*MY INNOCENT SURRENDER* #2 pt 17pg 111 17/7/2013 - Page 4

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PART - 12

ALL students indulge in the reharsals of the play. Maan reharsing with Sam and Armaan with Ridzi. All other stidents reharsing with their own respective partners or alone. Geet and 3 other helper student are always present,coz there work is too help the main artists. Armaan knows that she felt uncomfortable,so he alwys trying to keep Geet with them. She mostly help armaan and ridzi and sucessfuly avoid talking Maan. Maan stare her while working but not having a courage to talk to her. Their reharsals going good,until when accident is not happned with Ridzi. While doing dance practise she falls down. Her ankel is twisted badly and she suffred from immence pain doc suggest her not to gave any kind of pressure on her foot and rest for atlest 1 week. All getting more worried coz play is going to take place in just 5 days. Then without her how they will manage. All students are gathered to find the sol.of this prob.

''i think hume RJ hi perform karna padega ab.'',Maan suggests.

''no way.play change nahi hoga.'',Armaan clered determinaly.

''then u tell who will play the her character?itne short time me aisa kon hai jise Hermia ki sari lines yaad hogi?'',Maan argued.

''nothing is impossible. Ridzi nai kar payegi to koi or karegi'',Armaan said confidently and stick to his view only.

''but who Armaan?'',Sam raise her doubt.

Armaan scanned all the students and confirmed shortly,''Geet''.his words are loud and clear to all.

All getting confused with his strange decision. Coz Geet nvr act on stage before this.

''Armaan main kaise kar skti hu?'',geet doubted.

''why not Geet?i know tumhe Hermia ki sari lines achhe se yad hai.'',Armaan forced her confidence.

''but main...'',Geet was not ready and before she complete her words Maan intrupts immediately.

''lines yaad rakhna or unhe stage pe bolne me fark hota hai. She nvr participated even in small plays then how can she potray this role? This is impossible Armaan.','Maan dont want her to be in play so he protest but his words neddled her most. She felt as he is tryng to let her down,which boost her to fight back.

''Armaan i will do and show all those who thinks that i m not worth of it.'',Geet said confidently while glaring Maan furiously.

Her decision is also not much liked by Sam,coz she dont even want her to be seen on the time of reharsals and now she is sharing stage with her which gave her disgust feeling. But she cant do anything for this coz all decision making power is in hands of Armaan only. Ridzi smiled and hugged her. All other stydents also support Geet and acccept Armaan's decision. Reharsals started again. Ridzi sat near music player and take charge. Both couples again start dancing coz Armaan using the idea of potraying the whole play through dance. Both couples come closer. Maan held Sam and Armaan held Geet from her soft sleek waist. Maan eyes struck on Armaan's hand on Geet's waist. Ridzi play the music and dance starts. Armaan pulled her closer. Both were glued to each other and glancing in each other's eyes,which not seemed very pleasent to Maan. He felt hell suffocated,trying his lvl best to avoid those too but cant help it. Sam do evryting to grab his attention on their dance but Maan's concentration was glued on them. Due to which ther performance suffered. Geet gave her best so she match up the with passion of Armaan,which is unbearable for him. Ridzi stop the music.

''what r u doing Maan? If u gonna perform like that on stage we definately loose.'',Ridzi scolds him in front of all. All students also supports her words as he indeed giving his worst performance.

''any problem Maan?'',Armaan asked politely,while holding Geet in his hard frame. Even he is busy in talking with Maan but he not allowed Geet to go an inch away.

''ya i m not feeling well today.'',he gave an excuse of escaping from there as he felt strange restivness and anger running in his veins,which is unexplainable.

''common Maan be a support,we dont have enough time for reharsals.'',Armaan stopped him and grabbing his attention towrds him.

Maan trying not to look at him again and again. He looks everywhere except him. Coz everytime he saw him he found Geet in his arms which not a pleasurable view. He wants to go but Sam also stops him. Reluctantly he stops and start rehars.again. Somehow he managed to concentrate on his dance and avoid looking to that side where they reharsing. After doing enough he left hurridely. All praised Geet as it was her first attempt and she gave her 100%. In eveng when she is going back to her home in her car,she get struck on mid of the way. Her car create prob. She cribbed in anger and complains to her babaji. Meanwhile Viraj who is passing from there stop his bike near her.

''any prob.Geet?'',he asked softly.

''nothing this crap car damaged again.'',she explains cutely while hitting its tyre which ultimately hits her back.''ouchh'',she winced in pain.

