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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely concept dear😊
loved the name of your ff😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey nice concept Mahi - can't wait to read your story! Please let me know when you update it!
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nice concept 😊 ll be waitng 😊 & plz pm me too
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Aankhon ki Gustakhyan maaf hon



Lovely moon on da dark sky was giving blessing to one more couple on earth,who were recently tied in sacred relationship of marriage.After two years of dating Saleel & Purvi finally got married.Guest in reception could saw success of their relation,read happiness of their decision in their bright smile.Enjoyng da pleasent music & drinks some were adoring deir jodi,some were giving them blessings but the groom yaar,his only best friend was far from stage(the time he needed him most).Saleel narrowed his eyes on his U.S returned best friend Maan Singh Khuraanaa,whose magnificnt personality had already grabbed attention of more then half guests.No doubts,all pretty girls had their eyes on da 25 year eligible bachleors.His deep brown eyes,tall,muscular body,sharpness of his jaw bone & specialy his killing smile made girls revolve around him.

But Saleel became worried seeing him lost.His eyes wandering,his gaze disturbed..After gretting 3,4 family friends his eyes again searched for him & got surprised seeing him smiling dis time.A real smile from heart which were reaching his shiny eyes.He followed his gaze to found his lost object,reason of his smile.Saleel instantly hold his head"iski ye aashiq mijazi mujhe zrur marvay gii.ise pure function men yehi ladki milli thi?Purvi ki bestfriend...Geet Handaa



Forgetting the whole around he was staring at her.The strange girl who had stoled his senses since she arrived here.Her white lehnga choli wid decent silver work on it giving her an angelic look.Her kohl eyes,her silky hairs, glowing cheeks,shiny nose ring on her cute nose...he was feeling helpless infront of her charm. And then his heart skip a beat,he became frozed as she caught his eyes on her.As a gentleman he should instantly looked away but his eyes refused to move when she lowered her thick eyelashes & looked away.Growing red colour on her soft cheeks beat all da beauty of nature.He found his breath stole when she moved lock of silky hairs behind her ear.

She walked away,away from his sight.Her heart was racing fast because of him,because of his eyes.His staring was not disgusting,not irritating but so intense which strangely made her skin tingle,made her feel which she had not felt in entire life.




He followed her to parking & after 3 hours of 'aankh macholi' he finally tried to took further step,not wanted to lost da golden chance of his life"aap ghar jaa rhi hen?"

His sudden voice made her jumped.She luked at him wid her big innocent eyes:nhi..parking!

His 'jalebi jesa jawab' made him confuse.Is this naughtiness or innocence?

He again joined her as she started to walk:hi,i m Maan. .aap ki tareef?

'sb krte hen' was her simple,straight answer.

He could only uttered 'ok' in her shock reply.As she tried to open her car from key,he interrupted:aap akele drive krengi?buht raat hogai hai.

'roz hoti hai' her childish tone,her simple expressions,her innocent eyes seemed unaware of her own critical words. He cleared his throat as didnt able to found perfect words which could lead to their second meeting..

Maan:mujhe to raat men drive krna mushkil lagta hai yahan,America se aaya hun isi month,yahan k address smjh hi nhi aate.

Instead of sharing her address wid him,she replied'aadat ho jaeygi'

For da 1st time,the great Maann Singh Khuraana,MBA,buisness expert was feeling dumbfolded in a simple conversion wid girl.He took a deep breath:aap se milkr acha lgaa.

She opened her car door & looked at him,for da 1st time in his eyes:mera to aesa koi khyal nhi hai.

She watched as giving a short nod he turned his back & walked far away from her.She took a deep breath.Nothing was new,she repeat her ever green lines which she always used to get rid of flattery boys in college.But wid him it she felt so different.She remain still replaying da whole scene..His shock,his hesitation & in last his puppy face expressions;she brust into laugh.

