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Posted: 12 years ago
ham to tere ashik hein sadion purane😉
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Originally posted by: sona-rai

yeh lo BARA STUBBLE...




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yeh hui na baat... stubble ho tho msk jaise nahi tho na ho😆
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Part 38

"Alright Dev, I grant your wish!!'' Madhav agreed. He too knew that this would not be good idea to talk everything front of Dadi as she was still weak.

"Thank you uncle' Dev spoke with a veiled smile having on his lips which could barely be seen. He was about to cut call when found, they were not on way to mansion !!

"Where are we going Uncle? It's not right direction to home!!''

"I know Beta! Actually your aunty wanted to see you so I thought, that what can be the best day to take you my home with me!!''

"I dint get uncle?''

"Dev beta,, you're my special guest for tonight!!'' Madhva gave him smile which had hidden meaning which Dev understood very well. He knew now Madhva would not trust on him and so, was taking him home that he could keep eye on him.

"Ji uncle' '

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On other side on phone Brij heard their talk. He understood that Dev was caught but who was the man, he did not guess.

"Who is this man and where he is taking Dev paaji with him? What if he talks to Maan!!! Oh no.. this cannot be happened.. not at all!!! I cant let our plan be spoiled like this!!! Now I will have to do something and fast otherwise'. No!!! ''

He walked in his room and started packing his bag. Went to Rano and asked for her letter

"Brij what happened? This time where are you going?'' Rano asked worrying

"Nothing Maa, I am going to Delhi, its urgent and you don't worry, I will meet Geet also and will request her and Maan to come with me.. '' He looked at Rano and smiled "Will tell her how much we and specially you, miss her. I am sure she will forgive me and will be ready to come with me!''

Rano became relaxed in thought of her daughter. She did not ask more, knowing he would never tell anything about his work. But today, at least she had some scope to meet Geet. She nodded. Brij left speeding up his jeep.

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Madhav with Dev reached his home. After some formal talk with rest family members' Madhva showed him guest room for stay. Dev finally found himself alone and quickly pick out phone from pocket, dialed Brij..

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After finishing her dinner Geet was to leave in room when Maan stopped her "Geet stop!!''

She turned thinking now what happened!!

He came and lifted her in arms. "Maan what're you doing?'' she drew back.

"Did you forget you have hurt Geet!! Now be quite and let me carry you!!''

She stared him with most affectionately, did not accept to blink her lashes even. What if this dream brakes.. No!! she did not want to take this risk.

"Don't stare me Geet!!'' Maan said when found not a blink, away from his face.

"Why'' she spoke keeping as same expression she had

He stops in way. "If you will not stop then I will also do same'' said looking her with teasing eyes.

"I will not stop you!''

Sensing the boldness, together with instance sentiment in her words Maan surprised. He searched her eyes, found she had real express of emotion inside as had outward on her face. It was magical. It was rare. He knew something she was holding back which was making her profound and deeper, but what!

With slow move of legs he reached to her room but never removed his eyes from her. Perhaps, was examining the reality of her words and she did win. She did not let her eyes veiled for once. He kept her on bed with same eyes lock and postured to leave when Geet held his hand, stopped him. Maan wanted to know why suddenly she was behaving so unlikely. What was she feeling so, had this much devotion within few hours. He wanted her to open up with him, tell everything that why she was becoming shield of her own emotions. And now was the right time!

After some silent minutes Geet kept head on his shoulder "Maan!''

"Hm'

"Why didn't you come in my life before?'

"Why! Were you missing me?' he said dearly caressing her hair.

"Haa very much' she looked him. "I had been waiting for you for my whole life Maan''

"How did you know me, Hm!' he put a waving curl behind her ear.

"Maa used to say. Whenever Brij veerji hurt me she wiped my tears and said one day someone would come and take me away from all theses sufferings''

Geet unlocked her heart before him, finding the solace. She never had shared any of her pain to anyone but now, she felt he was the one who had every right to know it.

"Brij used to harm you?'' Maan knew it before that her family was not attentive but when heard from her mouth and felt her agony, his heart could not beat in peace.

"Hm, always!'' she told how being a child, the right of playing had been snatched from her in tender age. How her freedom of going out was snatched when she had not having a proper wearing of Dupatta when she own did not know the mean of it and how in every small and little mistakes had been disciplined by the dreaded punishments. She was shivering with the thought what had used to bear and her hands become colder.

"Maan I was so scared never wanted to live those life. Then always Maa would say that you will come but why did you let me do so much wait!! You know how much I have cried when veerji had burned me once..''

"what!!! ..'' Maan was shocked. He held her shoulder tight. "Geet what had he done!!!'' his eyes were oozing fire.

"uh.. I mean jyada nahi lagi thi!!'' Geet scared seeing his anger his fury. She knew , she had told little much.

"Don't hide Geet tell me. Tell me everything what you have inward, in heart. Whatever you have kept cornered inside just tell everything today.''

"Wo.. once I was in market when a stranger called me from back patting my shoulder. When I turned, he came to know that I was not the girl who he was looking for. He said sorry and left but veerji saw us and then with burning coal.. ''

"I'm sorry Geet!!'' Maan could not hear more and hugged her tighter, more than he had done ever. The imagination was enough for him to feel freeze how would she have faced all those alone!!


"I'm sorry I was not there to protect you Geet!!''

"Brij , I will never forgive you for your deed, will never let you live you in peace. Not in your dream now you should think to harm her again otherwise.. that moment would be the last breathe of your life!!!!!!'' he thought.

Maan was in rage, wanted to beat Brij black and blue right now. The warmth of his arms made Geet so much in peace, her heart was feeling light like never before and she slept. She slept on his shoulder with a fairly smile.

Maan made her lay properly on bed and covered with blanket. He kissed her head than eyes and a peak on lips. Softly he removed her Dupatta from shoulder and slides sleeve little down. The burn mark was still there. His hand caressed the scar and softly he touched it with his lips. He had tears of her pain in eyes and Geet, had a smile of soothe on lips.

Maan stared her still face for while and took a promise from himself

"I will never let you see pain in life which you have experienced Geet. All your sufferings were last and now onward your life will be more beautiful than your dream and fulfilling every dream of your will be the only reason for me to live this life Geet. I love you Mishty''

he left...


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Dev was going to dial brij number when a knock came on door. He stopped and saw Madhav was there

"Um Dev Beta, actually my cell is not working. Can I occupy yours for tonight!'' Madhav smiled.

Having no option Dev gave his phone to him and Madhav left switching lights off. "Good night son!! ''


"I should call Maan tomorrow. this late night is not the right time to disturb him'' Maadhav thought and slept.

Dev had the most maddening expression on face. Now the only escape was Brij for him and he could only wait for his any clever step.


(Please dont bother about precap as in daily writing sometime it takes more times to reach till precap scene than my prediction)


Precap : Maan first gift for Geet & Brij dangerous step..


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


So cute yaar...iss cutie ka Daddy jaroor lagta hei..😛
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😳👍🏼
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Next part in new thread 😃


Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


So cute yaar...iss cutie ka Daddy jaroor lagta hei..😛
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absolutely right... isse kehthe hai daddyji!
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Posted: 12 years ago



Sharmeele Maaneet...😳 😳 😳😉 😉 😉
Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
though am still sure that madhav not talking to maan now is going to arise many problems... but am happy that madhav did not shake hands with dev... ya i was thinking dev would make him in his team...

loved geet opening her heart to maan... i loved the way she asked y maan didnt come before...

is brij ki tho main... am waiting when maan will meet this brij and later turn him to his punching bag and will do kick practice with him🤣

waiting for the next part
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