(MG-SS) MLS SEASON 2 THREAD 2

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Hey all... Rose again...so here am with THREAD TWO OF MLS season 2.. characters wohi story nayii..😉


Warning :- This whole ss will be containing violence so read it at your own risk.. Criticism and bashings are most welcome.. Do let me know in your comments if you DON'T want pmz for this , my time will be saved..😊


PLZ DON'T COPY MY WORK THIS TIME.. AND TO THE BEST OF MY KNOWLEDGE I HAVEN'T COPIED ANYONE'S WORK TILL NOW AND NEITHER I INTEND TO DO THAT..


MUCH LOVE ROSE 😉


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character sketch

Geet sinha:- (20 yrs):- A sweet ,naive, innocent yet a daring ,loving and caring human being..Lives with her friends cum sisters pinky and shweta..she is a dance teacher..Also working for an organization for poor children and orphans ...as she herself is an orphan .. Her mom died after giving her birth and she has no clue of her dad,as he left her mother months before Geet came to the world...

Maan Singh Khurrana:- (27 yrs) A Mystery man.. He is a killer..Has his own gang of trusty ppl (ARYANS-MK)... lives in the outskirts of Delhi, and ppl out there respect him as their savior , as he gives money to them from time to time .. but they are un aware to the Real face of The MSK- A gangster ..

Shekher(27yrs):- Right hand of MSK.. He is the only one able to speak in front of MSK.. that too anything and everything ..

Adi (25 yrs):- Next to shekher.. but he is always scared of MSK and his anger...Not to forget MSK's rude behavior...

Yash (25):- A flirt by nature. He is having a main role in Maan's gang, as he is having his charms and flirt nature to dig infos from any one,sp from female ..

Nikhil (23):- He is a sweet ..and funny guy.. loves to crack jokes.. never leave anyone .. Even Maan can never be left out from his jokes.. He is the only guy who makes Maan smile with his whole heart.. He is like a kid in the gang..

Rahul(27):- A serious , type of guy when it comes to work .. and after that he seems to be aloof from everyone .. Except from Maan as he knows no one can escape from Maan's eyes..

Samar:- (27) He is a pure Casanova.. Totally talli one.. Never cares for anyone ..

Shweta(24yrs):- She is like an elder sis to Geet.. Geet's only support in the city.. she gave courage to Geet .. she is a focused girl.. Does job in a reputed firm..

Avni( 24):- Shweta's colleague in that firm.. works with her and many times hangs out with Geet and shweta.. Avni treats as her own younger sister..

Pinky(22):- She is doing her diploma course in computers .. Geet's best friend..

Priya(21):- S sweet and funny girl.. pinky's classmate .. and a good friend to Geet coz of pinky..

Payal (20):- An orphan .. Geet's friend from orphanage.. Both girls are very close to each other.. as they are childhood friends ..

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PROLOGUE

A girl in her 20's tied with the bed with ropes in her own home. .. Her mouth closed with the cloth piece…Her feet tied with her dupatta.. crying badly and asking for mercy… but the man in front of her is unknown to the mercy word..


A man in late 20's comes on top of her … and unties her hands… Girl tried to go from there but was unable to move as the man quickly grabbed her hands and pinned her over her head .. and Ra**d her..


Girl (GEET ) shouted ,screamed ,pleaded ,wriggled harder in his grip .. but man(MAAN) had no effect on her pleading and her futile attempts…


Maan:- I told you not to involve yourself in these troubles.. but you never listen … Its your punishment now…


Geet (was crying ) :- I hate you.. I will never let you go from police… I promise I will get you arrested no matter what ….


Maan(laughed):- We will see darling ..

He smirked at her childish attempt to scare him and kissed her harder this time on her lips so that her lips were bleeding and he then licked them and he left … she felt disgusted not on him but on herself…


Ok so this is different from the Mysterious love story of mine ..but still it is Mysterious … I think.. right???😉 Plz note down that I will only be updating this ss once a week due to my tight schedules and other 2 ff's .. oh I shouldn't have started at the first place.. but this is just to manaofy one of my buddy … who wanted double updates yesterday and I wasn't able to give that …


@prafulla this is for you..

This ss will be ending in 10 -12 or so parts I guess..


Ps:- prologue part will come in the mid of the updates as will start story from start only ..so bear with me… need support friends .. leave your likes and views plzz..



MUCH LOVE ROSE😉
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Congrats on the new thread diii
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congrats for the new thread dear...
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PART 6

Geet who was already terrified seeing blood and knives , was now feeling disgusted ,at the way the guy was trying to kiss her.. she tried hard to not let him touch her when she heard a voice..


Mk:-Leave her.. MK almost shouted and seeing sam smiling he knew it was just to tease him so he roughly pulled Geet to himself…


Geet hugged him tightly out of fear and cried.After a

mint ,Geet realized what was she doing ..she pushed MK and slapped him, looking at him in anger and fear..