Her musical laughter stopped as she noticed him still standing,far..enough to hear her.His arms folded,his eyes narrowed. Her bangles,her maangtika,her earings..Her embarrased expressions, lowered shy eyes,trembling lips,blushing cheeks made him admitted for the 1st & the last time he had lost!

~*~

Saleel jumped on his bed & pulled his cover:kamine meri neend haram kr k khud maze se so rha hai?

His smile stopped,he annoyedly open his eyes:u ruined my dream.

Saleel:khwabon ki dunya se bahir aa aur dekh tere aas pass kya ho rha hai.

He dreamily replied:mere aas pass to bs wahi hai.

Saleel in damn serious tone:kal teri dadi aur mom ghar aaey the Purvi se Geet k bare men pouchne..uske ghar ka address pouchne,uska rishta mangne.

Maan confused:kon Geet?

Saleel annoyed:whi,jise to sare function men tarr(staring) rha tha.jise bar bar dekhne k chakar men tune meri shadi ki cd ghissa dii hai.

Maan smiled:itna khubsurt naam usi ka hi ho skta hai.

Saleel:tujhe pta hai teri dadi uske ghar ja rhi hen,uska hath mangne,& m sure uske parents ne haan hi krni hen to tum dono ki shadi.

Maan thoughtfully:aaj nhi to kal kbhi to shadi krni hi naa?aur 1st time mujhe dadi ki choice se koi problem nhi.wo bhi khush men bhi khush isme burai kya hai?

Saleel:smjhte ho shadi ka matlab?

Resting his head on his elbow,he dreamily:haan..har raat us par khtam har subha us se shuru.

Saleel:is subha aur raat k bech men buht kuch hota hai. .tu aese shadi nhi kr skta.

Maan:saale khud to do hafte ka honeymoon bhi mna kr aa gya. .tu kya chahta hai men sari zindagi tere hi bche paalon?

Saleel:arey nhi rey. .meri baat kuch aur hai.men Purvi ko do saal se janta tha.we were in love . .aur tumhara case? tum use theek se jante bhi nhi.pasand,naa pasand,wo kya sochti hai?kya chahti hai?kuch bhi to nhi pta tumhe uske bare men.its an arrange marriage. aur jitna men usko aur tumhe janta hun u both r different so much different.

He quietly got up from bed,went to window:arrange marriage. .haan kbhi mene bhi nhi socha tha.par men satisfy hun,khush hun.jo men uske lye feel kr rha hun wo mene kbhi kisi k lye nhi kya aur lgta hai naa hi kr skunga.

Saleel smiled on his innocent confession:America ki hoor,paryan chod kr tujhe ishq ldane k lye meri hi saali milli thi.

He smiled:mujhe pari nhi chahey,parion k paron k rang kche hote hen. .mujhe to uske jesi hi ladki chahey thi jis ki muskuraht meri zindagi men rang bikhr dey.


Saleel hugged his best friend:tu khush to men khush..Men tumhe is matter men koi advice nhi kr skta men to abhi khud nya hun haan but remember Shadi jitna mazbot rishta hai utna hi nazuk hai.best of luck for this roller coaster ride.



~*~



For the 1st time dy went for a walk as a couple,as an engaged couple.His eyes were not getting tired even for a moment to admire angelic beauty next to him dressed in pink chudidaar.Je was surprised,how terribly he fell in simple trap of her simplicity.How he was in love wid ornaments he never knew before.How he was loving girly colours he dislike before.Unknown proud filled his heart whenever he noticed his ring on her delicate finger.He finally broke the sensational silence:Geet

In reply he got her soft 'hun'.He slipped his hands in pockets:bolo

she softly asked:kya?

He little bit of irritate:kuch bhi..mujhe to lga tha ladkyon ko bate krna buht acha lgta hai.wo chup reh hi nhi skti.

Staring at da dancing waves infrnt of her she replied:baaten to sb k sath hoti hen par khamoshi kisi ek special k hi sath achi lagti hai.

His lips stretched in smile as her words played wid strings of his heart like always.He lowered his face near her ear:matlb men tumhe acha lagta hun?

