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<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">WhatsApp love😳</font>

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<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">Hey guys'.</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">Some of yu know me'n many don't know'.</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">Nwzzz this s mayapari {reshu}</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">M writing for the first time'neva I mean it neva in my life
I ve written anythn except ofcourse my essays n my answer sheets (wch byitself
is a longgg story)lol</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">Now many of yu might wonder wat made me write'..</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">So the answer is YU GUYS'</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">Tis s my way of saying thanq to yu guys fo putting up wit
me'</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">Coz I always read all the ffs n like it'n rarely comment'.so
this ones fo yu writers to show how much I love ur writing'</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">N all non writers to show them how much I luv yu guys n this
forum'.</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">Tis forum has become my obsession'n my other obsession is
Whats App'.</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">So me combining both my obsession'lol</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">Now enuf of my bakwass'.</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">Pl one serious note'..i am a horrible writer'so if yu really
ve strong heart to bear my writings.. read it..</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">Otherwise don't'.coz m not responsible for ur after
effects'lol</font>


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<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Character
sketch
</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">MSK:</font>

<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> </font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> As usual our
hotty'but lil naughty</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Apna MBA khatam karke
family business sambhal raha hain</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Geet:</font>

<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> </font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Cute si innocent si
sharmili'.naadaan si' sweet lil angel</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Doing her final year
MBA</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Annie khurana:</font>

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<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">
Princess of khurana khandan'.. naughty devil'.bole toh theeki tezzz
mirchi'.</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">But luvs her bhai n her BFF geet more'.studying her final year MBA wit
geet'.engaged to arjun punj</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Luv cum arranged hain yaar'.samjha karo</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Arjun Punj:</font>

<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> </font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Best buddy of
maan'.doing business wit him'.partners in business partners in crime'</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">He s the oly one who knows all the secret of the gr8 MSK'.engaged to
his drlng annie..luvs her lot'.</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Savitri devi khurana:</font>

<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> </font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Same as the serial'.luvable naughty dadi</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Adi:</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Right hand man of MSK</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Others ill intro yu as the story
progresses'.</font>


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<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">PROLOGUE</font>


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<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Whole KC was on its toes'.the BOSS
was on one of his bad mood'.no one wanted to face the wrath of tis sadu boss'their
savior boss mr.arjun was not in office'they knew he could calm the raging bull,
the MSK'he had asked his PA to bring the CHOPRA'S( clients) file '..and poor
PA' pehle se hi dari hui n now uff after receiving her boss's scoldings was on
verge of getting a mini hrt attack'. As soon as she was out of the cabin she
saw her best friend ' she jus hugged her n started crying'poor soul'now geet
was on a mission to calm the ragging bull'. She asked (pinky)the PA to go get
some coffe for herself'.</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">She went inside the MSK's office n
handed him a glass of cold water'.</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Shocked !!!!!!!!!msk roared</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Maan:
</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> urghhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tumse
koi bhi kaam theek se hota hain kya'.</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Kis gadhe ne tumhe yahan pe kaam
pe rakha????????????</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Geet:</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Sir
aapne!!!!!!</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Maan:</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Geet tum!!!!!!!!!!!!! </font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Chup bilkul chup'..</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Geet:</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Ok sir yeh dekhiye'.finger on my
lips''.</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Maan:</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Yahan se jao'..jao warna acha nahi
hoga'</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Geet:</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Kya karenge sir'.abb toh main nahi
jaaungi'</font>


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<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Maan:
</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Don't test my patience geet''warna
'.</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Geet:</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Aap ' aap mera kuch nahi bigad
sakte'.main geet hoon geet' samjhe aap'..</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Maan:</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Bus bahot hogaya'..</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">He
jus locked the door n blinds with his remote'.n without prior info'.kissed geet
on her lips''.</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Tooo
stunned to react geet jus cloed her eyes n maan was aggressively kissing her'.</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Holding
her close''.</font>

<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">aur fir''''''''''shuru hota hain suspense'..hehe lol'.</font>


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<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">Ufff
atlast prologue khatam ho gaya''</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">Jus
2-3 parts hain iss story ke'.</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">Do
temme if yu want me to cont'.warna no probs'.</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">Luv
yu all</font>


<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">Mayapari😳''</font>


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Posted: 12 years ago
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index: whatsapp love
prologue: scroll up
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yay me first!!
Maaneet Kiss in prolouge!!
Geet is so cute!!
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was a nice start. Loved it a lot. continue soon and add me to your pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ mansi.tripathi
@ chinni10
thanq guys...

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nice concept dear pls add me in your pm list
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one babesFlower for You
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Nice start buddy.
Very cute,Maan kissing Geet in prologue only.Hai...

Pls cont soon and Pm me the next parts.
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Amazing concept

Prologue was mast.
Geet answering back to Maan.
Wow Maan kissed Geet. He is too
Fast.

Continue soon.