He was not wearing mask but Geet recognized him from his suit and similar perfume which he applied earlier while dancing with her..


Geet:- you are the same guy who bumped on me in that mall, lift, boutique and at that party and now here??? You are a killer .. I hate you…


Saying so she rushed out.. MK and all looked her in shock.. she recognized them that could have been dangerous to all ..


Soon, MK got his senses back after that slap .. He ran after her saying..


MK:- I will get her…

But Geet has already vanished ..what if she tells anyone ?? Damn!! Why I always lose my focus around her..

MK returned back to ARYANS in anger and worry…


Rahul :- you got her???


MK:- she escaped …. But what was that sam??? Mk asked angrily


Sam:- well, I was just checking whether she affects you or not.. and she does.. Mk looked frustrated and Adi jumped in convo..


Adi:- ok leave that .. now what should we do ??


Yash:- what if she tells to police ???


Shekher:- I don't think, she was in any condition to tell now ..lets wait for day time..


MK:- and I will get her as soon as the sun arises.. He said in determination..


Nikhil:- oh yeah !! Nothing is impossible for MK…


On the other hand, Geet reached her home in anger and fear .. she called shweta and told she reached safely.. she didn't feel like eating so she went to bed directly,without even changing dress..



Next morning , she was heading to her dance class..when all of sudden a jeep stopped in front of her and MK got down from that.. Immediately Geet moved backwards , though the road was crowded but the thought to shout , scream for help or run from there didn't come to her mind as Geet was too shocked seeing the man there.. she thought he was there as she has slapped him last night so he will misbehave with her…


Soon, she was standing against a tree with MK glaring her .. she tried to go from there but MK placed his both hands on her either sides .. geet looked at him in shock.. then she tried to talk

Geet:- Let me go plzz..


MK:- you aren't going to tell anyone about the last night's incidents..


Oh that angered her..

Geet:- what do you think of yourself haan ???


MK:- Don't mess with us, we are way too dangerous for you to handle.. stay quit, be happy with your little happy family of friends and don't bother to go against us..


Geet:- Is that a threat??


MK(smiled):- No, a simple advice for now ..and I don't believe in threatening ppl ..I just kill without any warnings.. saying so MK left from there and drove away..

Geet (was angry) :- whatever he thinks !! I don't care.. Am not a coward.. I will face every hurdle that comes on my way but I won't leave those criminals..Never… Thinking so she headed to police station rather than to her dance classes…


On the other hand, MK reached their usual meeting spot-A dhaba,owned by an old lady and they all called her grandma, in short GM.. she is the only one who knows abt their work ,but strangely she supports them positively..MK saw her jovial face and immediately changed his expressions from irritation and anger to small smile.. He approached her and took blessings ,hugged her


MK:- Hey GM ,good morning how are you today ???


GM(smiled):- Am fine beta, but who is this girl ,distracting MSK..Hmm ???

MK looked at ARYANS , all were looking here and there..


GM:- Don't glare them..They had to tell anyways..


MK:- GM, nothing really serious ,everything is set..Am starving,can I get something to eat??? Plzz


GM(smiled, knowing he changed the topic):- sure beta.. I will send choto with food.. saying so GM left ,allowing ARYANS-MK their privacy..


Shekher:- so ?? you went there???


Mk :- yeah..


Adi:- Do you think ,your warnings will work???


MK:- I don't think she will back off, she is one stubborn girl… MK said that irritatingly..


Rahul:- so then??


Yash:- If sir came to know that someone has witnessed our works then we are dead..


Nikhil(nervously):- MK speak something ?? Am getting scared..


MK looked looked at him in anger then seeing his pleading eyes he softened and sighed


GM :- chalo have breakfast first then decide..


All ate in silence and then MK decided to not to meet each other for a day and roam individually, all accepted his command and went to their own ways..


MK spent the whole day thinking on her.. It was evening time when all of them got call from Mr. Mehra telling them all to meet with him immediately.. MK got alarmed and all reached to him..


Mr Mehra threw paper on table in front of them..

MM (Mr Mehra):- what's all this ???


Nikhil:- sir, this is today's daily evening ..


ARYANS controlled their laughs, MK looked at the paper in shock ..


MM:- I know that.. This paper tells that there is a group of 7 criminals involved in kidnapping and killing ppl mercilessly and oh see they have printed 7 rough sketches also.. and this news is provided to police by an eye witness… you got that.. ??? MM spat in full anger..


But MK had his eyes closed. Breathing, uneven due to anger , he opened his eyes which were red


MM:- I need ansz MK??? And solution of this problem??? If necessary kill that eye witness .. I don't mind killing a girl ,if she is coming in our path..


All looked at MM in shock and then to MK who, himself was stunned looking and hearing MM willing to kill an innocent..

PRECAP:- Maan :- I have a plan to deal with this problem..

Any guesses for his plans ??? 😉


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ME FIRST !!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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next update jaldi dena di 😃
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