ch.1pg4.SS~Beshram Dilbaar & his Blushing Bride

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? Beshram Dilbaar & his Blushing Bride

Happy Valentines Day to all my mohabbatians[/<3] What? men late hogai?But better late then never..isnt it?
Come to the point,here ix one more torture from me. A realy short SS specialy for Love Month[/:$].


well title says it all but here ix a short intro

PROLOUGE
Finally Mr.Perfect has found his 'sapno ki Rani' Geet Hand.A simple,shy,loving girl of 20.After spending four years wid hot blonds in U.S strangelyhe found his heart stoled in Delhi by his bestfriend innocent Saali "Geet" in just a short,reserving meeting in reception.Mercy of his luck,his darling dadi caught his eyes & ask her hand for him.
Widout giving a second thought Adventerous Maan Singh Khurrana said yes to his family...for An arrange marriage.

How will our Despo king handle our Kaanch ki gudya?

Are Sparks are enough to bound two strange souls?

Sharing a bed can lead to love? or it make things more confusing & difficult?

a Khatti,Meethi love tale of a newly married couples wid deir own simple twist,(uske bger to mera guzara hi nhi) wid humor & ofcourse romance.

Precap: Ch#1
WAQT se kehdo. .Ke is wAQT na karwat badle~~
hussan aaghoshe mohabbat men chla aaya hai~~

p.s:i have to decided to start it wid wedding bt if u want me to start from their 1st meeting. .Let me know.

No ande,tamatar please. .Only comments
HIT LIKE if u want me to Continue

love u all
Mahi

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Hanishadevi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept..pls start with first meeting..waiting for update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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INTERESTING CONCEPT PLZ PM ME ALSO
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nice concept waiting for update
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Interesting...start wid wedding... U can add dere first meeting in flashbacks...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb prologue waiting for d update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey hun, loving the concept 😊
The titles sounds really good 😛
Start off with the wedding 😳
You could always go back into flashback to show how they met
Also PM me too 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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from their first meeting dude😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting concept
You could start at marriage but also somehow reveal their 1st meeting in a subtle, smooth way.
And if you're gonna write some stuff in hindi, would you please have English translation! My hindi no good☺️😭, should've listened to my parents.
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wow nice concept...plzzz start from wedding

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