Sargoshiyan-Whisper of Love - THREAD 3 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Hey Sam,
How r u,updated after a long time.


The update was great and fun loving.
The way Geet mingled with's Maan's family.

And then the way Geek woke Maan up,awesome.

Loved it.


im fine dear, fit and perfect 😃
how's u?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zaidi98

finally updated...

amazing cutiee update...
geet gel up g8 wid maan's family...
hahahha pinky describtion about maan's family...🤣
love maaneet moments...
w8ng eagerly 4 next..


tu itni khush kyun hoying???
tere ko khane ki yaad agayi thi kya update read karke? 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

amazing update..love the way geet gel up with maan and his family...they way the wake up maan was too cool😆😆😆 hope ur hand have heal and tks for the update..cant wait for next update..pls cont soon..


yes dear, my hand is perfectly fine now 😊 thnx
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neha5058

hey dear...
hows u?
now thinking to start reading it jahan se chhoda tha wahin se... kal ko reply karungi... hopefully read kar lu...


i remember u to tell me that im copying muskan di's ff
still u wanna read this??? 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dipti_Sam


tu itni khush kyun hoying???
tere ko khane ki yaad agayi thi kya update read karke? 😆


hahahha.. mjheee pinkey k describtion maii hasii arhii haii.. asa laging khurrana resturant k menu card parh rhii ho...😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 36


Maan: Geet, dare you change my name

Geet: dare you threat me or else I will call you as khambe

Maan: what? Geet from where you get all these names?

Geet: from my intelligent brain, you know?

Geet replied while giving him a wide cheeky smile

Maan: mere pe use maatkaro, pleaseee

Geet: then don't call me witch

Maan: ohk done, but don't throw water on me again

Geet: I will do it, sorry can't help on it. But tum mujhe witch boli to you will come to know your more new names

Geet said while winking at him

Geet: now come downstairs, I'm going to Daadi ma

Saying so Geet left the room, while maan looking at her retreating figure with a puppy look

Maan: don't know how many colorful dendrites and axon she has inside her brain

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Maan came down and heard laughing sounds are coming from kitchen. He want there and saw Daadi ma and Geet totally engrossed in cooking and in between they are taunting someone and laughing together.

WAIT A MINUTE

She's actually my daadina, right?

Maan thought to himself

No she can't, I mean I was her one and only laadla whom she used to take the side blindly. Then why on earth she's actually mimicking my dialogues what I always give dad when he's after me to join family business

Grrr ye ladki mere jeena mushkil hi nehi namumkin kar degi

Here both the ladies are totally busy with their own new hobby.

Daadi is mimicking Maan's dialogue which was actually from the father son convo. And geet started to laugh just after each dialogue.


And later on would crack some joke about that convo, and both the ladies started to laugh together

Maan: May I join with you ladies? Zara maibhi to sunu ki aisa konsa hansne wali baate chal rahi hai?

Maan asked while standing near the kitchen door

Geet: Chi maan, don't you learn to knock before coming anywhere. We ladies need some privacy, you know?

Geet said to Maan mockingly, while giving him a cunning smile.

Maan felt like cutting her in billion opsss trillion pieces, but can't even think of trying this right now, that too in front of daadi

Maan: Ye mera ghar hai, samjhi?And by the way this is kitchen, not the ladies kitty party place.

Maan said almost in bursting mood. Don't know why this geet was behind him in every dialogue

Maan behave, Daadi said to Maan

Maan: Kya Daadi, aab maine kya kia? She is continuously poking me, and aap ho ki mera koi parwa hi nehi

Daadi ma smile to see Maan talking like that

Daadi ma: Go and sit in the table, nakul already served the foods, and we are coming with the desert

Daadi said Maan as she's almost done in making the desert

Maan: But daadi

Maan tried to say something, but interrupted by geet

Geet: Daadi, may be Maan want to help us, come na maan

Said geet while giving her famous wicked grin to maan

Maan: Chup, mai ja rahi hoon

Maan said and almost ran away from the kitchen and sat on the table. Geet looked at Daadi ma and gave a puzzled look

Geet: Daadi ye koi ghost dekhi kya?

Daadi ma laughed to see her face

Daadi ma: Maan hate cooking, he don't even make one cup coffee for himself

Daadi told Geet

Geet: Maan don't even know how to make one cup of coffee?

