MG U R MINE pt 13 pg 45 jan 16 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
all d 3 parts were nice...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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~~U R MINE~~

part 4


a fire was there and she being around just makes it impossible for him.. No wonder his wife was no less than a bomb that can actually make anyone to explode either by her anger or herself.. Maan had gulped already many glasses of wine and even scotch but nothing seems to be effective though they have been been married for almost three months know but nothing seems to be normal between them .. Maan chuckled with his own thought

when was it normal maan neither your wedding nor she gosh i have married a total drama queen
maan looked at her coming towards him and he knew what will be the matter he quickly keep his drink down and looked at her
what

he directly asked her
i am going home i cant keep myself starving anymore

he looked at her like she was an alien

so what r u saying go and have ur dinner or u want me to feed u

in ur dreams
i am going she stamped her foot but he caught her from going ..

wait for a second

maan quickly took his leave from his clients and dragged her with him he knew that without her he couldnt spend a minute and moreover he didnt want anyone to have any doubt on them since they r newly weds..

geet looked at him and quickly asked him you could have stayed

yes offcourse and would give the golden oppurtunity to media to know that MAAN SINGH KHURANA is not living a HAPPY MARRIED LIFE r u mad or what geet

geet gave him an angry stare so why did u marry me mene toh nahi kaha tha

maan looked at her like wanting to kill her how can she say this when she knows that both of them r equally at fault.. they both are saved by marrying each other...

mana bhi toh nahi kiy ana..warna main kisi aur ko dhoond leta...

geet frowned at him... she murmered.."kisi au ko dhoond leta jaise ise koi aur mil jaati...
she thought for a second...
waise geet ise toh mil jaati..par tu kya karti papa teri shaadi pata nahi kis se karwa dete..abhi atleast you are safe... ye tujhe kuch nahi kar sakta..infact kuch kar bhi nahi sakta... mom dad hai na meri side...


maan looked at her... he knew she was again either talking to her babaji or lost in her self thoughts.. this is the thing he never understood...

he stopped the car in a jerk making her fall sideways.. she directly clutched his wrist piercing her nails in his hand...

jangli billi kahin ki... ye kya kiya...

geet scowled.and left his hand...

she quickly went inside leaving him...maan gave the keys to the gate keeper and followed her...

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waiting for readers review


part 5 page 10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/77851936


Edited by maanlovesgeet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part 4😊
but short one dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: happydays30

nice part 4😊

but short one dear😊




completed that part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yeh kya reason i had thought tat they will be a big issue like forced her to get marry and all. but this is all childhood fight and still they are fighting like this.. ek slap hi tho tha geet u could slap him again na...

funny hain dono abhi tak bache hain tat they fight

but its nice to see them fighting😊
Edited by sdlife19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sdlife19

yeh kya reason

funny hain dono abhi tak bache hain tat they fight

but its nice to see them




okk so u didnt like the reason actually all ffs in this forum are on some grave reason that's why i tried to make it light
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: maanlovesgeet




okk so u didnt like the reason actually all ffs in this forum are on some grave reason that's why i tried to make it light



check the comment dear have edited it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sdlife19

yeh kya reason i had thought tat they will be a big issue like forced her to get marry and all. but this is all childhood fight and still they are fighting like this.. ek slap hi tho tha geet u could slap him again na...

funny hain dono abhi tak bache hain tat they fight

but its nice to see them fighting😊

hehe thx well geet payback pakka legi[;-)]
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
hi dear
while reading your update
few lines come in mind

they are totally bakwaas
that's why
me asking before pposting them
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

hi dear

while reading your update
few lines come in mind

they are totally bakwaas
that's why
me asking before pposting them



plzzz do post even my update is same...😆

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