Life partner-5,Ch-33-pg135,NEW OS+THREAD-PG148 - Page 54

Originally posted by: Diva7

tera mujhse hai pehle ka nata koi yun hi nahi mere tummy ki baatein jaanta koi...janti hai tu ..mane tu ya mane na🤣{ tumhare pet ki koi bhi baat mujhe chipi nahi reh sakti...😆}

"Geet would have asked "Ganges",where did it leave its "anxieties" ...u know pallu wat my doctu told me today dat all my tummy troubles r d acute case of anxiety 🤔 😭 😒 😡

how simply u solved d problem of geetu...d more u keep d relationships simple it'll b easier fr u n fr ur luvd ones...lykd how she was trying to connect her own turmoils wid gange ..n trying to find her answers ...fabulous chapter ...

so hemamalini is coming backkk to her laddo yipppiiieee🥳{yes dear,,she is on her way..lets see kya dhamaka hota hai...😆}

Originally posted by: fantesy

mother n daughter convo was nice ..slapping a kid n slapping a wife is two different thngs evn without giving chance to explain ..we need to scold kids to correct dere mistakes bt slapping a mature person is not correct ..itz not proper way of showing rights ..sorry actually i dnt lik slap evn to kid ..so slapping a wife is completely unacceptable to me bt itz just my opinion..

Originally posted by: Shonameet

She is also missing maan!
Loved how rano made her understand maan's situation.
And geet got the cure for her hurt!

Ab milan ki baari...
..
Comimg up Next...
*KITNE DINO KE BAAD HAI AAI...
Sajna.. Raat milan ki..
...

Originally posted by: aditi_2010

once i was very upset and i couldn't explain anyone what exactly i felt...one of my closest friend said " sometimes we just try jumping in fire just to see if anybody would stop us..." and she had hugged me and thus ha made me feel needed...i d'not know why but as soon as i read this part i remembered this incident...just wanted to share...it was awesome...sometimes children can do something so easily which we adults take ages to do like forgiving someone or telling someone "i love you" but strangely we still believe we are stronger and braver than them...

Originally posted by: Slov_perfringes

mereko jayada bolna nahi ata but loved this update. not this one but i loved ur every update. muahhh a tight hug to u . 🤗

Originally posted by: SiniHanda

It takes discretion to choose his quote from amongst many others...so, credits to you for that . Try reading him though, and trust me, many good writers don't necessarily read the greats and not having read them is no measure of your creativity or intelligence. If your writing is anything to go by, you're the last person I'd imagine as shallow or negligent- your characters speak for you . So, read whatever you like. At the end of the day, that you enjoy alone matters 😳Here's another hug for all that humility and forthrightness 🤗

Lovely update btw: Geet did find solace among the glassy heights after all. Your writing took me right into the midst of the pilgrim routes and had me wondering how beautiful it would have been if we actually had had Maan and Geet, amongst the Himalayas on an outdoor GHSP shoot sequence. What beautiful shots it would have made! Well, nothing's stopping one from wishful thinking, eh? 😆 Loved the way you got around the elephant in the room with such a simple solution. That's what is the mark of a good writer. I was upset with Maan myself and like Geet had indeed imagined Maan had considered her an outsider and I'd lacked the clarity to see through the solution which was right under our noses. Bravo... what an honest solution 👏

Originally posted by: muskanp

Nice part

Originally posted by: gudmeet

excellent dear Pinu

the update was fab

U really have a unique style of solving problems{Thanks guddu...😃}

the mother daughter duo are amaIng are so were their talks

reminded me of the mother daughter convo in Beauty

U must be very close to ur mom dear{ ermm..yes...😊}

liked the description of ganga , its coldness and warmth of a rock

when we are angry or hurt how wrongly we can see things

everything are there the way they are but it is only our perceptions which make them look different{exactly..thats why they say..there is nothing right and wrong literally in this world..Our perception actually make thing right and wrong..}

how wisely geet's mom made geet look at the same thing with a different perspective

👏👏👏

I think that is what parents are for

guiding their children on the un even path of life

loved her mom's three reasons and the domestic violence line was really good one{ my personal favorite line from this chapter...😆}

the update was a mix of symbolism and life's lessons and emotions

loved it so much

so our geet now knows or got confirmation from her mom that her maan is HERS

she must be singing

aaj phir jeenie ki tamanna hai

or kyun naye lag rahe hai yeh ganga or chattan{😆}

very very very well written dear

but i was wondering what our dear laddu must be going through{you would come to know in next part...}

not able to talk to his hemamalini

and in a guilt that it was all his mistake

and how dreamy it would be when u will write their reunion{you know i don't write dreamy stuff... don't increase your expectations...😊}

very very excited for the next updates

😃😛

Originally posted by: gudmeet

Oh dear just read ur reply to Nisha

and am laughing like crazy

ur mom calls u YAMDOOT

why dear

and how rightly u said abt perceptions

completely agree with u

no rights no wrongs we all are just different

and yes dear u do write dreamy stuff

when in obsession geet was pouring out her love to maan , and maan's letter and everything was so dreamy

and when u dont solve the mystery completely in ur writings

ur poor readers have to dream it only

so it becomes DREAMY

😛😉😆

But seriously whatever u write is really dreamy and i enjoy it so much