(MG-SS)MLS SEASON 2 THREAD6 FINISHED SS PTs/PG 1

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Hey all... Rose again...so here am with THREAD SIX OF MLS season 2.. characters wohi story nayii..😉


Warning :- This whole ss will be containing violence so read it at your own risk.. Criticism and bashings are most welcome.. Do let me know in your comments if you DON'T want pmz for this , my time will be saved..😊


PLZ DON'T COPY MY WORK THIS TIME.. AND TO THE BEST OF MY KNOWLEDGE I HAVEN'T COPIED ANYONE'S WORK TILL NOW AND NEITHER I INTEND TO DO THAT..


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character sketch

Geet sinha:- (20 yrs):- A sweet ,naive, innocent yet a daring ,loving and caring human being..Lives with her friends cum sisters pinky and shweta..she is a dance teacher..Also working for an organization for poor children and orphans ...as she herself is an orphan .. Her mom died after giving her birth and she has no clue of her dad,as he left her mother months before Geet came to the world...

Maan Singh Khurrana:- (27 yrs) A Mystery man.. He is a killer..Has his own gang of trusty ppl (ARYANS-MK)... lives in the outskirts of Delhi, and ppl out there respect him as their savior , as he gives money to them from time to time .. but they are un aware to the Real face of The MSK- A gangster ..

Shekher(27yrs):- Right hand of MSK.. He is the only one able to speak in front of MSK.. that too anything and everything ..

Adi (25 yrs):- Next to shekher.. but he is always scared of MSK and his anger...Not to forget MSK's rude behavior...

Yash (25):- A flirt by nature. He is having a main role in Maan's gang, as he is having his charms and flirt nature to dig infos from any one,sp from female ..

Nikhil (23):- He is a sweet ..and funny guy.. loves to crack jokes.. never leave anyone .. Even Maan can never be left out from his jokes.. He is the only guy who makes Maan smile with his whole heart.. He is like a kid in the gang..

Rahul(27):- A serious , type of guy when it comes to work .. and after that he seems to be aloof from everyone .. Except from Maan as he knows no one can escape from Maan's eyes..

Samar:- (27) He is a pure Casanova.. Totally talli one.. Never cares for anyone ..

Shweta(24yrs):- She is like an elder sis to Geet.. Geet's only support in the city.. she gave courage to Geet .. she is a focused girl.. Does job in a reputed firm..

Avni( 24):- Shweta's colleague in that firm.. works with her and many times hangs out with Geet and shweta.. Avni treats as her own younger sister..

Pinky(22):- She is doing her diploma course in computers .. Geet's best friend..

Priya(21):- S sweet and funny girl.. pinky's classmate .. and a good friend to Geet coz of pinky..

Payal (20):- An orphan .. Geet's friend from orphanage.. Both girls are very close to each other.. as they are childhood friends ..

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PROLOGUE


A girl in her 20's tied with the bed with ropes in her own home. .. Her mouth closed with the cloth piece'Her feet tied with her dupatta.. crying badly and asking for mercy' but the man in front of her is unknown to the mercy word..


A man in late 20's comes on top of her ' and unties her hands' Girl tried to go from there but was unable to move as the man quickly grabbed her hands and pinned her over her head .. and Ra**d her..


Girl (GEET ) shouted ,screamed ,pleaded ,wriggled harder in his grip .. but man(MAAN) had no effect on her pleading and her futile attempts'


Maan:- I told you not to involve yourself in these troubles.. but you never listen .. Its your punishment now..


Geet (was crying ) :- I hate you.. I will never let you go from police..

I promise I will get you arrested no matter what .


Maan(laughed):- We will see darling ..

He smirked at her childish attempt to scare him and kissed her harder this time on her lips so that her lips were bleeding and he then licked them and he left .. she felt disgusted not on him but on herself..


Ok so this is different from the Mysterious love story of mine ..but still it is Mysterious ' I think.. right???😉 Plz note down that I will only be updating this ss once a week due to my tight schedules and other 2 ff's .. oh I shouldn't have started at the first place.. but this is just to manaofy one of my buddy ' who wanted double updates yesterday and I wasn't able to give that '


@prafulla this is for you..


