MG~OS~ HATE STORY UPDATED march 9th!!! - Page 6

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet

Wow!

Wat a story.



Lovd 1st part...

I too wonder if sameera lovd maan,y didnt she try to contact him????


Maan ka badlaa poora hua...

Geet bhi pistol le ke ghoom rhi hai...


Nw wat???


Conti soon


bt y didnt u pmed dis story????


Also i lov ALL ur maaneet ffs...
Fan of ur ideas n writings...


Jus giv happy maaneet ending to all ffs...

Originally posted by: ns.1

wow!! fantastic start...i am loving this concept as its different...maaneet are both grey and bold...precap is very interesting yet scary...what will geet do and what will be maan's reaction...just can't wait...continue soon...😛

HATE STORY

read at ur own risk dont be mad at me with the content!!!

this is a complete update so already who read the half part scroll down for the remaining part and then i used geetika for the song kisi writer ne use kiya tha that name?? do let me know and tell me if they have a problem ill remove

this is my story dedicated to shoba di as she said she will be back now i love you di be strong

I have been hurt but for today i will give my suprise double long update but than i dont know when i will come back wit love and hate. I will keep it on hold for few days and try to complete my other.

this is the message she gave to all the readers

TICH this one is for you too!!!

She checked herself in the mirror uff!! Saree has never been her forte to hell with the Indian dresses. Still she is wearing it just for the guy she fell in love with Maan singh khurana, the brother of her sister's to-be-husband. Kya relation hai!! Geet always hated wearing salwars, unlike her sister roop. Tonight is the marriage of roop and dev, she had to look special. Geet was fixing the transparent black saree which showed her abdomen clearly and then the blouse she wore with mega sleeves of red color was adding to her beauty. She turned to fix the dori of her back when rano entered the room, her eyes popped out seeing this avatar of geet. She couldn't believe that her gudiya was wearing a saree but the color of it struck her mind making her jaw fall... geet!!! tu aur saree mein?? lekin yeh kya rang pehen rakha hai tumne?? Kala rang functions ke liye acha nahi hota, agar pehenna hi tha toh mujhse ek baar pooch toh leti?? she screamed opening the cupboard to look for a decent dress.

Mama black is sexy you don't understand to hell with your beliefs she said feeling happy for finally managing to tie the dori by herself... Beta aise nahi jaate samajhne ki koshish kar kisi aur din pehenlena par aaj nahi ...arrr mama stop it for god sake mujhe nahi sunna yeh sab mujhe paayal chahiye aur haan woh I cant find my waistband which I bought yesterday, geet began to search for them while rano sighed, geet beta our car will start for the mandap{marriage venue} in an hour jaldi aaja warna tujhe yehi rehna padega aur teri di ki shaadi ho jayegi saying this in anger she left the room knowing her daughter will not listen whatever it may be. After sometime rahul found geet probing for something in the room eagerly, he just could not take his eyes off her she looked out of the world but quickly he gathered himself and opened his mouth to speak ...geet rano aunty is calling you come down, shaadi ki gaadi aa chuki hai

Geet let out a triumph finally taking out the payal and waistband, rahul's face only irritated her. He looked like a joker that's what she felt every time her sight falls on him, she hates him for no reason while he had been an admirer of her always... tum please yaha se jaoge?? Ill come down mujhe kaam hai she said looking at the phone which buzzed with a message, she opened the message but rano again came back ... yeh kya aaj kal tu phone nahi chodti?? Yeh saree utaar ke aa jaldi neeche gaadi chali jayegi she made big eyes with irritation, the message rang in her head with the shameless comment ever... I am going to rip your saree tonight will be waiting for you jaldi aana Love, maan!!

Uski jaroorat nahi hai main khud utaardongi geet sent a reply to that ... mama aajaongi please just go now geet said getting desperate, feeling sorry for keeping her love to wait since a long time.

Maan and geet had been friends since an year!! It was the time when roop and dev's marriage got fixed but as roop wanted to finish her studies their parents got them engaged and tonight was their most awaited night!!! Especially for maan!! Maan and geet's friendship started on the day of engagement of dev and roop, and for geet she fell in love with maan the moment she saw him and decided to get him by hook or by crook. And she used to make reasons to talk to him as he was her to-be-jiju's little brother. But maan had always treated geet just as a friend, in six months time she came to know about maan being in love with sameera. Her heart broke into millions of pieces, she is not a looser she decided to get him not matter what. After all her friends admire her saying she is a beauty with brain!! A deadly combination which every man aspires to have in his partner. Its true no logics work out when you fall in love, everything is fair in love and war!! That's what she believed in. After spying on sameera for one month she understood that she was a muslim and her father is very particular about the religion. He never entertained the topic called love, taking this as advantage geet played her card and revealed the whole truth to him. Maan wanted to talk to sameera's father but before he could do it sameera was forcefully married to a rich man!! A muslim!! unable to go against her father. Maan sulked in depression for a month and then he came to know of the truth... It was geet who did all that, and then the other shocking fact he came across was she loved him and to get him geet had intentionally informed everything to sameera's father!! That had actually broke him, the person whom he treated to be a friend cheated on him just to get him!! He decided she will pay for this, she will have to.

