Originally posted by: Susegad
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Me first all you brats. HA! HA! HA!
Now I'll read and sleep 😉
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To the brat right below me.
I was talking about all the brats who'll comment onMayyo'supdate in general, but you take the cake, coz you are the first in the receiving line.😆
I wondered that too, that which brat you were referring to! 😆
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Now for the update.
Confused about the first paragraph. Who what, why?😕
The first paragraph was vague, I know that. And since you were already confused about Geet's whereabouts, you couldn't catch on to it. It was Geet's view. She was thinking about meeting some 'him'. 😆
Boy, is'nt he glad he was threatened and cajoled into coming by his mother. Mother's know best Maan, see the proof is in the girl standing before you.😉
Mothers sure do know best and you won't regret listening to them! 😃 And I swear I knew he was going to meet Geet at the party, the moment the whole fiasco with his mother started and when he saw her, I was screaming to myself, I knew it. I knew it. Mayyo I am starting to understand you deeply and it's scary😆
Why would it be scary?! Now that you're starting to understand me better, I'd like to know what you think I'm going to do in the next chapter. 😉
I could imagine Maan holding his breath when his mom said,
'So you're the Geet my son told me about.'
Even I was holding my breath at that one thinking, OMG what is she going to tell Geet and I was relieved for Maan and dissapointed along with Geet( I am loving Gee's thought process😃)
Did you really think his mother wouldn't have some fun on his expense? 😆
Geet's thoughts... Let's see what's more! 😉
I loved Maan's thought process at the party. He went pretty fast from mom you're the worst for dragging me here, to mom you're the best for bringing me here, didn't he?😆
Don't all of us kids switch between these two pretty fast? 😆
Now the musical chairs falling in the lap thing. I had a pure fan girl moment with that one. All that was missing were the pom poms.😆
And you imagined yourself with the Pom Poms standing behind them? 😆
And then there was the puzzle. They are totally aware of each other aren't they. And really, really concious of each other. Now that's progress.😉
Progress indeed! 😉
I loved Maan's moms Omniscient eyes. She really is the all seeing one isn't she?😆
And don't we love her for that? 😃
Oh no Maan, I don't like this self-sacrificing attitude of his at all. I love that he is thinking about his friends, but I don' think he is helping them any, by assuming things. Ok so he is right in thinking that it might be an infatuation, but he owes it to himself to find out if it is that or something more seriousAlso, he knows nothing about Geet's feelings. Actually, he knows nothing about anybody's feelings. He is just assuming things on hearsay.😡
Does Geet even feel something for him..?
And yes, assuming things never does any good...
I have a feeling Aayush ans Anaya like each other, but I'm scared to voice it out, coz i know Mayyo will go and change it aroung just coz she like to toy with us.
You think I'll change what I've thought of if you hit the nail on the head? 😆
I loved Geet and Anaya's unexpected bonding. It was a nice little serendipity are Maan's idiocy.🤔
Maan didn't even do anything and you're all upset on whya he thinks! 😆
Over all I loved everythng about the whole update, expect you know which part. but I guessmaking maistakes isalsoa part of growing up and everything that is happening is just, 'Much Ado About Nothing'
True, making mistakes and rectifying them is a part of life!
I am loving how it all started as a light hearted fiction and now we are seeing characters shaping up with hidden shades and depths to them. We are definitely seeing charater growth.
Mayyo I am falling more and more in love with this story with each update.
I guess it was inevitable for me to build the characters if I wanted to write this story for you all! 😳
Love you jaaneman, you are the best and I can't say it enough😳🤗
Love you too! 🤗