MG FF A duty and a promise Part 6 pg 44 - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

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Very interesting twist to story

M traveling will cmnt more ltr



Thanks for reading and commenting. Would like to know what you think if where the story is going
Ange
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was all planned by Nt just to make Geet pregnant?!?!?
Maan found her. Oh god wat would happen now????
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Omg hate NT! All planned by her! Poor Geet! So Maan knws! wt will happen nw! well written, update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting update
now maan knows that he is with geet
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
dat was indeed a superb twist...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!! loving this twist ...chalo maan ko ye to pata chala k he spent his night with geet
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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh so maan knws its same geet...

Bt did he had any doubt???

Conti soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 5
awesome...
so Maan has now understood shes Geet?
pathetic Naintara and Dev...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
So she gave herself for her sister !
How come Maan got to know that she's Geet ? 😲
Thanx =)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

😊

Very interesting twist to story

EDITED___

Super update!
She has been away from him for a month
The makeover must be wow since he did not even recognize her.
There was so much passion in their being together.
The way he could not leave her alone in the elevator nor the room
She is not going to be able to escape him that easily.
The last line was what I call a cliffhanger.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Why is he calling her after a month?
Oh Gosh, if she is still working for him, I can't wait for the fireworks!😊
Sorry I was away so could not comment properly due a bad network connection.
what should I say th...s for updating...😆


Hi Avi,
Appreciate you coming back with your thoughts
Trying to convey passion without being too graphic
Also I want this ff to be a bit snappier
Experimenting with a new style...lets see
Hoping to update soon
Ange

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