WARNING: strictly 18+!!!

Uski jaroorat nahi hai main khud utaardongi maan smirked looking at the message. He decorated the whole room with flowers and dimmed the lights, the fragrance of jasmine filled his nostrils with naughty thoughts. The bed looked perfect with white satin cloth, he lowered the ac and took out his phone to call geet once again. But then the door got knocked, he knew who it was!! His lips curved into evil smile and then he ajared the door. Geet came inside, turned around to close it. Her hand raised upwards for the knob, with all her hair placed on one side showing maan her bare back. She was getting weak with the thoughts making her loose the control and then maan's hand covered hers. Both of them raised the knob locking the door finally. Geet hit maan on his stomach with her elbow making him to jump back, she giggled facing him......itni jaldi bhi kya hai Mr. Khurana?? She said placing her hands on the waist showing maan her slim hips and abdomen, the soft skin of her teased him to touch it. He stared at her from top to bottom drinking in her beauty. The ounce of control too left him seeing geet pulling away the saree from her body, she threw it on maan's face... Bola tha na main khud utaardongi?? She said while He sat down on the bed running his hand on the rose petals on the bed. Geet came around and sat behind him plastering her back to his back throwing her hair on his shoulder. She moved a bit but maan held her hair and tugged her closer. And then she pushed maan on the bed hovering him, and took his lips into her holding him through his hair. She bit his lower lip and sucked it harshly, maan's hands went around her waist sending jitters to her whole form. Geet forced his hands away from her body and broke the kiss... you will not touch me until I want you to she said to kiss him again, their breaths mingled, with their lips fusing into each other completely. His tongue entered her mouth to taste her. In their relation of five months they did kiss, they did cross some limits but somewhere maan wanted to be physical with geet on the marriage day of dev and roop. He wanted geet to know that he never loved her, and if one truly loves, such relation would happen only after marriage. His thoughts broke when geet ripped his shirt off and stroked her hand all over his chest, feeling his abs, down till his abdomen further down to his hardened manhood. That was it he flipped her and tore the blouse literally into pieces followed by her bra. He skimmed his lips on her chin and teased her, maan she moaned... this was what you were doing to me its just a start geet he said desperately... maan hume shaadi mein jaana bhi hai yaad toh hai na tumhe?? Make it fast please she finished quickly looking at the time

Marriage is at late night hai na geet?? uske liye abhi bhi bohut time hai by then we will reach don't worry, his lips claimed hers... you have got plump lips misti I feel like eating them he said in middle of the kiss, something which geet did not like. Ever since their relation started maan would always admire her body parts in detail after their romantic moments. Its not that he shouldn't but its just that he speaks too much!! His bulge pressed against her, geet gasped as her V***** throbbed with need. His tongue missiled inside her mouth not getting enough of her, devouring her, sucking her. His teeth came down to break her waistband and throw it away. Her payal chummed giving pleasant sound.

His hand travelled down to lift the skirt, Maan she whispered feeling his finger entering her core. She curled her toes holding onto the sheets of the bed crushing the rose petals with the white satin sheet, spreading the fragrance of roses in the room... you are so wet he mewled biting geet's earlobe, withdrawing the finger and then replacing again going deeper and deeper. She lifted her hips, understanding her feeling maan pulled the skirt down. She shivered with the cold air in the room touching her V*****

His hand came up to knead her breasts harshly making geet to scream... you are so hot he said again making geet to open her eyes. He was stimulated to no extent, as his tongue darted inside her private part, but then he just couldn't hold himself back anymore, geet I want to ride it he spelled his raw words. She surrendered to him completely, they panted heavily while he separated her legs and looked into her eyes seeking permission, she nodded for a yes and closed her hazels feeling him deep inside her. Tears rolled down her eyes with the pang, he caressed her face... I can stop geet if you, she closed maan's mouth telling her submission. He entered with another stroke this time more deeper, geet still arched herself back overcoming the pain, her hymen broke while the muscles tightened. His teeth got busy biting her nipples and suckling them still plunging inside her again and again!!