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First of all i would like to thank each one here who wished me on my birthday and prayed for my health.. thanks to special ppl who made my boring bday a remarkable one .. thank you so much Mahek and Hani ... muahhhzzz.. here is late treat from my side on my bday...

PART 23

Geet :- I don't understand you guys .. you all are a MYSTERY for me..

yash:- The biggest mystery has yet to come …

Geet:- am getting scared ..you all came to save me and you got in trouble and now MK will also be in trouble …

Adi:- don't worry for him, he has faced this kinda situation many times…

sam:- yeah.. He will deal himself..


Mr mehra (blocked his way once again):- MK look get her there and then save all of them..


MK:- I can't take risk sir .. what if I failed to protect her from them??


Shweta:- I won't mind getting dead but I don't want my Geet to be dead in no fault of hers …


MK:- you aren't getting my point shweta .. they got her coz they know that she is connected with me …


Shweta:- No, they caught her coz dad came to the flat that night .. you were right they might have followed dad and got the info whoever was living there … its all coz of dad..


MK:- but she went to meet my grandmother today and on her way back got kidnapped.. so basically no fault of hers ..


Shweta:- I insist, I would come with you…


MK(sighed):- ok.. I have a plan… do follow if you want to come with me ..

Shweta nodded and he told her ,his plan…


MK:- I would only take you there and pretend that , I can get Mr vishal through you.. and when he would release all of them I would get you back.. I promise I would …


Shweta(smiled):- I trust you, I trust the guy whom Geet has so much faith…


After an hr Maan and shweta were inside Rishi's territory..


Rishi:- welcome MK .. welcome …


MK:- Here you go(he looked at shweta and then Rishi.) now , let all of them go..


Rishi(smirked):- sure.. He signaled his men and they brought all except Geet..


MK:- I said all means All…


Rishi:- well these are all.. uhh !! am I missing someone …


Shweta:- yes, my friend is missing …


MK closed his eyes and Rishi smirked..


Rishi:- oh oh … so that's the plan MK???


MK:- what ??? He tried to play safe…



Rishi:- Don't pretend MK.. you are trying to fool me … He was abt to pull out his pistol from his pocket but MK was fast enough to grab the opportunity first .. MK fired in the air and then targeted him…


MK:- Tell your gang to bring her in … else am gonna shoot right into your skull


ARYANS surrounded Rishi's gang members … Rishi nodded his head and his men brought Geet out ..


Maaneet looked at each other… MK smiled looking at her ,she was totally terrified looking at the men in front of her ..


MK:- shekher and yash, take the girls out from here…


They obliged and Geet and shweta were out … Rest of the ARYANS-MK fought with all gang members and then Rishi and men were escorted to jail as on their way, yash called police to the area…


MK came out from that place and Mr vishal hugged him…


Mr vishal: - Thank you so much for helping me and my daughter… ahh !! now no fear thank you..


Mr mehra:- That's like my boy … am very proud of you MK…. Ask me anything I will give you..


MK:- uhh!! Can I get vacation for at least a month???


Mr Mehra (looked at him in surprise):- why ???


Sam(placed his hand around MK's shoulder):- Its his marriage in this month…


MK glared at sam and he just winked making MK smile looking down..


Shekher:- yeah abut for that we need to ask for bride's hand from shweta …


MK:- well that is gonna be up to you … as I know you can handle her very well.. MK winked


Shekher (ST):- Huhhh !! If that was so I would have preferred to talk to my proposal with shweta rather than yours …


shekher:- ok… I will do that … (then whispered in his ear) she is waiting for you at GM's dhaaba.. with shweta.. MK rushed there..



shweta:- so you like him (Geet nodded feeling shy) and he ???


MK(voice came from their behind):- I LOVE HER.. AND I WOULD LIKE TO MARRY HER ..


Geet blushed and looked down…little surprised , little shocked..


Shweta:- Hayee this blush… killer one .. ok go on… am leaving now .. (she walked pass MK and then came back to him) and I want her at her flat by 7pm safe and sound..


MK:- ok ma'am… Thanks for giving us privacy(he taunted her to leave them alone and shweta just fumed went from there)


MK came and sat with her , holding her hands ..