''dont worry i will drop you come.'',Viraj offered

''no its fine.'',she hesitated to take his help.

''Geet sham ho rai hai pls come,waise b mera route me hi hai tumhara ghar.come'',he insisit her. Looking around her and time she agreed and get ready to take his help. She sat behind him and he dorve towards her home. He drove at a very normal speed so she wont feels uncomfortable. With in few mins they were in front of her mansion. Geet jumped off from his bike.

''thanks for help Viraj.'',she show her gttatiude towrds Viraj.

''its ok Geet. wasie b jo maine kiya uske baad to mujhe tumse mafi mangni chahiye.'',he said in low voice. His forehead filled with many tense lines. His confession leave her in confusion.

''maafi? But why you saying sorry to me?'',she was not getting the hidden meaning of his words.

He hesitsted and felt ashmed but somehow collect his courage to met her gaze.''Geet actually us dinn hotel me tuhare sath jo hua wo sab mere plan ki wajhse hua tha.''

his revealisation of this truth shocked her completely. She looked him in disgust and confused.

''wo sab trumne kiya? But why? What harm i gave you so that you done as much wrong with me?'',she grabbed his collar and yielled on him.

''i m sorry Geet.tum mere plan ka hissa nai thi. I just only want to trap Maan on that night. Lekin usi dinn Armaan ne Ridzi ko prpose kar diya jiski wajhase tum tut gai. Maan ko trap karne k liye maine ek paid actress ko hyer kia tha,lekin Maan tume chhodne ko taiyar hi nai tha. Tum disturb thi or wo tume console karne me laga tha. Aise me wo actress Maan ko trap nai kar skti thi isliye mujhe tume mere plan me involved karna pada. Geet trust me mujhe zara b andaza nai tha,ki is plan ka sabse worst asar tumhari life pe padega. Maine ye sab kabhi nahi chaha tha.'',his is regretting badly,but cant change it.

''sorry is enough Viraj? You spoiled my life.tumhari wajhse mere Papa aaj beemar pade hai.how dare you?kisne haq diya tumhe meri life se khelne ka? Why you do this to me?'',Geet is yielling at him,while dropping tears from her almond eyes. Her eyes turn in furious red.

''Geet mujhe pata hai meri galti ki koi mafi nahi hai.lekin maine wai kia jo mujhe mera pyar pane k liye sahi laga. I love Sam,but she loves Maan.or maan ko uski nazro me giraye bina main use kabhi hasil nai kar skta tha. Geet main ye nai keh raha ki maine jo kia wo sahi hai.lekin apne pyar ko roz kisi or ki baho me dekhne ka dard ka hota hai wo tumse behtar kon samjh sakta hai. Geet main ye nai keh raha ki tum mujhe maaf kar do.par dil pe bhojh tha jo tumhe batana zaruri tha.maine bahut koshish ki Sam ko pane ki lekin tumhari friendship k aage me har gaya.tumne fir se dono ko ek kar dia.'',his voice is shattred and broken. He is too going through a pain,from which Geet is going. His last confession create pity for him too with anger. She wants to scold him but also senced his pain and guilt too. She leave his collar and have no words to say. She was in confusion now how she will react.
Suddnly Viraj falls on ground with a hard force. It happns in just a flick of an eye that both even dont understand what happned with Viraj. Before Viraj stables himself,he dragged up by strong pairs of hands which beat him brutually. Maan is beating him as he also hear evrything. Geet's eyes widened with shock and fear both. Maan beating him conti. Seeing him as uncotrolled Geet collect her courage and jupmed btwn both. She covers Viraj and saving him from his punches.

''Geet get aside.i wont spare him.he runied our life.'',Maan roared gritting in anger.

Geet not leaving her place and intrupts him. Seeing his mode she atlast snap back.''leave him Maan and dont over react ok? Isne jo b kiya uska effect sirf or sirf mujhpe pada hai. Tumne kya khoya hai? Jo b khoya hai...'',suddenly she stopped herself as everything she feels for him come flooding like a tidal wave. Struggling to quell the sobs that kept rising in her throat,she changed the topic.''tume Sam mil gai na?so no matter what he had done. Leave now.'',her shout carring all her emotional burst.

Maan leave him behind with bleeding nose. He is boiling but Geet's interefare made him stop.

''Geet...'',Viraj trying to speak but Geet stops him too.

