Life partner-5,Ch-33-pg135,NEW OS+THREAD-PG148 - Page 21

Originally posted by: Diva7

Nishu di "woh waha kone mein pade" hue update ko aise hi pyaar se uthaiye ...aur... baki aap samajhdar ho😆😆

From last few chapters... Lifepartner has become a serious story. And the way u hav written these parts...its simply beautiful!
Like how aaravs insecurities made him to do what we were fearing from a long time. But thank god... Or should i say thanks pallu that geet came at the right moment.
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Then geets natrual reaction to that situation... Slaping aarav!
And then maan's reaction in the impluse... He had witnessed that madhulika slaping aarav earlier... And he hated her for that reason... So seeing geet doing the same..he didnt expected her to do that..right!
Then his pain & regrate on realising his mistake.
Geets crying when kiran showed that trust in her which maan was supposed to do!
Their making aarav understand that aarvi needs her big brother and they luv them both equally.
Big bro taking lil sis responsibility!
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Geets indiffrence...that sudden distance between them...maans laments...his restlessness...each n every emotion was beautifully described...yet painful.

Geets decision to go to her maayka.
geet said that she was not angery with him for slaping her...if it would hav been earlier.. She would hav punched him!
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It reminds me of raginis dailog in Bidaai... "she says to ranveer...that she has bear all the pain just coz he has given her that pain. Kyunki jise hum sabse jyada pyar karte hai...sirf unhe hi hume dard dene ka haq hota hai!"
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and todays update was filled with pain, regrate, fear, memorise, restlessness, despration & realisation!
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Maan missing his hemamalini and remembering their phone dinner.
His hesitation to call her..fear of her rejection...her indiffrence..maan asking his child-wife back!
His asking to come back to him soon...her helpless tears...
And laddu's imense care & concern for his wify!
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perfect!
Ps: though i like all ur stories and every update...
But last three updates are my fav! These are my types...intense emotions...despration for ur luv...thoda dard thoda pyaar...missing ur luv...wanting them to be with u anyhow!
I luv this current track!
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Waiting eagerly!

palin...with u as writer and with this laddu and hema malini, its difficult not to fall in love with them...i am going gooey gooey, even when they are beseiged with awkwardness and pain of that slap ...can i hug u😆

Originally posted by: yappingduck

palin...with u as writer and with this laddu and hema malini, its difficult not to fall in love with them...i am going gooey gooey, even when they are beseiged with awkwardness and pain of that slap ...can i hug u😆

Mujhko pehchanlo mein hun Don.
Donnish res😎

Donnish Edit:

You know I exactly understand what Maan feels. Sometimes all you want is the other person to yell, shout, scratch your eyes out (as Reva threatens me often) but the silence and easy forgiveness is not something I would wish for ever. That sudden blankness and not having any topics to talk about, that sudden awkwardness, that sudden half sentences which could not be completed... it is something which would stab your heart. And you know the moment Kiran Di told the reason she was sent, like Geet even I felt my heart burst out. It was so beautifully written Palin and I think I am losing a position to comment on something so pristine.

superb part yaar...

Originally posted by: palindrome

do that at your own risk..I might crush your bones dear...!!!🤗

Getting three lines of comment from you is a big big thing for me...😛😊

@Red🤣🤣🤣🤣
What are you saying Palin. She does give three line comment see
Simply amazing
Loved it
Amazingly awesome
Awesomely brilliant
et cetra et cetra 🤣🤣🤣🤣

You keep them very much into their characters! It was touching :). Nice that they had not stopped talking. Laddu is regretting and making up for the mistake genuinely, good.
Looking forward to the next!