MK:- will you marry me ???


Geet:- No..


MK(shocked):- what ??? why ???


Geet(pulled back her hands ):- what's the use, you will be busy in your these killing activities ..


MK(pulled her hand back):- well, I have a month off from that ..


Geet(happily):- Really ???

MK:- Hmm think again on my offer ..


Geet:- that was supposed to be proposal..


MK:- so is that a yes???

Geet blushed and hugged him :- yes .. I love you Maan….


MK(hugged her back):- I promise to give you happiness .. Love and a perfect family which you longed for …


Geet(smiled in tears):- Thank you..


MK too smiled looking at her eyes and again hugged each other … feeling contended and happy to get everything in their lives…



PRECAP: EPILOGUE 😊



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EPILOGUE




After 1 month..


Geet banged the door of washroom for the third time ..


Geet:- Maan plz come out now , I need to get ready ..


Maan:- Geet ,just 5 mints ..


Geet:- Maan it has been 30 mints now and still your 5 mints are not finishing .. Are you having a pvt. meeting there??


Maan:- I dare you to come in and see yourself ..


Geet:- Oh !! ok fine .. if you didn't come out in next 5 secs then I….


Maan (opened the door and leaned on his back on that ):- Then what would you do ??


Geet looked at him .. He was standing in a towel and his upper body was bare , water was just dripping from his hair and he was smiling actually smirking .. Geet looked away..


Geet:- I know your intentions very well.. Now give me a side so that I wouldn't get late to reach my sister's marriage ..


Maan didn't move away, instead he quickly wore his waist and brought her close to his heart and trapped her in his arms ..


Maan:- what were you saying ?? If I didn't come out in 5 secs then what ????


Geet( blushed and looked down ):- Maan plz..


Maan (smiled and kissed her cheek ..):- It has been a month since we got married and still you feel shy ,whenever I touch you ..


Geet(again blushed):- Maan plz ,don't tease me and let me go ..she struggled..


Maan:- First complete your sentence what were you saying ??? (she didn't' say anything ) were you trying to say that you would come in ??? Haan !!!


Geet(pleaded):- plz Maan…


Maan(sighed):- Just coz we have to reach on time and as we are already going to be late ,am letting you go …otherwise you know ..


Maan leaned forward and winked at her ..she looked down ,feeling shy .. Maan shook his head in disbelieve and kissed her head and left her .. she just rushed to washroom…



After 15 mints both came out from their flat .. Maan locked the door and pulling Geet closer ,made his way to outside..

They sat in Maan's jeep and headed to attend shekher and shweta's wedding …



After few days of Geet's rescue mission, shekher proposed shweta .. she agreed his proposal and convinced her dad-mr vishal..


And today was their wedding reception.. Maan and Geet were supposed to attained that one ..


Maan and geet in jeep


Geet:- Maan, shweta will be very angry as I wasn't there in her marriage preps .. all thanks to you….


Maan:- Now , don't blame me Geet .. your wish was not acceptable at that time … I mean, you wanted me to give permission for that, just after 17 days of our marriage .. sorry Geet but I had no choice..


Geet:- Huhhh!! I know .. Now you would be busy in your duties and I would be left alone ..


Maan:- I told you long before that ..if you truly love me, then you would have to accept me with what I am.. and you did that naa??? Then why now cribbing ???


Geet(looked down feeling guilty):- sorry, I didn't mean that ..


Maan:- Hmm.. lets concentrate on the reception now ..Hmm ?? Now smile plz ….


Maan smiled and looked at Geet and she too smiled back at him .. Maan knew she might start crying in her feeling guilty and that would have ruined their whole trip so to lighten that mood he smiled and that made Geet smile ..



Soon they reached at the venue.. and pinky, adi, meera ,yash, Nikhil, sam priya and others greeted maneet …


Sam:- Here , the bride and groom's best buddies are coming now who were supposed to be the first ones to reach..


Payal:- chalo at least they reached.. I thought they won't make it .. she winked and pinky and all girls giggled ..