After a long time of togetherness geet's phone rang, she looked at it darling calling{my mom's name in my phone shayad tum logon ka bhi😆}...geet puttar tune gaadi miss kardi!!! Abhi abhi pata chala hai ki maan bhi nahi aaya yaha usse phone karke jaldi yaha aaja shaadi shuru hone wali hai... by the time geet finished talking to her mother and put down the phone maan dressed himself and began to go. Geet got confused seeing him walk away... kaha jaa rahe ho maan?? She asked clutching onto the spread on her body, shaadi mein jaa raha hoon its my brother's marriage and I cant miss it aajaana tumhare aashiq ke saath neeche hai he said taking his car keys

Excuse me shaadi meri di ki bhi hai aur yeh rahul ki baat kaha se aagayi?? She fumed seeing the cold side of maan ... obviously aayega geet tumne dekha nahi tumhare di aur mere bhai ko they love each other so they are getting married and about you I donno maine sirf sameera se pyar kiya jisse tumne mujhse dur kardiya and whatever I did to you now it was just a revenge tumne mujhe mere pyar se alag kiya aur maine tumhe kabhi kisi se pyar karne ka laayak nahi choda, so now go marry that rahul. Ek aur baat pyar karne wale shaadi karte hai suhaag raat nahi he kissed geet on her cheek I love you on bed, we can repeat this again you are awesome actually ek baat hai I love sameera with heart that was my relation with her and with you I said already love your body!! Saying this maan left the room while geet looked around for the saree, her blouse was torn, her waistband laid beside her broken how will she go to marriage now??

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Dekh priya geet aagayi, geet's friend said literally ogling at maan as his carved body outlined perfectly with a white shirt and jeans. He was damn hot and with his killer looks!! They would die just his one glance!! Geet literally burned in jealousy for the way they were drooling over her man!! Her maan!! She held his arm with her hand giving them glares telling them he belongs to her!! only her!! Something which maan did understand, that was the reason she snatched sameera from him!! He thought painfully, his hand automatically encircled her petite waist holding it firmly giving a squeeze. She felt he literally touched her bare skin as the knee length off shoulder frock she wore was made of satin cloth which silhouetted her curvaceous figure. Geet gulped her saliva and walked unconsciously as his hand led her towards the pub!! Today she decided to declare the relation she was sharing with maan after a long hardwork of six months. But nobody knew this relation will only give her hate probably more than she could understand.

Akash: yaar geet kaun hai yeh banda joki tere saath hai?? He asked eyeing geet lustfully, her curves omg!! He was drinking her beauty just watching her only to receive a punch from maan, mind your gaze you b****** otherwise you will have to forget you had eyeballs, that was a shock actually to all the friends of geet. Maan did that in a reflex, he smirked observing a lost geet in him. He was getting her trapped and she was falling into a pit, least did he know the strong geet who would stand upto his level be it in any condition.

Other friends came to control the situation taking away Aakash whose criminal mind already made a plan for the night. It was the valentine's day celebration and for a reason geet wanted to seduce maan, wanted to cross every limit so that it will bind him to her completely!! The insecure feelings she had about maan still loving sameera would get wiped away and for maan he too wanted what geet wanted just a difference that he yarns a revenge, he wanted this HATE STORY to end!! He was unaware that it was just not a revenge, her body always tantalized him to no extent. Never did he feel that way for sameera, he turns on just with her mere look!! He brushed off all this trails of thoughts with saying might be he lusted her!!

Both the hate birds were lost in their own thoughts when all the friends of geet surrounded them who were in a teasing mode, maan's palm on geet's waist was still busy playing with her flesh while the girls took the opportunity smiling indicating the people on the dance floor to make the announcement!!

We declare geetika singh and maan singh khurana as the valentine couple so for tonight we will get to see a confession of their love this is the challenge which geet will have to face the anchor said while all the people hooted and whistled as they had asked the anchor to read out loud. Geet was not shocked but still, pyar kiya hai toh darna kya?? She gave maan a are-u-ready look. Nobody would straggle not maan!!! not geet!! It was just a hate story

As the music started geet threw the scarf that was hung from her neck. She stood far away and called maan moving her fingers

Dhadkan Ki Ravaani Le Le
Chaahat Ki Nishani Le Le
Geetika Chaahe Tujhe
Jo Bhi Chaahe Aa Mujhse Le Le

Her open confession and the way she told maan her inner feelings only shocked him. He knew geet is bold but this was something he couldn't fathom about her. She is really a person who can go to any limit to get him!! He thought painfully