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PART 1
They both din know how much time passed'atlast maan realized that geet was oout of breath n so pulled out'n hugged her tight'..
Maan:
Now mishty'did yu lyk my way of shutting yu up'.bolo na'ab kya hua'' were s my sherni???
Geet was totally sharam se paani paani'din know wat to do'so jus hid her face in his chest'..
Maan realized geet was all shy shy.. n din tease her more'after few minutes they composed themselves' n geet started talking
Geet:
maan ' mera gussa sab par kyun nikal rahe ho'sorry na jaanu' pls'
His mishty was asking sorry n baiting her eye lashes sooo cutely' pouting n upar se JAANU'.
How could he not melt'.. his anger vanished in thin air'n hugged her yet close'..
Geet:
maan pls na' abb main kya karo 'aapki princess mere phone lekar check karne lagi toh'I neva expected tat'aur upar se it was late nite'.. I din know'I fell asleep'pls na maanu'.aap mere cuttie ho na'plsss mujhe maaf kardo'..
Geet was going on n on'.maan new the way to shut her up..
Maan:
chup bilkul chup'keeping his finger in her lips'.
Mujhe pata hain mishty'nwzzz acha hi hua' kabhi na kabhi use batana hi tha'. Chalo now give me a smile'..
Geet:
maan ussene aise kya kar diya???? Yu know wat she deleted ur chat '' and she doesn't even say me wat n all yu texted'..
Hey babaji!!!!!!aapne kuch aisa waisa toh nahi bheja na'..abb main kya karoon'..maan pls bataye na'
My head will burst'..plsss maaan'''' bataye na''.
Maan:
aree 'kahan fas gaya'maan muttered under his breath'.
Geet aise kuch nahi hua' tum shaant ho jao plsss'.
Geet:
nahi maan'agar aap nahi batayenge na toh main aapse na '. Haan aapse baat nahi karoongi'.
Geet crossed her arms n faced away from maan pouting'.
Maan thot how adorable his mishty looks'.n he hugged geet from behind n nuzzled on her neck' making geet melt'.
Atlast he made her sit on his lap as he himself settled on the sofa in his cabin'..
Maan:
mishty main batata hoon'gussa kyun ho rahi ho????
Kal raat'.i jus tested yu
I LOVE YOU MISHTY'..
N then'..
Tan tad dan tad an'.the door flew open'.. an enraged annie' came in followed by arjun making a puppy face''maan n geet were embarrassed to be caught lyk tat by annie n arjun..they straightened themselves annie wasn't talking to anyone'.arjun n geet were making baby face n maan jus went n hid behind his table'not wanting to face the wrath of this sister' the ANVESHA SINGH KHURANA'.lol..maan n bheegi billi'..
Geet:
annie pls mere se toh baat kar'
geet was pleading'but annie was enraged' she jus turned her face'.
The geet came in front of annie n cutely asked sorry with her hands on her ears' n pouting with a puppy dog face'.annie instantly melted seeing her face' n hugged geet'..the two boys sighed in relief'but it was short lived
Geet:
annie isme meri koi galti nahi hain'saari galti na maan ki hain' he oly asked me not to tel yu' really'. M sooo sorry babytumhe toh pata hain na I can neva lie to yu' plsss babu maaf karde yaar'..
Annie:
mujhe pata tha yaar' teri koi galti nahi ho sakti'. N then turned towards boys.. gave a glare n said
Abb aap dono' sun lo,,, main aur geet nahi aapse baat karenge n nahi aapko maaf karenge' get tat straight' and mr.maan singh khurana'. Aap ' aap toh koshish bhi nahi kariyega ki geet se baat kare'.
Samjhe'. Chal geetu'.. ab inse humme koi lena dena nahi hain' n dare yu follow us'..
Annie n Geet left'.guys were left alone in the office'..
Annie n geet were in car.. going towards their mansion'..
Once reaching their room' geet slowly asked annie bout yesterdays chat'..
Annie:
yu seriously want me to say all tat'. She asked a bit embarrassed'.
Geet seein her face jus said a big NOOO'.
But she had tat long puppy face' n annie couldn't see it
Aniee: okok abb apna muh mat phula' I ve the chat saved in my mob' jus read it' n m sorry n advance''''''.
If yu remember'yesterday we were to ve a girls nite out' n yu were sooo damn tired afta the work.. yu jus came n slept like a KUMBHKARAN'. N tat time ur mobile beeped n it showe
"A WhatsApp msg from DHUSHT DHANAV"
N I very well knew tat the adjective belonged to my bro'. I was actually shocked to see a whatsapp msg from him to yu' so out of curiousness I jus read t msg' n it was
"I LOVE YOU MISHTY"
Was damn shocked n wanted to know wat was going on b/t yu too' so started chatting' n kind of got to know most of ur secret love story' the office romance' the nhok jhok' the date n well ur first kiss too'.
Sorry bout tat'. Hehe'.
Geet wanted the earth to open up n swallow her' she was all red.. from face to toes'. She couldn't meet aniee's eyes
Atlast she handed over her phone n went out'..
Geet started reading'..
Precap:
obviously their meeting dating office romance n all lovey dovey moments'..hanx for the support...
ll update tmrw... may be the last part... if yu want me to add anythn pls feel free to say...
luv yall
mayapari😳

Edited by mayapari - 12 years ago

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