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Posted: 12 years ago
u broke ur promise😆 ...time to open a new thread 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Awww...what a lovely update

Maan was missing her so much that nothing seem to take his mind away. His crying in the shower over his helplessness, hurt to the one he loves and loneliness was so emotional...
and then tadaa...his hemamalini is back and that too in what form...
Whole time they were under the table and lost thier senses kissing each other, I was just wondering what if his mom thought "koi chua toh nahi"...takes a broom and bends down just to see her son in towel, kissing his wife under the table...LOL...i am still picturising her expressiona nd daring to thinkw hat if Maya was still in town and it was hers...she would never come back to thier house again only...LOL

chua and chuiya dono hain...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

what an update yaar... am so happy to have our very old ladoo and hema malilni back...

loved their instant reactions... and first kiss under the table that too which tasted like ladoo😆...

though after reading the update their hug, their kiss is clouded in my mind... but i still remember broken maan... am so happy that geet appeared that nite itself...

i know u have planned to wrap up this story... but plz give us lots of ladoo and hemamalini moments ...

I can't promise "lots of" but there would be some moments for sure...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
sweet...a really sweet and very down to earth story...
LIFE PARTNER was totally a neighborhood story...
no extra emotions...no drama...just to the point circumstances...
ch.33 was the top chapter...coz the reunion carried with it beauty in simplicity...
it was a kind of story which will remain fresh always...n will be ever entertaining...
though your this work was mot as mesmerizing as COLORS( that story still binds me till the end)...but nevertheless..they both are different and I like (only like) this one too...
EPILOGUE was idiotic(not in bad sense...I did laugh)...but I still will expect you not to repeat this experiment...
Overall. it was a wonderful story... Despite not approving some factors of the story...I enjoyed it...
thank you very much...
keep writing...

love

SANJH

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjh89

sweet...a really sweet and very down to earth story...
LIFE PARTNER was totally a neighborhood story...
no extra emotions...no drama...just to the point circumstances...
ch.33 was the top chapter...coz the reunion carried with it beauty in simplicity...
it was a kind of story which will remain fresh always...n will be ever entertaining...
though your this work was mot as mesmerizing as COLORS( that story still binds me till the end)...but nevertheless..they both are different and I like (only like) this one too...
EPILOGUE was idiotic(not in bad sense...I did laugh)...but I still will expect you not to repeat this experiment...
Overall. it was a wonderful story... Despite not approving some factors of the story...I enjoyed it...
thank you very much...
keep writing...

love

SANJH

I am glad you liked this attempt..and hope you did not find the story cliched...
Regarding repeating this experiment,I can't promise you that I won't..😆 I enjoyed writing it and if i ever felt like repeating this style,i would do it for sure...😊
Thank "You" very much for your honest opinion dear...😊

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