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Posted: 11 years ago
hey guys i am back with part 44

thanks all for your support







PART 44








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Feeling so much awkward and tongue tied for the first time in the life..maan didn't knew how to console her she was crying..he didn't knew but he gave her his stark white handkerchief .. maan was feeling self conscious that how to call her this was something that he doesn't know how to do.. the feelings are discomfited here.. geet was crying in pretext of loosing her family and her parents and that was the reason she was weeping silently..tears were not stopping from her eyes..when she found a warm breath on her neck.. maan looked at her she was looking down..with tears dripping.. he was unable to console her but he knew that some words can stop her from crying…

Maan st : should I wipe her tears..she is crying so badly..what should I do… should I …

CONTEMPLATION AND REFLECTION of his thoughts like she heard..geet looked at him with her hazels still downcasted .. maan was having an urge to lift her angelic face..she was glowing but those tears were making him to look at her ..she was feeling jittery to look at him..maan offered her his hanky she looked at him with tear filled eyes and took it..

Geet wiped her tears.. the white hanky turned slightly black with the tear drops mixed with her kohl… she looked at the hanky and was about to return it to him..when she found some black marks and she immediately let her hand down..

Geet : I will wash it and then will return..

Maan: hmm..

He smiled and she blushed.. this was the start of the something new… two strangers and their journey towards their union that will mark the beginning of a new life…

The couple was welcomed with all the love and affection it was the griha pravesh that maan-geet and arjun –arohi had..the girls were made to hit the pot filled with rise and they walked inside with their respective partners .. arjun and arohi first completed the rituals when it was the turn of the maan and geet .. geet and maan were sitting infront of each other..a big tray containing milk water and rose water was there .. they have to find the ring and this will be played three times.. it was arohi who won their game now it was time for maan or geet..

Nidhi sat with the ring in her hand..she looked at the couple asking them to be ready..and started the game as she let the ring slip in the water with maan and geet's hands.. maan was finding the ring while geet was trying to look into the water..she finally found some metal piece .. she touched it and it felt cold..a wide smile crept on her rosy lips.. she was playing like a child like enthusiasm …

Geet : babaji is it true that I found the ring .. sachi me I will win…

Geet was about to pull the ring when she found maan's fingers she snapped and looked upward maan was suppressing his smile ..she had found the ring he was wearing it was getting too much.. she immediately left his hand and mumbled a quick sorry..

The ring was with maan and two time he found it.. geet was cribbing to her favorite babaji..how can he do this to her..not even once she got the ring..she was having a habit of looking upward and once or twice she looked upward when nidhi asked her…

Nidhi: bhabhi why are you looking at the ceiling is there anything over there.. while arohi was giggling ..arjun looked at his she was truly mad and maan was staring at his wife who was indeed embarrassed.. even daadima questioned her..

Daadima: geet do you need anything beta…

Now arohi couldn't stop herself she told them about geet's little secret..that made geet to pout and she looked at arohi with wide angry eyes…

Arohi: daadima geet is complaining to her babaji.. that's why she is looking up.. wo ceiling ko nahi dekh rahi hai..

Arjun was too shocked he had seen her doing this once or twice but he didn't knew that geet used to talk with god but this was really shocking for him…

Arjun was so confused so he directly asked her making geet to embarrass again and maan was just patiently listening to their talks… arohi nudged arjun to stop but will be..there was no chance of making him quite…

Arjun: geet how many times you talk to your babaji in a day..

Geet was now definitely feeling that the floor will crack and will swallow her entire being..she was feeling conscious of what maan will think.. what kind of girl is she ..till now geet was having no regret of her habits and this particular charm of hers ease her ..she was feeling outdated with arjun's question… maan didn't knew how to support geet while raj and naina were looking at their DIL's already filling up the void of a daughter…

Geet : wo bhai when I am scared or excited or upset then I talk with babaji..

All the members smiled at her genuine answer…

Nidhi: wow bhabhi that's so cool..i will also try this..may be meri bhi koi wish puri ho jaye..now lets complete the game.. phir we have one more for the newly weds…

Maan was having a mischievious smile on his face.. she was definitely sweet and trust worthy..the girl who answered without any kind of hesitation can never hurt his family and him..

The last round of the finding the ring geet won as maan didn't search for the ring .. he just admire her dimples soft glittering eyes.. she was having doe shaped eyes he suddenly discover his wify .. well their married life will be ruled by maan but he will be ruled by GEET..

