scream her lungs out

when the lights were switched on, and closing her eyes to adjust to the

sudden brightness, the girl blinked and opened them again. It was none

other than Prince Maan Singh Khurana, her best mate, her soul

companion and childhood friend. Maan slowly walked forward and

nearing the bed, sat down beside his princess. Geet was puzzled and

tried to say something, but unable to think of any words, shook her

little head and closed her mouth again.


Maan shifted near geet and leaning comfortably on the cushioned back

of the bed, put an arm around her petite little waist. Geet flinched with

the unexpected contact, but did not say anything. She was too terrified

to speak her mind out. Finally, gathering some courage, she softly

cleared her throat and looking at maan straight in the eyes, said:


"Maan, tum humein yahaan kyon lekar aaye? Woh guards aur police Dev

ko kahaan le ke gaye?" All the while, geet was looking at him intently to

see and observe his reactions. To her surprise, maan simply smiled, and

caressing her soft cheek lovingly with his fingers, leaned a little

forward and whispered huskily,

"Jaan, tumhe ab fikar karne ki koi zarurat nahi hain. Maine us shaitaan

ko humaare beech mein se hataa diya hain. Police ne us dev ko hawalaat

mein daal diya hain. Tumhari tabiyat kharaab ho gayi thi, is liye tum ko

sedative diya thaa. Tum abhi sirf aaram kar lo. Aur do din tak apne aap

ko zara bhi stress mat karna. Kyon ki, narso (the day after day after

tomorrow) hum dono ki shaadi hone waali hain. Uski taiyariyo ke liye

tab tumhe jaldi uthna padega. Hai na shona? Is liye, ( he leaned a little

more forward and kissed geet's juicy lips) tum abhi so jao. Main yahi

rahunga, tumhare paas. Kahin nahi jaunga main tumhe chod kar."


As maan smiled after finishing his words, geet's eyes widened in fear.

So, he had actually carried his threat out and handed dev over to the

police. But she could not argue with him. He was her best friend, and

wished to keep he safe, she knew that. But today, he had put her love

in danger. This thing itself was so confusing for geet that she could

not understand anything that was happening around her. Sighing in

defeat, the little princess lay down on the bed, and pulling the pillow

properly under her head, closed her tired eyes. Maan smiled at the

little tired frown upon her forehead and switched off the lights.

After closing the door securely, he climbed on the bed and laying

down beside his little sweetie-pie, leaned over her face and pecked her

forehead lovingly. Then he too closed his eyes and fell asleep with a

wide and contended smile playing on his lips.


So people, how do you like this one? Please read and give me comments.

Do not forget to hit like button. Me will await your replies.

regards,

treasuretrowel



Me just thought of something! I've written here that maan got eyes carved all over geet's bedroom walls and ceiling.

What do you guys think his gesture signifies?

Is maan a positive character here or a negative one?

Do you think he loves geet truly to the height of insane possessiveness?

Please tell me the meaning of this unusual attitude of maan in this story.

Send me all of your opinions and guesses. If you guys interpret the meaning accurately, next time, I'll give you all two updates in succession.

Regards,

treasuretrowel













Edited by treasuretrowel - 12 years ago

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