MG-SS ADHOORI DASTAN/epilogue pg 81 [completed] - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
poor geet she has suffered so much n now mana slapped her...
bt when he found geet unconscious his feeling fr her woke...
superb update...waiting to know the reason from maan...
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Posted: 12 years ago
super awesome part... I loved it so much... geet is recording her story... maan 😳... maan slaped her..... waiting for next part to know why he hate her... i mean pretended to be hate her...??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

super awesome part... I loved it so much... geet is recording her story... maan😳... maan slaped her..... waiting for next part to know why he hate her... i mean pretended to be hate her...??



Thanks dear I am mohi
Really glad to see ur comment
Will post next one soon
Try my other work if u love baby ff and family ff
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovelyy update...
Geet is describing their overall journey...how they became one soul frpm two bodies..
Loved it...
OMG..Maan slapped Geet without any fault of hers..
Why is he making her suffered just bcoz he didn't want to marry???
Waiting to see wht is Maan going to tell Geet...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A



Thanks dear I am mohi
Really glad to see ur comment
Will post next one soon
Try my other work if u love baby ff and family ff

hey mohi.. I'm Mayu... I know u v. well u r my first buddy inbuddy list when I sign up on india forums ,...will def. read ur other stories... but waiting for this one eagerly...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

hey mohi.. I'm Mayu... I know u v. well u r my first buddy inbuddy list when I sign up on india forums ,...will def. read ur other stories... but waiting for this one eagerly...



Ohh hii mayu
How r u
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A



Ohh hii mayu
How r u

fine sweety... waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update ...felt sad 4 geet ...present is too good 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg mohita its awesome yar...
very very beautifully written chapter yar.
loved it a lot.
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Posted: 12 years ago



Teaser


Gate opened with a sound and made geet to cover herself and her eye turn fear to shock but she rubbed her eye to see his shameless hubby there with a smirked on her sexier lips.. geet is not believing on her eye and pinch herself and shout in pain with a baby face.

"Khud ko pinch karne ka pain kyu le rahi hu mishty mai hu naa mai karta hu pinch everywhere on your awaiting naughty body"

"Ohh maan you are such a shameless creature in the whole world"


will post update soon


thank you


this is for them who believe in me and my works

Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago

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