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Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys i am back with part 38

thanks all for your support







PART 38



( THANKS SNEH DEAR)


TODAY MY FIRST STARTED FF

A SECOND LIFE

COMPLETED ITS ONE YEAR..

THANK YOU SO MUCH TO ALL MY READERS AND DEAR FRIENDS WHO SUPPORTED ME...



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The song ended with her graceful moves… the mind set the approach that was of a new going to be bride was well depicted by her simple yet sensous moves… though the dance retained its pure innocence but what can be done when the innocent beauty is all set to make all the eyes to her..

Her last step with the last beat left some hearts fluttering with anticipation and some were still lost in looking at the beautifull bride infront that was still not choosen as a bride… but the game of destiny is all set to make her his..

Arjun maan standing on the entrance and came to his side.while arohi went to geet..the elders came to geet.. daarji caressed her hair blessing her while daadima took some bundle of notes and took her nazar…

Geet just looked down..she was not getting how to meet the gaze.. she was getting all shy …

While the elders left geet to arohi to change as rano instructed both of them..

Raj was going to meet mohindar when he saw the two girls…

Geet took arohi ..she was holding her heavy lehenga clutching both sides.. while arohi was behind her…

But suddenly arohi stopped geet…

Arohi didn't know how to say for the first time she had tears in her eyes ..she immediately shed her happy tears making geet frown…

Geet pouted and with a cute frown…

Geet: itna bura bhi nahi tha that you are crying..babaji see what is my dearest sister doing..dekho na babaji madam is crying.. maine toh sirf iske liye itni mehnat ki thi…

Arohi shook her head in denial knowing the so called nautanki of her baby sister …

Arohi: you wont change geet ..kal tak I was the one who was trying to make to agree to atleast perform once on my wedding now see what are you doing.. meri complaint babaji

se..not fair geetu…

Geet smiled and hugged her sister..

Geet: you like it and don't cry .. warna bidaai pe kya karegi… sab kahenge kaisi dulhan hai that she doesn't love her family ro hi nahi rahi hai..but they don't know the truth that the bride has already ended her crying quota…

Arohi glared at her and wacked her arm..

Geet winced mockingly…

Geet: ouch aru .. god save my bhai from her …

Arohi made a baby face while she suspectingly looked geet scanning her dress..

Arohi: geetu ye dress..ye lehenga toh kahin dekha hua hai..

Geet bit her tougue and ran away ..

Geet: sachi you saw it …

Arohi looked at her with wide eyes.. while geet showed her tongue…

Arohi: ye toh mera hai geetu..while she quickly ran behind her to catch her …

Here raj saw them ..he didn't know buut right know seeing the two young girls with tender hearts he knew that no one can be better for his sons.. and he just wished now that handa's should agree to this alliance…

Maan was sitting with his brother .. when daadima told them the purpose of coming and that too for all of a sudden.. they didn't hide anything but truly said all the reason..though daarji was reluctant at bit when mohindar interrupted saying he needs to ask geet or they have no objection…

Geet changed herself in a white anarkali with her hair braided ..she didn't knew why arohi today made her wear this ..and not even this arohi was behaving all weird today that

geet noticed…

She was with her mumma looking at the arrangements..while arohi was standing quietly in the corner looking at the plates…when thir papaji came…

Mohindar looked at rano and rano looked him smiling…

Rano: main bus abhi aayi..

But he took the tray she was holding and said her the matter that made khurana's to come but he excluded naina's illness looking at geet and arohi…

Mohindar: rano .. khurana ji wants geet hand in marriage for maan ..aur wo log shaadi arjun arohi ke saath karna chahte hain…

Rano for some seconds couldn't gather the new information but as she processed the whole thing she immediately denied…

Rano: aise kaise geet ke liye rishta aur wo bhi itni jaldi aap mana kardijiye hame ye rishta manzoor nahi hai…

Mohindar was expecting only this kind of behavior from rano she he tried to make her understand…

Mohindar: rano aise kaise mana kar den ye mat bhulo ki humari ek beti unhi ke ghar main jaa rahi hai aur maan ka rishta geet ke liye aaya hai..aur maan arjun se kuch kam nahi hai..achi family hai.. aur geet ko jaante bhi hain…

Rano: par iska matlab ye nahi hai ki hum geet ki shadi itni jaldi main kar den… agar uski zindagi me bhi koi hoga ..uske sapno ka kya…

Mohindar : theek hai main mana kar deta hun…

The parents were not convinced with khurana's proposal and were about to say a No when arohi tried to make her mother understand..she was just on cloud nine since arjun told her the real reason for their arrival and from that time she was planning all her life with her sister …

Arohi came and stood by her mother ..

