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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



congrats on the new thread

waiting for the next part...

dadi amma dadi amma maan jaao😉


LOLLL 😆😆😆 Perfect song 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
congo for new thread and waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
INTEZAAR ho raha hai update ka !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
main agayai...
not feeling well yaro.fever hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazydream

How much time more?????


1 hour more 😛😃 its dinner time 😛😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sona-rai

main agayai...

not feeling well yaro.fever hai...


hiii sonaaa.. aww kya hua 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MonaSWrites


hiii sonaaa.. aww kya hua 😲

yar fever ho gaya hai...
abb too khuch behter hoon😊
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Waiting for update..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29


Heartily thanks to those who read, liked and commented for me 😊

( As i will update this FF almost daily, i could not be able PM for it. so please check yourself every night. Its my sincere request )


(My inspiration for this story The Couple who had a forced marriage is celebrating their happy 48th anniversary today. And believe me , i have a personal invitation from them 😉)


Part 29


A few earlier in Hoshiyaarpur, Brij reached his Haveli back and told Daarji that how Geet had unknowingly been married to Khurana's. Daarji was more than shocked knowing how lucky she was!! Few thick lines of proud instantly appeared on his forehead showing his gratified. Brij did not tell his meeting with Dev and what his intention was. He did not want any obstruction in his piece of fortune which was to get from Dev.

"Sach Brij!!!'' A very impatient Rano hurried to him with her most desired question. She had been there for giving Daarji tea and heard what Brij was telling. She was the only person who was always been worried for her daughter since the time Geet had gone. "Where would she been? How is she? '' were unchanging questions were which she did not had gotten any answer for as had not courage to ask to her family. Her heart was weak life was unstable. Her every day each minute were passing like years without any hope that again someday she will be able to meet her Geet. When today Geet' word fell in her ears could not make herself stop to hear everything hiding behind door and now, was looking Brij with most pitiful eyes.

"Bol na Brij really she is in Delhi in her in-laws?'' she was not able to believe that her daughter had been accepted by her in-laws. She shook Brij arm.

"Rano'' Daarji voice made her realize she had not Pallu on her head and had tea in her hand yet. She placed her Dupatta on head with bowed head and gave his tea. Knowing no one will give her reply she turned to leave when Brij voice stopped her steps.

"Geet is in Delhi and she is very happy with her husband!!'' These few words Brij spoke like was doing some sacrifice for his mother but for Rano, it was the most prized words were. Tears appeared in her already moist eyes which had never been dried after the day. Yet it was her desired tears her, wished tears which she relished most. Her paused steps were not moving alike wanted to hear something more, expecting more.

"Don't you think maa that you should invite her here?'' and thus Brij plan started moving further. Rano saw him not getting or it was really hard to understand his intention.

"What you mean Brij!!'' Daarji had also same doubt.

"Maa I know you think I don't care for you and Geet but believe me, since the time she had gone I was in search of her that where is she!! How is she!! And today when finally my men found her with husband, she was really so happy. And now I want to give my sister her part of happiness Maa her part of right which she had upon me on you on this family!!! I want to bring her here for her Pag Phere' ritual which every girl do after marriage!!''

Rano was unexpected shocked. She had no mind whether believe him or not! She was unresponsive. Brij found his plan might slip down brutally from hand. " You don't believe me na Maa. Alright I will show her picture with husband. Fir toh aap mujhpe bhrosa karengi!!''

Though Rano had little trust on him yet the greed of her picture she agreed. She nodded. She wanted to say "I trust you Brij'' but it seemed the most difficult words for to bring out from mouth. She left for her household with unresponsive feeling inward whereas Brij, had worries how to arrange Geet photograph with Dev'

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In Mansion Dev returned at mid of night from farmhouse. Looking around he guessed Maan was not there. It was a vacant all around. His gaze automatically turned toward guest room. A smirk covered his lips with his already drunken mind and his legs started moving there. He pushed door. It opened with a thud showing, it was empty too and Geet was not inside. His eyes started raging, teeth pressed tight against each other and open palm curled into a firm fist. He rushed his room in frustration, in anger when his phone rang. It was Brij but Dev did not pick. It rang for once more. Agrrhhh!!! '' Dev threw phone on floor took out a bottle from cupboard and finished in one gulp then threw with such force it strewed in pieces on floor. Bearing severe headache he slept.

Morning arrived and sunlight flecked on Dev face he opened his eyes. "Ahh'' his body was aching. Few minutes took him to realize what happened in night and then Brij call. Immediately he picked up phone and dialed him back. Before he could speak Brij shouted "Where the hell were you Dev??''

"Come on point Brij!!'' Dev had no change

Brij explained everything and Dev heard while thinking about his next move. "Hmm! Don't worry. Tumhe pics mil jaayenge!!'' They ended call.

The next hour he was in hospital with his photographer friend standing some far from Geet who was sleeping on sofa, smiling dreaming, unconscious in own self, away from Maan, outside in corridor with no one around as it was private part of hospital which Maan had booked for his family.

"Geet!!'' a voice fell in Geet ears and then a hand, rested on her shoulder making her jerk and forced for opening her eyes..

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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww sperrrb update lovu...fisrt of all belated happy marriage anni to that couple...hwww wht d hell dev wanted? why he entered geet's room😡...kamina kitna cheap mind hai uska...wo tera bhai ki biwi hai ...😡...maan ko jab pata chalega naa dekhna teri chehera ka geo change kar dega...on the other side beerji also played the same role do kamina ek sath...😡...lovu precap q nehi di...
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago

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