Tu Ishq Hai Tujhe Pyaar Doon Kya Do
Tera Pyaar Hoon Tujhe Pyaar Doon Kya Do
Main Bhi Yahan Tu Bhi Yahan

He grabbed geet into his arms dancing to the tune that was set, heat radiated from his whole body feeling her form into him, her curves flattened against his hard chest he involuntarily pulled her closer listening to her song which was telling the tale she was having in mind

Maan Hi Maan Harso
Geetika I Love You
O Yeah
Geetika I Love You
Love You Love You

Maan twisted geet again and again holding her waist, making her giggle. By now she understood the language of maan's every touch. They depicted the need he had for, well that was all she wanted but hearing him say the love he held for her was giving her a sense of pride. She looked at all the girls and pulled maan out from the disc waving a bye to her friends. She wanted time to spend with maan!! just her and him!! Maan walked out lost in her touch, was it really lust?? He thought again!!

Aao Aaj Baahon Mein Jhoole
Baahon Mein Jhoole
Aao Saari Duniyan Ko Bhoole
Duniyan Ko Bhoole
Madhoshi Chaayi Hai
Dekho Na Le Chala Pal Yeh Kahan
Pal Yeh Kahane
Main Bhi Yahan Tu Bhi Yahan

In no time they reached maan's farm house which he had gifted her on her birthday irony was that it was a gift when they were just good friends and now this very house will let their relation to reach the next level, she thought

Geetika I Love You
O Yeah
Geetika I Love You
Love You Love You

Geet closed the door feeling shy, Phoolon Ki Tarah Aaj Mehke she switched off the lights, Aao Na Mehke maan replied to her, she lit the candle and placed it on the table, Deewaane Hokar Behke, maan's hand ran on her bare arm and then went towards her belly Aao Na Behke, she shied away and went to get some food, Ho Masti Si Chaayi Hai Kuch Leke Aayi Hai Pyaara Pyaara, she fed maan who ate the bite and nibbled her fingers, Pyaara SamaMain Bhi Yahan Tu Bhi Yahan both of them didn't know when they finished eating or eating each other with their kisses

All the windows opened at the fresh air passed inside the room with just the moonlight spread in the room

Maan Hi Maan Harson
Geetika I Love You
O Yeah
Geetika I Love You
Love You Love You

Geet laid on the bed showing her back to maan, Aaj Tumhe Kuch Kehdoon she asked placing all her hair and lowering the straps of her dress all by herself Chupke Se Kehdo he replied kissing her bare shoulders, Aaj Tumhe De Doon she tugged herself more closer feeling his teeth biting her collarbone and his fingers playing with the straps, Chori Se De Do he whispered understanding the hidden meaning in her words Lab Yeh Kunware Hai Ab Yeh Tumhare Hain...O Meri Jaan!! Main Bhi Yahan Tu Bhi Yahan

Geetika I Love You
O Yeah
Geetika I Love You
Love You Love You

Maan just sucked her lips into his biting her lower lip, they were about to deepen the kiss when suddenly somebody barged inside

Geet came back to the normal world and began to throw everything she found in her room, that was the night when maan was stabbed by aakash in his trails to save her. It took three months time for maan to recover completely.

Maan did you risk your life for me?? Agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh main kya karti?? Geet said feeding maan with the soup crying like hell still trying to muffle them, he was always overwhelmed with this geet's side, very unlike her... mujhe kya hota geet?? dekha I am fine already?? He replied pulling geet into his lap, she happily obliged while maan burrowed his face in her neck, maan tumhari birthday aarahi hai what gift do you want?? She asked feeling him busy in her beauty, maan twirled geet to face her... I want to love you he uttered the most awaited words for geet and mostly for himself!! This life is yours maan and you don't need to ask for permission she hugged maan in acceptance.

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Geet got up to check for the pistol which her veerji had in his drawer and took out the bullets, agar tum mere nahi ho sakte toh kisi ke nahi ho sakte!! You are mine!! Only mine she placed it in her bag deciding to kill him first then herself.