MK felt embarrassed and Geet just blushed…


Nikhil:- Hayeee !!! what a blush.. surprised, Geet first looked at Nikhil and then to MK, who glared Nikhil and Nikhil just looked at adi and got busy talking with him, taking him along ….


Yash:- Relax MK, she is all yours .. what say guys ..


Meera:- yeah yeah !! officially and legally as well …


Rahul:- you have got the license after all … all teased Maneet and laughed ….


MK:- lets go Geet .. and meet with shekher and shweta… ..


Sam:- wait wait .. let me introduce my GF … He is MK and his wife Geet … and MK and Geet she is shilpa… My GF..


Shilpa:- Hiii..


Geet smiled and shook hand with her … while MK just smiled … then Maneet headed to inside and ARYANS scattered ..



Shweta:- Am angry on you..


Geet:- why ??


Shweta:- why ??? that's the limit yaar..you think of me as an elder sis and you are coming here as if you are a mere guest here…


Geet(looked down feeling guilty):- wo…


MK(cut her):- Actually Its my fault .. I got late and so did she..


Shweta:- Jij.. plz don't take her side..she could have reached here alone too...


Shekher:- shweta how could she come alone yaar??? Don't you know , MK and his anger.. He teased and winked at both the girls ..


MK(glared him):- If it wasn't your reception I would have beaten you up right here .. but considering that ,am leaving you today ..


Geet smiled at their friendly fight and again looked at shweta,who still was kinda angry on Geet ..


Geet:- plz sorry..


MK:- Hey now excuse her else she would start shedding tears and I can't see her teary.. so now accept her apology…..


Shweta(hugged Geet but looked at MK):- were you just threatening me ???


Shekher:- Did you forget he is MK –the Mystery man..


Shweta ignored shekher and his teasing and broke the hug , wiped off, Geet's almost teary eyes ..


Shweta:- I was just pulling your leg yaar..Don't cry warna I don't know what your Mysterious hubby would do with me ..


Shweta giggled ,making Geet smile whole heartedly.. all saw grany was coming towards them .. Geet immediately took her blessings and shweta also did the same ..followed by shekher while MK just hugged DM.. she smiled and blessed them all.. Nikhil jumped in..


Nikhil:- Time for photo shot.. Everyone smiled and Nikhil called a photographer.. ARYANS-MK , all girls, DM and mr vishal stood with the newlywed on the stage and a pic was clicked…


All retired to their homes after having dinner and teasing bride and groom..


Maaneed lied on bed , Geet being in Maan's arms


Geet:- I really enjoyed there. Thank you Maan, for giving me everything .. Every happiness… a family … bros and DM.. you brought happiness and color in my life.. thanks ..



Geet looked at him a little tired from day's events.. Maan caressed her hair and smiled..


Maan:- you are tired …


Geet (too smiled) :- Hmm.. but you know what , you always surprise me ..


Maan( looked at her confused):- Now what did I do???


Geet:- see here am telling you what you did for me etc and all you have to say is asking me am tired or not .. I will never understand you My Mystery Man.


Maan(smiled):- Then you should stop trying to know this Mystery..


Both smiled, Maan kissed her head and hugged each other.. slipping into the dream world of this Mysterious love and their story…


The End ..


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LAST NOTE

Hey all.. so that was THE END for MLS season 2… do leave your views on this whole season…

Hmm.. ok few of MLS readers had asked me to go on with MLS season 3, and as I had mentioned few updates back, that I was willing to start MLS 3 with same chrs and starting from where I ended MLS 2 but at that time majority of readers was on continuation of MLS 2 ..

Here am with the question of, do you really like and liked MLS 1 and 2 that you want me to start season 3 ???

But there would be one problem in starting season 3, that It would take few months for me to start that one .. as right now am too much busy with my studies and only I know how am able to update my running 3-4 works …

So you all gotta wait for few months for MLS 3's start OR simply the Mysterious Love Story is over …

Will be going with majorities …

lastly, thank you so much for being with me in this maaneet journey as well ...

love you all...

Much love Rose..

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Originally posted by: shebs786

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awesome dear...loved shy geet

so they are marrying ofcourse with shwetas permission ;-)

loved it...will be waiting for epi...

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