Geet said astonished as Arjun bhai almost knew all types of cooking and used to help her bhabi when there were many guests in their house

Daadi ma: Nehi beta, he knows much about cooking, when he and Adi used to go for camping, both make all their foods there. And you know he's good in making cake, Natasha ki birthday mai surprise di thiaap ne mom ko

Daadi told her how maan gave surprise to his mother

Geet: Then he's surely a kam chor

Geet said while making a face

Both again started to laugh. According to daadi, geet is an unique piece who can make anyone smile even in worst mood.

And all the family members already love geet for her innocence, even anukalp used to enjoy geet's company, which is quite a surprise thing for others

Their laughing moment came to an full stop to hear maan shouting for food.

Geet: Chaliye daadi, warna bhukkad ko itna bhug lagega ki wo table bhi khalega

Geet said smiling while hearing maan shouting for foods

Daadi ma: Chaliye beta, let's have our lunch, it's already late

Both went to the dining room and joined maan to have their lunch

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Geet and Maan came back to Maan's room after the lunch, whereas Daadi ma went to take a small nap after completing her lunch.

Geet: Maan you actually sleep from this long time?

Geet asked maan all of a sudden

Maan: Aree nehi, I was awake the whole night with a song, that's why was late today?

Maan replied to Geet while looking through the files and came back to geet who was sitting on his bed.

Maan: Ye dekho, for this I was all awake yesterday night

Geet took the paper and read some lines of the song

Geet: All love of mine, with a song and a whine. You'reharsh and divine, like truths and a lie.

Ermmm, ye kaisi song hai maan?

She again started to read the lines further

Geet: But the tale ends not here, I have nothing to fear. For my love is hell of giving and hold on.

Maan ye kaisi song hai?

Geet asked while making a face

Maan: Kyun kya burayi hai iss mai? And by the way its not finished yet, let me complete first, then comment maar na, samjhi?

Maan said all hyper.

Geet: Oyee why are you getting so hyper? I just said what I felt like?

Geet tried to give her point of view

Maan: Rehne do, I know. Later on you will like it, waise bhi I still remember your that dreams?

Maan said to geet while smirking

Geet: Which dream?

Geet asked while knotting her brows, she looked at maan all confused to see him smirking

Maan: Wohi, mujh per latto hoke whatever dialogues you used and planned to marry me

Maan replied while giving her his most wicked grin, and then bow down to save his head from the pillow that geet threw on him

Geet: If I knew that you look like this, then I would never say all that, so stop dreaming, samjhi?

and correction, tumpe nehi latto thi, tumhari song pe thi, but aab ye dekhke ye lagraha hai ki im not gonna listen your upcoming songs

Geet said while trying hard to control her blushing

Maan: song ki baad choro? ye batao ki mujh mai kya burayi hai?

Maan asked while checking himself in the mirror

Geet: You are not my type you know? Well actually not anywhere near my dream boy

Geet said to maan showing so much attitudes

Maan: Accha tell me about your that dream boy. I mean what you want to see in your future life partner

Maan asked while sitting next to Geet

Geet: He will be totally unique, you know? That's why he will be my prince charming

Geet said as a matter of fact

Maan: Haan to tell me na, what quality you want to see in your prince charming

Maan asked totally in a serious tone. He himself didn't know why he felt this much jealous to see geet talking about someone else so dreamingly, though maan knew it's just her imagination, still maan felt something not right. Somewhere he didn't want geet to talk about someone else

PRECAP: what will be Geet's description about her prince charming? Will it match with Maan, or someone will come in between their life?


chalo chalo, i need some unique funny characteristics that Geet will tell to Maan about her prince charming, something childish, send me some if you can, itna to help karhi sakte ho na tum sab??? (PM me if u hav any idea in ur mind)


PART 36 ON BLOG

Edited by Dipti_Sam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yupppiieee me 1sttt...🥳🥳
cuteee sweet updatee...
uff ye geet mere maanu ko kitna tease n tang krtii haii...
daddii n geet ne 1 team bana liii n mera maan alone reh gaya...
bad bad...
ufff geet ko maan k saong pasnd nhii aya.. kitna nakre krtiii haii..
OMG geet ko MSK dream maan nhii lagta...😲😲
geet need doc...
w8ng eagerlyyy 4 next..
Edited by zaidi98 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amaizing one😛 but short 😔 and abt characteristicshmmm sochna paree ga 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

tremendous update , loved reading it so much

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