She didnt luked at him just heart stoleing shy smile spread on her lips.But to his shock she simply nodded in No.He raised his eyebrow:acha?to phir mujhse shadi kyun kr rhi ho?

She simply replied:burre bhi nhi lgte. .

She took further steps away from him,giggling on his expressions.

She gasped as he slipped his hand in her,1st time a physical contact of them:par tum mujhe buht achi lagti ho,tumhari aankhen,tumhari baatien,tumhari masumyat,tumhari shrarten sb buht achi lagti hen.

She looked up in his eyes:kya ye puri zindagi guzarne k lye ...aap k lye kafi hai?

His heart immediatly made a silent promise to tk care of dis kaanch ki gudya infrnt of him.He entwined his fingers in her,a little bit stronger.Lifting her hand up he planted a sweet,assuring kiss on her soft skin:thanks meri life men aane k lye.

They luked in eachother eyes quietly,there was silence but some time silence speak louder dn words.




To his disappointment they reached her home.Before Bidng her good bye he asked:tumhe kuch nhi pouchna?. .kuch nhi btana mean past,future plan e.t.c?Koi demand?koi shart? agle hafte hmari shadi hai..

Geet nodded in no:in cheezon ko naa hona hi to rishta kehlata hai.

Giving him her cute smile she went out of his car.She stopped on his calling,turned to face him.He deeply luked in her eyes which had satisfictions,calmness poles apart to his disturbance.

He finally allowed his tounge to put out his thoughts:tum khush to ho naa? tumhe koi aur to pasand nhi? i mean ye sb jaldi men ho rha hai. shadi isi month ho skti thi ya agle saal. men..men tumhe janna chahta hun par men intezar bhi nhi kr skta. tumhara koi ideal hoga? mujh men kuch aesa jo tumhe naa pasand ho?

He ran fingerx in his hairs as nt able to put out his feelings: tum mujhe pasand ho..men chahta hun.,tumhe par men ye bhi chahta hun tum khush raho. tum mere sath khush rahogi naa?

His honesty were cleared in his words.She luked for proper words to gv him answer,words which could sooth his meaningless doubts:men khush hun,buht khush.. kehte hen jode aasmano men bnte hen,hmare is dunya men aane se pehle hi hmara joda bn jata hai. mujhe aap k lye bnaya,aap ko mere lye..bhagwan se zyada perfct selection kon kr skta hai?. . .Her theory of love,her pov was compltly different from him but he found da same intensity of passion in her beautiful eyes.Flattering of butterflies in her stomach were clearly visible on her face:Thanks..meri zindagi bne k lye.

Her happiness had no limit when she noticed his dimple hearing her words.They moved away their eyes from eachother but still smiling...on their own stupidity.As she again found his dt heart stolng gaze on her she tried to went but he grabbed her wrist.

Possesivness of his grip send chills inside her spine.To her shy,shocking eyes he cheekly replied:gud night bhi nhi kaha.

Her effort of freeing her hand was making him more restless.Stammering in embarasment she mumbled:Gud night.

Instead of freeng her hand,he pulled her more closer:hun?

Annoyed of her body reaction on dis closeness she abruptly:gud night.

How arousing it was to saw her flatterng eyelashes,warm cheeks,tremblng cheeks:gud night.

His lips on her cheek followed his words.

In a moment she ran inside blushing on his actions.While his eyes dreamily smile nt able to wait to live his beautiful coming life.


Family intro & wedding night will be in nxt updt..already written..wil be post after getting feedbacks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very sweet maaneet moments..geet blushing blushing😳..sooo cute.pls cont soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Awsome update
absolutely loved it...
Plz continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Maan madly in love with Geet.
Our chatter box Geet is talking in simple words.
Nice update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
wow awesome update
so for maan it was instant liking (i'm not sure if i shud say love) at first sight
looks like it might be the same for geet.
maan and his cute behavior. kinda worried, but excited 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow it was suoperb👏.waiting fo d nxt update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Update soon :)

Luving it :)

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