Arohi: mumma ek bar phir soch lo… maan veerji se acha rishta geetu ke liye nahi hoga… papaji is right ek baar soch lo…

Mohindar seconds his daughter..

Mohindar: rano soch lo ….

Rano knew that they were right but what about geet ..was she ready for this lifelong relation..was she ready for getting married…

Rano looked at her daughter standing in a lone corner she was all nervous and probably sweaty too rano knew..geet was twitching her dupatta in her fingers she had heard her parents saying about her alliance and they were ready but was she ready was the big question…

Her eyes were looking with many questions and even there was a slight dampness jut thinking that she will have to leave her family away..

Rano came to geet ..she made her daughter looked at her..geet immediately hugged her and two small tears fall from her eyes…

Rano: beta..kya hua..teri marzi ke khilaaf kuch nahi hoga.. she patted her back to control her sobs.. it was out of situation that geet started crying..

Seeing her crying arohi and mohindar came by geet's side…

Arohi immediately turned all the talkings..

Arohi: geetu ro mat .. agar you are not ready papaji will say a no to this alliance ..meri

geetu ke liye koi aura cha hoga shayad…

Their was tinge of sadness in arohi's voice…

Geet came out of the sooth and composing warmth of her mumma…she wiped her tears just like a child…

Geet: jaisi mumma papaji ki marzi I am ready with their choice..

Mohindar looked at his daughter…

Mohindar: your hapinnes matters to your papaji geet… beta humare ya kisi ke kahene par faisla mat ye… its your life … ye soch lo..

Geet smiled and cocooned herself in her father's protective hug…

Geet: main shaadi ke liye taiyar hun papaji..

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Posted: 12 years ago
WOOOW AWESOME UPDATE DEAR...LOVED THE WHOLE UPDATE TO D CORE,SPECIAALLY GEET 'S CONVO WZ HER FAMILY WAS SO TOUCHING AND GEET NE SHAADI KLIYE BHI HAAN KRDIYA...👏WOOOHOOO.NICE SUPERB STORY DEAR.THANXXX FR TAGGGIN N PM ME..

LV YA AND PLZ CONT.SOOON❤️
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MY HEARTIEST CONGRATULATIONS DEAR...MAY GOD BLE SS U MORE IN YOUR CAREER...WISH U ALL DA SUCCESS
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: NadeeMaaneet

WOOOW AWESOME UPDATE DEAR...LOVED THE WHOLE UPDATE TO D CORE,SPECIAALLY GEET 'S CONVO WZ HER FAMILY WAS SO TOUCHING AND GEET NE SHAADI KLIYE BHI HAAN KRDIYA...👏WOOOHOOO.NICE SUPERB STORY DEAR.THANXXX FR TAGGGIN N PM ME..


LV YA AND PLZ CONT.SOOON❤️



THANKS FOR UR REVIEW DEAR
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: NadeeMaaneet

MY HEARTIEST CONGRATULATIONS DEAR...MAY GOD BLE SS U MORE IN YOUR CAREER...WISH U ALL DA SUCCESS



THANKSSS DEAR

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Posted: 12 years ago
i think maaneet will be delighted to know that they are getting married to each other😳..wonderful update..pls cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love it graphics
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

i think maaneet will be delighted to know that they are getting married to each other😳..wonderful update..pls cont soon...



heheh i know they will be


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Posted: 12 years ago
wohoo ..
firstly heartly congratulation for one year anniversary
its my second FF which i read of urs n trust me i never thought i would enjoy an FF like this where maaneet didn't met on a proper note for more than 25 parts but surprisingly i DID

n guess it was ur narration n those sweet n beautiful scenes with which u build up the whole story ..
n now i am loving it

ur tag line is just so perfect for this story ..a jorney from strangers to soul-mates ..

n now this update simply beautiful n really close to reality
loved the way whole handa's were giving prime preference to geet's happiness n then arohi's thought ..really that saved me from another heart to think abhi bhi koi twist layegi yeh writer madam in maaneet meeting .. BUT then our angel iss too sweet n innocent

yeppieee ..man gayi shaddi ke liye ..
me doing mini bhangra

but plss one suggestion do make maaneet at least talk once be4 fixing up the alliance ...even if u don't want them to see each other still some how do fix up thr meeting once

thnxxx for this lovely update
update next soon

luv ya
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