If Only You Saw Me (3) - Page 109

Originally posted by: had2bu

THAP THAP THAP 😊for teaser... 😊

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Maine tujhe pehle hi bataya tha ke not many things can make me angry. So yahan pe jab mera 'fuse out' lagta hai toh it means I'm just upset over some other thing. Nothin much to bother about. 😊

Originally posted by: had2bu

😊

Thanks for the wishes Mari...

What to say about this one...

Sweet sweet super sweet...

I hope it didn't go overboard..

Love the roothna with Mother... Such a way of a mother to make her son do what she wants.

Mothers always find a way to get things done the way they want! 😆

Nice prize to find Geet there...

And we're always rewarded for listening to our moms!

His reactions are so lovable.. hesitant as well as seeking.. wanting to look but not quite looking

The falling in his arms was for us... thanks, very well written

So far, this is the boldest I've ever written! 😳
And since it's not quite similar, let me tell you where this falling in the lap was inspired from. The scene just before Hum Tum. But don't worry, this wasn't the end of Hum Tum! 😉

I love this Geet and Maan. Their tentativeness with each other, their self thoughts...loved

Ayush and Anaya are finding out what it is to be on the other end and so is Maan.

Yes they are, but the question here is, what next?

Its the age when nothing is firmly gelled in the brain and yet there is so many avenues the brain goes through everyday... The age of innocent love... that could have been your title...

Oh yes, this could've been a great title! 😃

Bonding between Geet and Anaya was unexpected but I liked that too... nice surprise..

Superb update...

Badi wali jhappi...

Thanks for the dedication and updating...

🤗

Really glad to have your here Avi! 🤗

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

lovely update...!!!!!!!

aww...he met her in the party was gr8 indeed...

but the last lines and all were ajeeb...i mean he is willing to let go his infatuation for his friends...he is being a gr8friend...but this may hurt geet's feelings..!!!

continue soon!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Trisha4evr

o maan has cracked up... Generally its geet who is mahaan atma... Here maan is playing that role...
awesome update!!!!
Waiting for more!!!
Plz add me to pm list...

Originally posted by: crazydream

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Maan adamant on going to party wid Mom.
Being childish. Though it was fruitful for him.
He is lucky to find Geet there. His heart doing
Balle-balle.

Spending some moments wid her. Musical
Chair was awesome. Geet in Maan's lap. Wow
Wat more Maan cud have. Then d puzzle.
Geet embarrassed. He thot it was wise to
Cum here. Mom teasing.

Maan listening to frnds convo. Feeling sad.
Geet n Anaya at last frnds. But Maan thot
To let her go.

Wen wud Geet be at Maan's house.
Waiting for that.
Continue soon.

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

see mariam, sab reserve karke bhaag gaye.. but i will give u a comment..

G maa hai shock laga kaha last update me maan's mother was all ready to set her up with her son (or so i think)...
chalo G geet nahi nikali to kya hua uski cousin to nikali..
along with MaanEet i also enjoyed the party..
ye AA ka kya chakkar hai..
inki setting karwao yaar ek dusre ke sath kahi hamare maaneet ko alag na karde..
last wala padke mujhe lag raha hai ki AA nahi maan khud hi khudki setting kharab karega..

all in all.. loved the update...
ab aash ki baari update dene ki..

Originally posted by: heytal

Awesome update Maari

😛

Maan going to the kiddie party🥳

Must say his Mom has her way😉

Don't all mothers? 😆

But his prospective shock turned out to be a pleasant surprise😳

Finally his Mom gets to meet Geet

They hit it off well

😊
Oh yes, they did! 😃

Musical chairs and lap fiasco was totally unique and refreshing😉

Thanks Heytal! 😊

Maari u better don't start tyaag n sacrifice in Maaneet lovestory😭

I want happywala lovestory😃

I want a happy wala story myself! Let's just hope that is what comes out of my mind. 😆

Loved Geet's and Anaya's freindship😊

Loved the update

😃
Thanks Heytal! 😊

Originally posted by: CrabbyEntity

justtt luvvddd ittt!!!!👍🏼

geet at the birthday party was a pleasant surprise... the musical chair game was just too gud and Mahiii was ringing in my head in that maneet moment during d game...so maan gets green signal frm his mum and i just luv d equation btw maan and his mum she z utterly sweet no doubt all mums r ...❤️

so maan decides to b a cupid for his friend now..though i wonder wht will make him realize his true feelings for geet but as a friend wht he thought ws justified...

i ended up reading d update with a smile on my face just like geet had at the end!!😊

thnk u for the update!!!

Originally posted by: dreamy4ever

Beautiful update.
Never thought maan could give up so soon.he not even once tried to talk to geet abt his feelgs 😕

Originally posted by: april12

cute update
now maan's mom has invited geet over
is maan gonna give up for ayush? maan dont geet up. i bet geet likes you the same way you do.

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Lovely part dear
maan's mom is no less teasing him over geet...loved their bonding
maan heard ayush & anaya's talk
will he reduce talking or spending time with her
hope they bot AA should understand maan & geet feels something for each other
cont soon

Originally posted by: spvd

part 8
awesome...
very good all his grumblings vanished when he saw Geet there...
oh ho Ayush has feelings for Geet and Ananya for Maan?
but Maan loves Geet...
what about Geet?
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: dreams-reality

amazing

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

superb update