Maan st : WIFY.. that seems perfect for her…

Next was the apple game.. a big red juicy apple was hung in the centre one side maan and other side geet was standing.. they need to take a bite.. this time it was daadi who gave the green signal.. the apple touched geets lips but before she could bite it was with maan.. the string was moving and the next second as geet was about the apple the apple didn't came and she handed in his arms..though their hands were tied but his face touched her nape..this was the new sensation that geet had..

Geet was so lost that she didn't knew when maan whispered in her ear…

Maan: look straight and take a bite..

She was bit nervous and when she did tried to have a bit too took a bite … he didn't let her loose neither he lost.. geet was gaping at her husband..this was what he did ..he made her eat but he also had a bit.. none of them lost ..

Arjun was getting impatient as this was his SR and now when all the rituals were over can he take his wife with him and not only that he shamelessly asked his mother..

Arjun : mom can I take arohi with me…

Naina glared at her while geet was already feeling jitters this was suppose to be their SR , and what will be its consequences she was already feeling nervous and jittery.. she had never been into this kind of situation..

Arjun: mom abb kya .. don't say me a besharam.. bhaga ke nahi laaya hun ..

Arohi was getting red with arjun's shameless comments and maan's gaze was fixed on geet ..he knew that once this blabbering will be off it will be his turn..

Daadi intervened as she found that maan was lost in his own thoughts…

Daadima: haa kyun nahi..chaliye uthaiye apni apni biwiyon o aur le jaiye…

Arjun didn't took a second and scooped arohi in his arms.. nisdhi whistled and he took her ..while maan was still thinking that it was some kind of joke..

Daadima: maan , why are you looking at me like that..this is a rasam now don't show me your glares…

Naina too nudged maan and in a swift moment geet was in his arms .. this was definitely the thing that he didn't knew ..he never saw this kind of thing…

Maan slowly led her to his room..while geet supported herself in his arm she circled her arms on his neck ..this was kind of scary what if she falls ..she was never in any one's arms.. never.. and now he was holding her in his arms so close to his heart ..his heart was thumping so loudly..this was also new for him to carry his wife..

Geet first heard faint beat but curiosity made her to keep her head on his chest and she heard his heart beating…

DHAK …. DHAK…. DHAK..

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Updated part 44 on request of my loyal readers of SL

Dearies since the likes and comments are getting lesser day by day so I am shifting second life on my blog..

nowadays hardly readers are there who comment and like..so avoiding all silent readers I am shifting this to my blog… and will slowly take off the story from forum…

Will update all the parts there.. along with new additions..

The readers who wanna read like and comment can surely join if they wish…

Here is the link..

~MY BLOG ~


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Posted: 11 years ago
yaar amazing update..maan is slowly discovering about his wife..cant wait for their relation ship to progress further...lovely update.pls cont soon.. yaar you are an amazing writer...pls dont leave geet forum..pls pls...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum updt...loved it...waiting fr what happens in SR...continue sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

yaar amazing update..maan is slowly discovering about his wife..cant wait for their relation ship to progress further...lovely update.pls cont soon.. yaar you are an amazing writer...pls dont leave geet forum..pls pls...



i am not leaving the forum

will be here as a reader
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww so sweet maan didn't let his wify loose n arjun omg so much in hurry.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow finally both are married...

Maan is so sweet..wifey...hai hai...

Can't wait for them to talk and get alone with each other,,
More over to know that in which circumstances they have met before...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome...


its nice ...finaly there relation progressing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow loved the update thanks 4 pm and please accept my blog access request my blog name is maangill
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read te last 3 pts together ..u ocked it suhana
Really the way u explained all the rituals thr bachelor party ,,
Those cute moments ith the songs ..everything was so beautifully explained ...really loved every bit of it

Sach mien it will b so much fun t see maan disCovering his wifey n geet falling for him ...

Thnxx for the awesome updates ..looking forward to read more on thr newly wedding journey ..
One ques will u be giving the after marriage life in season 2 or wht .??

Update s plsss
Luv yots
Sobia
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update 👍🏼

love to read Maaneet moments especially ring games.
Geet looking up for babaji help, Arjun ask and the way Geet answer, Maan admire his wife.
Geet already feeling nerveous when heard about SR... what will happen next?
eagerly waiting for next part
Pls update soon


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