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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
first of all the title is awesome loved it

awesome n amazing update please continue soon

n pm me the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Sry everyone...
my net connection crashed...
jus now got connected...
ill update Tmrw Pakka wala promise...
thankyu sooo much fo t likes n comments...
luv yu all
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Part 3:

Tis ones fo yu sobia;):P

@same tym in office….

Maan: arjun main kya karoon yaar…. Annie ne mera murder hi kar dena hain…..

Arjun: tut oh chup hi reh …..tum dono ke chakar main mere luv life ki band baj chuki hain….woh sab chod aur mujhe yeh bata ki aisa kya keh diya tune use????????

Maan: bolna jaruri hain kya…. Who MSK ki behen hain sara sach ugalva diya…..

Arju:.lol….okok bol abhi….

Maan:fine toh sun….

I said her bout our first meet n all wch u know already…. Then she aske bout our first date…n I said her a lil romantically…..

Arjun: oh shit!!!!!! All those things???? Lol abb toh mujhe bhi panda hain… were s ur mob….

Guys now conversation…pls enjoy….

G: ok abhi mujhe humare first date ke bare main boliye maan…

M: ok chalo.. abb iss baar main apne andaaz main humare date ka varnan karta hoon….

Jus listen geet….n don intrupt me wit ur hoshyarpur express speed questions…..lol

G: fyn kuch nahi bolungi…..

M: chandni raat thi… hum dono akele the….ek khubsurat nadi ke kinaare sirf tum main aur humara pyaar….tum uss din ek half white chudidar main bilkul asmaan se utar ke aayi pari lag rahi thi…. Tumhare sharmati hui laal gaal(cheeks).. pyaar se bhara tumhare aankhein… jo sirf mera hi naam le rahi thi…. Uff aur jab tum chal kar mere taraf aa rahi thi…I felt lyk worlds richest man……tumme sirf mera pyaar jhalak raha tha….i can neva forget tat day geet……uss din hum dono ne yeh waada kiya….

Humari har subah ek duje ke saath shuru hogi aur har raat k duje ke saath khatam…..

Fir we had dinner together…sab tumhari pasand ka Punjabi khana….lekin tumne apne saath mere liye apne haathon se banaya hua PASTA n CHOCO MOOSE le aayi….hum dono ne ek dusre ko khilaya…

Fir dance:::: haaye yu remember the kites song…. DILL KYUN YEH MERA SHOR KARE…. Our fav song

We both dance together…. N then

Uss din humne apne rishtey main ek aur kadam paar kar liya…..

Geet yu gave me the gift wch yu n oly yu can give me…..

Yu kissed me on ma cheek geet…. For the first tym…..

Tat tym I felt like I ve got everything geet….evrythng …..

Mishty luv yu sooo much…..

Uske baad humara jhagada bhi hua…remember

Geet: nope aap bolo…

Maan: achaji…chalo ill tel yu…

Yu wanted to say everythn to annie…but I din want anyone to know bout it…. I said yu tat we ll tel annie together on her wedding … it ll be our wedding gift to her,….but yu were adamant….but I knew to manaofy my mishty…..

Geet: oh yes yes!!!! Maan kya aap ghar aayenge ???abhi??? pls

Maan: neeki aur puch puch… ill be tere in 10 mins mishty….

Luv yu….

Geet: ill be waiting maan….

Precap: maan n annie aamne saamne…lol

Luv yall

mayapari😳

Edited by mayapari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Lols !!!! Poor Maan !!!! Annie is very clever aur MSK ko phasa diya !!!Lovely !!! Precap is more funny !!! Continue soon !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
poor maan
annie ne acha fasaya

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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
lovely update 👍🏼 Oh god !!! this Annie is very clever 😆 even MSK failed 😆 ll be waiting dear cont sn 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
bechara maan...phans gaya...abb kya karega maan...

awesome update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
part 3
awesome...
OMG Maan told everything in detail...
that too to Annie...
very good...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
nice story ..

liked the parts

thnx for pms dear


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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
well i can only say i am really very sorry for this super delayed comments
all coz of my on going exams

n

this stupid IF blocking my IP address ..
really have a bundle of updates pending but exams hain na tou nahi par paa rahi ..

but this was simply awesom
really well narrated n suberb dialogue .. actually being a writer i know how much confusion it is at times to decide on dialogues but u made it too well
poor MSK apni behen ko sab bol diya
wondering kash mujhe bhi kabhi apne bro aur unki fiance meri would-be-bhabi ki batien pata chalien ...rolf
ill tease them till hell ..:d

beautiful part
update soon pluueejjj

luv ya
sobia

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