''Pls Viraj leave me alone.'',geet burst on him too. As she was not in her. Unnecessarily she bcom target of evryone.all playing with her like a toy for their own selfish reasons. She felt very alone and locked herslef behind the door. She needs a shoulder of her mother to cry on. Luckily Ridzi calls her and she open in front of her. Geet told her everything which made her stunned and shocked. Ridzi consoles her and trying to cheer up her mood. After talking her with almost an hour Geet felt lighten and able to take some sleep.

Next day when all students are gathered for reharsals,Maan burst a bomb on all.

''Armaan if Viraj is going to participate,then i will not participate for sure.'',Maan gave a furious look to Virak while talking to Armaan.

''cool down Maan and behave like a professional. I know what's the matter here but its ur personal matter and i dont want its effect on our play. Ok?'',he raised his questioning brow and said bossily.

''i think u cant hear me clearly. If he is in then i m leaving.'',Maan trying to manuplate him.

''ok fine Viraj is in.baki tumhari marzi.''Armaan confirmed his decision. His tone is very calm,but strong.

''fine i m leaving. Common Sam we both are quitting'',he approached Sam to with extreame confidence in his fire smitting eyes.

''sorry Maan but i m not leaving the play.'',she denied his command strongly.

Anger in his eyes is placed by shock.''what? You wanna do it,when i want to leave it?'',he cant able to believe on his ears.

''pls Maan stop behaving like a kid.u know dancing and acting is my passion and i wont leave my passion for some stupid reasons. U have a pro.with Viraj not i.'',she told her decision clearly which made him annoyed.

''so u dont even left even 1 play for me? Fine u stay here but i m leaving.'',Maan gritted in anger and glared her hard before leaving from there.

Armaan smirk as his plan is working. He gave Maan's role to another student. Maan is getting irritated with Sam's betrayel. So he wont ans her any call on rest of the day. Next day in order to monify him she trying to pretend extra sweet with him but Maan glued to his anger. She made plan of watching movie but he denied as she do with him. He reached to library in order to avoid her. Geet was alredy there,soo much lost in one book,that she cant evn realized whts going around her. Maan is staring her in pretext of searching book from the shelf. Meanwhile Armaan entrd and straight reached to her. He clenched her wrist and pulled her up.

''Armaan wat are you doing?'',Geet asked as he dragging her.

''dont show ki tume yaad nai hai?chalo ridzi wait kr rai hai',instead odf giving ans he commands her.

''Armaan what are you talking about?'',she still hanging in confusion.

''o common Geet,dont spoil the mood,u kno we r going fr a movie'',Armaan revealed his plan to which she denied completely but Armaan wont listen her any plead and stare all around first. No one is ther so he lifts her up in his arms and moved out of the library. Geet waving her legs but his grip is very stong. Library in on backside so no one saw them,except Maan and he reached to his car where Ridzi and Viraj is alredy waiting. Seeing the view Maan's fists tighten and a shudder occured from anger ran in his whole body. Geet get upset seeing Viraj,but Armaan sort out their diffrences and made both comfortable. Geet get normal and forgive him. Then all 4 sit in Armaan's car and leave from the collage. Maan fuming badly and calls Sam there. He agrred with her plan and these two also leaving for a movie.

PRECAP:-
SAM:MAAN WHATS WRONG WITH YOU? MUJHE AISA KYU LAGTA HAI KI TUM HOTE TO MERE SATH HO PAR SIRF PHYSICALY,TUMHARA MIND ATTENTION SAB KAHI OR HI HOTA HAI. YOU NEVER PAY ANY ATTENTION WHATEVER I SAID TO YOU.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb update, liked it

Liked the way how Geet react when Maan said tht she can't perform the play

Wow Armaan n Ridz planning is too gud

Maan is not able to concentrate on his performance n armaan scolding him

Everyone is happy with Geet performance in rehearsal

Viraj spill the truth to Geet tht he was the one who had spike the drink to teach Maan lesson

Maan overheard Geet-Viraj convo n got angry but Geet save Viraj n told Maan to back-off

Geet is totally broken as everyone is using her according to their wish

Armaan taking Geet with him, ridz n Viraj for the movie n also solve the diff b/w Geet n Viraj
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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awesome update
maan ke sath asa hi hona chayie tha
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superb update
Maan deserves all this
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Originally posted by: Prabh.DDian

awesome update

maan ke sath asa hi hona chayie tha



Lolzzz sweetu :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum updt...loving this J and possessive maan...loving armaan and ridzi to the core...true frnds they r indeed...continue sooon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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maan deserve geets ingnorance 😡😡😡😡he's feeling jealous and learning true colours of sam..hope sam ditch him soon😉..pls cont soon..

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