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so many dils har dil mein maan aur geet
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ham bane tum bane ek duje ke liye
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i just love this pic yaaar
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mere hathon mein 9 .9 chudian hein
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



i just love this pic yaaar

laksu lovely pics...
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Part 31


Disappointed Dev promptly accelerated to his farmhouse. Reaching there he rushed to his room skipping many stairs but without any fall. His anger had no bound, was eager to blast over something or someone. His room door opened with such force that made loud sound and he pulled out his wardrobe drawer threw it on floor right away. All things came out scattered everywhere mercilessly excluding one thing which had been held by him-self in his hand.

A black gun which seemed his demanded posses, Dev glared it with ire smirk. His legs brought him away from his room to the right direction and stopped before another closed door. With one hand pushed it and entered in. His eyes travelled on wall, on front of his own pose and eyes were carrying red blood, colour of revenge inside. With both steady arms he lifted his gun up, to front and fingers pushed trigger with no reluctance.

With a loud explode glass of a picture frame brakes, disordered in air twisting swirling, spread everywhere. On bed on couch on floor... Every place became covered with thin smallest pieces of pricking glass dirt on them witnessing the ruthless occurrence of the very moment and a voice blended among them'

"I will kill you!!! Kill you Bro!!!!!! '' roared with loudest of his voice. He lowered down gun and walked to the ruined picture of his brother who had a smiling pose in it.

"I will snatch your this smile bro like you, had been doing with me. Since childhood always.. always you got more,'. no!! All attention of my family!! My Papa my mama and now dadi.. everyone.. Everyone only cared for you but me.. Always left cornered in my own house. You never let me get any love any attention from them. Do you know why ha!!! Do you know why!!!!!! Because you every time got best marks in school..you scored highest everywhere studied. You became MD of my company, completed everyone dreams and I ' I was a failure. I was failure!!!!!' he snatched picture out from frame, fisted in his hand, scrunched and threw out of window.

"I wanted to open my own casino but you said it would ruin Khurana's prestige. Every time whatever I asked you never let me do but not more!!!! Not more Bro because now I will show you how it feel when you see your own dream leaves you and go in front of your open eyes. You will see how it feels when your most loved thing is snatched away from your embrace by your own blood and you left helpless behind, with your own empty hands!!!! I will snatch your love' Your Geet from you. I will demolish you completely Bro that never you could able to build up your self again!!!!''

He had become mad. His laugh echoed in empty walls of house and became more torturous.

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Dadi entered in mansion with Maan beside her for support. Geet had come before with Madhva and now was waiting for them to come in and for Dadi, to see her surprise . Maan took Dadi in room. As she kept the first step the beautiful and divine smell of candles welcomed her. Dadi felt refreshing and then the full decoration. She shocked seeing her changed and beautiful room filled with her family photographs and crafted curtains and finally the teddy. She was stunned highly surprised.

"Dadi chaliye'' Maan spoke when saw her not moving anymore. She had been paused on her steps but hearing his voice her legs started to walk toward bed. Maan helped her to lay down and covered with blanket. She was staring whole decoration with mesmerised eyes. Somewhere she was relishing it. The big portrait of her with husband, son and daughter in law with two little children caught her attention and her eyes become moist but she adored it. Everything had concern and love of someone that she guessed, who it should be.

"Maan sir Geet Madam has sent this soup for Dadimaa '' Nakul came with a tray and kept on table. Maan nodded came and sat near her, helped to make her sit with support of pillows on back. Slowly he fed her with spoon blowing air in it, making it little colder.

Dadi was looking his quite gesture, was reading it with utmost concentration. Maan silence was very wordily for the people who knew him very well and she was the one alone from them. She sipped soup while looking album which had kept by Geet especially for her.


Soup been finished. Maan made her set in bed, was leaving after wishing good night, properly settled medicines and needed things near on table. He did lights off and stepped out when hared Dadi was calling him. He neared back to her'

"You love her so much!!'' alike slow whisper she spoke

"Haan!!'' Maan soft voice had confidence.

"After everything what happened with you, your feeling for her will it remain same for ever?''

"I don't know what will happen in future. But for now my feeling for her is more sacred than any other relation for which I felt anything ever in my life Dadi. And I will try to make it stable for my life long''

But Beta will you ever be able to forgive her family for what they did? For a marriage relation you should have respect for other's families too in your heart!!''

Maan sat next to her "Dadimaa the day Geet will forgive her family, I will too not have any anger for them'' said smilingly.

Dadi could not see his smile but sensed it. She smiled back which Maan sensed alike her. He kissed her forehead "Good night Dadi!''

"Good night beta'' she spoke and took a side turn. Maan left when soft whisper came in his ears "Have sweet dreams Maan!'' and then silence remains of night...'


Precap : "What are you looking at Geet'' Maan came from back

"Moon'

"Why?''

"Because he was there when I found you Maan in my life'' she looked him with her all gathered love, she had...

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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Dev has gone fully mad with revenge.. Hope he won't do anything that will cause anothe heart attack for dadi.. Poor Dadi.. Scaring for Maneet also.. Hope everything will be fine... Nice update.😊
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lovely part...

dev is such a kameena... waana kill his own bro... i hope madhav and maan comes to know about his evil intentions before its late...

so happy that dadi loved her suprise gift from geet... i loved maan dadi convo... dadi tensed due to the sudden and forced marriage is understandable...

waiting for the next...
Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago

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