@KHURANA MANSION:

Geet yeh tum kya kar rahi ho?? don't do this pammi said getting scared with the gun in her hand, you love maan right?? Usse kyun maarna chahti hai tu?? She posed an innocent question unknown as to what happened between maan and geet the other night

Oh so you want to kill me now?? Sati savitri kyun ban rahi ho ab?? You wanted all this right?? You threw yourself on me!! You seduced me, I couldn't control myself. We slept together reason for you was you wanted to bind me with you haina?? Mere liye yeh sab badla tha, it was just my hate geet he replied instigating geet further.

main koi sati savitri nahi hoon, and then geet turned to pammi saying tumhare bte ne mere saath suhaag raat manayi hai aaj isse maarke hi rahongi agar yeh mera nahi ho sakta toh kisi aur ka bhi nahi ho sakta geet held the gun aiming maan on his forehead!! Maan intently observed every move of geet. He took the opportunity when geet looked at pammi, he snatched the gun from her threw it away and pulled geet's duppatta and tied it around her hands ... Janwar ban gayi ho Ab dekhta hoon kya karogi tum tumhara suhaag raat iss baar aisa hoga ki tum yeh toh nautanki karne se pehle do baar sochogi maan said placing geet on his shoulder and took her towards his room, while pammi stopped him standing in front blocking his way not letting him to walk any further. Her eyes turned red with anger, and then next she slapped maan ... besharam utaar neeche isse how dare you?? Pammi took a broomstick to hit maan with it, making geet to land on the floor

How could you do that to geet?? Tumne aaj yeh saabit kar diya ki tum bhi ek aise parivar se ho jo khud ki khushi ke liye kisi aur ki jindagi bhi barbaad karsakte ho chahe woh jaan lena hi kyun nahi!! lekin mujhe iss baat ka afsos hai ki tumme tumhare papa ki khoon hote hue bhi unke kadam se kadam milaake nahi chal paaye, She hit maan even harder while he listened to her getting numb with the revelations she was making

You father married me going against his family knowing my dreadful past, he brought me back from death bed. He hid the truth from the world when his own friend has used me saying he loved me and left me. I tried to commit suicide, I know how a woman feels when she gets to know the truth of being used physically on the name of love. Tumne badla liya, nafrat karte ho na geet se?? kya galti ki thi usne?? Yehi na ki pagalon ke jaise usne tumse pyar kiya?? Did not you for once understand if sameera had truly loved you she would have tried to contact you!! You say she feared her dad I say she was a coward and a coward doesn't has a right to love!! Geet ne jaroor tumhare aur sameera ke baare mein uske pita{father} se kaha hoga lekin tumne yeh socha hai ki agar yehi baat geet se nahi kisi aur se sameera ke pita ko pata chalta toh?? Tab tum kisse badla lete?? Geet loved you, she trusted you, she gave herself to you and you have proved that like every other man your manhood lies between your legs. Tumhara pyar sameera ke liye sacha nahi tha agar hota toh you would have never let her go away that way getting married, neither sameera loved you if she did she would have atleast tried to tell you about her marriage its only geet who loved you aur tumne uski iss pyar ko nafrat mein badal diya MAAFI MAANG geet se she said hitting maan with her fists. Maan was too shocked to react... maafi nahi chahiye mujhe yeh toh marega aaj geet yelled tried to pry off the duppatta.

The door opened with a thud, darji and brij entered to look at the view infront of them, geet on the floor and maan was staring at her with no expressions... iss ladki ne hame kahika nahi choda sabko pata chal gaya hai kal kya gul khila rahi thi brij said taking the gun on the floor pointing it on geet, but maan was too alert that he came from behind and hit brij on his head. The gun landed on the ground....darji hame maaf kardijiye maan aur geet ki shaadi aaj raat ho hi hoga woh bhi sabke saamne poore gaon walon ke samne!! Pammi said begging darji to agree for the alliance. Why would he say no?? They were left with no other option after all.

Matter settled down, maan couldn't say anything neither could geet, he looked at geet with an known feeling filling her maang with sindoor, Geet loved you, she trusted you, she gave herself to you the words of his mother hit his mind. His fingers then tied the mangalsutr around her neck and finally the ceremony finished.

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Geet sat on the bed holding the bottle of poison in her hand it was a forced marriage right!! Why will he even try to claim her when he hates her so much!! agar maan ne mujhe nahi apnaaya toh phir wahi hoga woh marega saath hi main!! She made it in her mind. The door clicked open, geet immediately placed the bottle below the pillow. Time passed by, she felt maan sitting beside her but not saying anything but before she could speak she heard him say ... I am sorry geet!! can you give me a chance?? it was all straight, making geet to flutter her lashes in astonishment, she gulped hard she was beyond shocked to hear forget reacting... You heard me right geet maan whispered caressing her face with his fingers. She shoved his hand away and threw the red duppatta ... ab sorry bol rahe ho?? tab kya karte agar main poison khaleti toh?? She hit maan's chest with her fists... yeh poison nahi hai it's just water and I changed it kuch time pehle he winked taking the bottle out and drank it. Geet removed her saree and threw it on maan's face... lets begin she hugged maan whose hands got busy removing her blouse, giving an end to their hate story!! To love her endless!!

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