MG FF: ~Bribed Bride~ Chapter-2/Page-12

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Lovely start :D
Yaar so far its too romantic and perfect :)
Perfect jodi awww :D
Lets see what u have in store for them ;)

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

wow that sure was something
so they have been together for a while now
and gonna be the proud parents of two beautiful kids
all is going well in their world too
but then what goes wrong that she goes away from him
guess we shall know and soon huh
awww they sure do love each other loads
wasnt that just adorable they were with each other in their room
so this seems to have an interesting start
hope she does have the kids though
what ever they may be
guess we shall wait and find out huh
cheers for pm

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

very interesting update...

if Geet is expecting babies and Maan loves her then what is the hinderance in marriage now...

why they are waiting for 3 months...

why some people are so confusing...they don't get confuse making physical relations but get confused bonding in relation...if in mean time they think not to marry then what will happen to babies...and life of a girl who have to bear responsibilities of babies...men are always free...they can go free whenever they want but everything girl have to bear from society's taunts to lonely life...and children born out of wedlock are always looked down upon...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

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take_a_hint

@take_a_hint

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Loved it

Their cute morning interaction was amazing

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

hi dear...u updated? Y no pm? Super start n awesum intro of Maaneet! Well written! update soon n do pm! Thanks

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Story is very promising one.. I'm wondering from where the destruction will hit their perfect world?!

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Sim44

@Sim44

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

awesome start,loved this part.plz pm when you give next update

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

part 1
wow so lovely start dear...
cont soon dear...

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-Ratzz-

@-Ratzz-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

its lovely start update next plz

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

so maan n geet in living relationship without marriage...n dey r going to b parents soon...

interesting starting...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...