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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#651

beautiful update. geet touching his feet... hw much respect she holds for him... loved da way he is taking care n loving her.

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#652

nice progress.. hope Geet tries to understand Maan.. that would make his life too..

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#653

loved how maan made her wish true

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#654

utharate suraj ne, aakash par,

ek talism sa bichaya

badalo ne karvate li,

aur kaale chatha se khelne lage,

phir ahistha se-ek udaasinta ki tarah

ye kirane syayi malal hone lagi

zindagi pathjad si thi ,

berango se lipi puti thi ,

saanse virani thi ,

aankhe sookhi nadi ke daman pakde,

sapno ki raah dekthi ,

zindagi sirf ek zinda laash thi

door gaon mein farishtha tha ,

shayad basanth ka ek roop hi tha,

apne hare bhare patton se

zindagi ko har diya

sapno ko aakar diya ,

apne shabdon se ek vajood diya ,

aaj lagtha hai , nahi mein ek insaan hun

zinda laash nahi , ek jeethi jagthi pran hun

us anravat behthi nadi ki dhara hun mein . 😊

beautiful update ritzy . most touchy one . kehthe hai nadi apni aashayon ke saath behthi hai , kahi chothi badi nadiyon ko apne saath lekar behthi ,apni pani se kahiyon pyaas bhujathi ,humein zindagi ki ek raaah dikathi . samundra se milene se pehle apne paropkari vishaaltha se dharaon ko roop deti aur unka hone ka ehsaas dilati

the same way maan had shown the path of love and ray of light to that life which engulfed by darkness .

awesome one and d best update of wintersonata .

once again u stole my heart .rtzy .once again bow from me for writing such an excellent piece of writing .👏🤗

and thanku lakshmi and others who liked my poem inlast part . thanku from bottom of my heart .this means a lot to me 🤗

waiting for teri ore (one of my most fav)😳

Edited by hermoso - 12 years ago

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#655

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Speechless Update Di...I'm Falling for this Maan...😳That way He full filling her Dreams ...felling just Awe...Geet respect for Maan has increased tenfold.

Maan smiled as well – "Haan…waise bhi mein yahi koshish karta hoon ki mein unki tarah hi rahon na ki…" she fell Maan' s Pain here..i like it 😛

when Geet touch Maan leg.. It brought tears to my eyes....Such Adorable Scene👍🏼

Loved Geet n Meer scene ...the way geet telling abt Maan to meera😃

waiting for next update...continue super soon..(Teri Ore)😳

Thank u for pm 😊

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prati

@Luvforever

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#656

woow... iss maan se toh mujhe bhi baar-2 pyaar ho raha hai... d love he has 4 geet is so pure, selfless & respectful... he gained a position next to god 4 geet wid his help becoz instead of showing pity he showed her d way to move ahead... dat is wat grls lyk geet needs... d part was awsome di & it was not at all dry... i loved it infact... nw waiting eagerly 4 nxt part... 😊

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#657

hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! Superbly written! Maan is so caring! He arranges everything 4 Get to study! she is overwhelmed! Maan assures her! Maan hopes she will accept him someday! Geet goes n tells Meera! n talks abt Maan! Geet treats him liek Gos bt Maan tells her he is not! Her family prevented her studies! Maan;s love is divine n sincere! U r a brillinant writer! 👏

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#658

first of all the song... just loved it... i bow before u dear... the way u select the apt and the best songs for each update is just praise worthy...

one of the major thing which the serial lacked was geets further education... the serial which started off to show how a gal was forced to marry compromising her studies, later they didnt gave any importance to it... am so happy that am getting to see that scene through your words...

the way maan not only got all the information for her but also scholarship , job , and what all... just loved his gesture

also loved so much geets reaction... the respect she has for maan was just oozing from her words and actions...a

no words to describe this awesome part... just loved it...

howz ur kids?

Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#659

updated my comments on page 106

pls check it

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#660

How's your daughter now Ritzy?

You must be exhausted yaar, pehle khud bimar, ab bacche bimar, office, updates. I can only imagine how crazy life must have been for you.

So, I am glad that maine aure Gudmeet ne milke tumhe thoda toh bhi hasaya. Makes me feel good, that sitting far away I could bring a smile on somebody's face. That in return made me smile, so in a rounabout way, faida toh mera hi hua na.😳

Love you,

You take care.

Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago