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Originally posted by: crazydream





INTEZAAR

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hiii kiddooo... baree dino baad...

aweee lovely post yr .. sooo cute gurp of smiley
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hiii kiddooo... baree dino baad...

aweee lovely post yr .. sooo cute gurp of smiley

yeah baare dino baad 😛

i know that now i want updateee...😃
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mona... have u updated part 33??? where is it?
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Heartily thanks to those who read, liked and commented for me 😊

( As i will update this FF almost daily, i could not be able PM for it. so please check yourself every night. Its my sincere request )



Part 33


The next morning,

"Dadima your breakfast' Nakul came with a tray and said.

"Nakul, did Maan have his breakfast?'

"Yes Dadima Geet madam is serving him'

"Who prepared this soup Nakul? Its so good!' she spoke while getting the first spoon of soup inside mouth.

"Geet madam' Nakul had very grin while saying this.

"Hm! Now go'

He nodded and left.

Outside of Dadi room, in dinning place,

"Enough Geet now I don't need anything. I'm full!'' Maan stopped her to serve him more. His plate was already more than full and so was his stomach.

"Maan if you won't eat properly na Dadima will scold me later! So please eat properly!!'' she dropped one more Roti in plate.

"Geet dadima know who I'm so please don't think about what she will do to you'

"Mean?

"I mean that I'm a small little human, not any empty drum that you can store how much you want in it!''

"Haww Maan! You think that I think you a drum. Aap bahut bure ho!!!'' she made puffy face.

"Okay baba nahi sochta. Now take this'

She saw he was holding a piece of bread near her mouth. "I don't want to eat'

"Not even from my hand also?'

She saw him then had from his hand that piece. "That's my girl. Now sit and eat properly'

She sat. "Maan really, I can't eat now. I am doing very important work''

He saw that she had a notepad and pen nearby and now she was to begin writing something.

"What are you writing?' He asked while feeding one more bite to her.

"Wo its essential things for kitchen. I'm making list'' she chewed and spoke.

"Hm!''

"Do I need to writing anything for you too Maan?''

He shook head. "Geet did Dadima and Dev have breakfast'

"Dadima is doing and Dev, I don't know where is he!''

"By the way Maan, are you ready for loosing your bet!!''

"Geet I have told already that Maan'''

"ya ya I know, that Maan Singh Khurana never loose any bet. But Maan how will you do this!!''

"That's not your matter of think Geet'' he stopped his eat and turned to her "You just be ready for coming in my arms'' he smiled.

"Maan!!'' she blushed but then "Ahem!! Wo to tab na when you will win. I know you will not I know how much you scare of her'' she laughed.

"You really think so. Then okay I will show you. Be ready in evening Mishty!!''

She liked her new name and blushed. "But Maan we didn't decide what will be ours winnings!!

"Hmm that you can decide''

"okay then. But let me prepare a proper document for this. I don't believe you!!''

"What!! And what document you will make'' he showed his fake anger.

"That you will see soon. Let me write first. And she write all the bet thing on paper with her side of winning. "Maan if I win then you will have to take me where I will like okay!!''

"Hm! Done! And my term is that if I win then you will have to tell me where I will have to go with you, okay!!'' he spoke casually but had corner eyes on her with a concealed smile.

"Ha okay done! I have written everything here. Now give your sign'' she rose paper to him

"Geet my hands are not free see!! Do it yourself. Just write my name there''

"thik hai'' first she wrote her name "Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana' and then did her sign. Now was going to write his name when Maan stopped

"What are you going to write? Write what I say!!'' She twisted lips "Boliye!!''

"Write Mr. Maan Geet Singh Khurana'' he said and stood up finishing his food, wiping hands in napkin. Till she could read what he got her written Maan had vanished in Dadi room. She followed her eyes till could see him and her every small cell once again fell in love with him. She could not ask more from her Babaji now that more than everything she was possessing in life.

How long she remained stood there she had no idea. She saw him coming back from room.

Maan saw her stood at same place with same pose but had full of emotion face. He knew what she was thinking. Looking him coming to her, her eyes without asking any permission started to create little drops which now was about to fall. It was hanging on her chin and was changing its shape to make a fall. But it never happened.

He brought his hanky and the drop jumped on it happily like had his most wanting place to be lived forever now.

"It's now mine Geet!!''

She looked him with greatest engrossment. Did not know when tears started coming out more. "Geet why are you crying?'' Maan dearly took her in arms and kissed forehead with love.

"I don't like your tears'' he whispered

"Maan Dadima is not here now. Why are you holding me'' she spoke between wiping eyes.

He giggled back. "Bye Geet'

"Bye!! '' she said.

After two hours, Mansion phone rings. Geet picked it up. "Hello'

"How is Dadi Geet'' it was Maan. She told Dadi is fine. "Maan did you have your lunch I sent"

"No Geet I was in meeting''

"Uff kya karte ho aap!! Itni der ho gayi and you not have your food yet. Jaaiye abhi kijiye!!!'' she shouted.

"Geet! Geet!!! Relax Misty let me finish my meeting first I will do later okay!!!''

"No !! Now go and finish !!!!''

Someone called Maan from back and he had to go back in meeting. "Geet I call you later, bye!!'' he cut.

"Maan.. Maan wait..'' but call had been ended. "Humesha jaldi me rahte hai'' she thought and went to complete her household. After about thirty minutes phone again rung. Nakul received and called Geet saying again, it was for her.

"it must be Maan!'' She thought runs and kept phone on ear. "Hello Maan !! did you have you lunch! Aur khabardaar abhi na bola toh. If this time you denied na I will never ever talk to you haan! Maan?... Hello Maam !!! aap ho waha..''

She did not hear Maan voice but shocked to hear a female voice instead. "Geet Beta!!!''

"Maa!!!!'' Geet was stunned'

Precap : "Nakul where is Geet?'' Dadi asked


"Dadimaa she is in her room and some cry sound is coming from inside '' He answered


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Lovely update

Dadi liked the soup prepared by geet

Maaneet teasing each other over breakfast

Rano calling Geet n geet was shocked to hear her mom voice

Cont soon
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

mona... have u updated part 33??? where is it?


on pg 65 😊

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