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Posted: 11 years ago
nice precap waiting for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting teaser
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Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

waiting for the update😃

update coming today yaar...
will try to atleast nahi tho kal subha😕
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Next Part

The next morning Dev got up feeling very uncomfortable. He had slept in with Geet. He quickly got up and exited the room feeling really stupid of himself. But what should he do. How could he sleep knowing that his sweet innocent bhabhi is suffering.

For the whole day Geet dint come out of her room. She was either sleeping or was snapping at anyone who talked to her.

It was lunch time when Geet entered the hall.

Arrey Geet what is for lunch? Samira asked as she glided toward the table.

Khud dekhlo. I am not your servant snapped Geet as she moved towards the table and sat down leaving a very stunned Samira and giggling Dev and Meera.

Samira fumed at being insulted by this gawar.

The whole lunch the table was silent. No one talked as they knew abt Geet's mood and Samira was busy thinking of her plans.

All this time Dev was observing Geet. She seemed very aloof of her surrounding, snapping at people who approached her and being very quiet. This was so unlike her. Her present condition scared Dev.

Lunch was over and everyone dispersed to do their own thing. It was late evening when Dev and Meera entered Geet's room only to find her hurdled in one corner of the room crying.

Bhabhi both called as they ran towards her. Her body shook as she cried into her hands

Bhabhi please stop it... Dev pleaded tying to touch her only to be pushed back

Mujhe chona math. She yelled as she glared at Dev

This shocked both of them.

Aur me roun ya nahi this is my problem aapko kya ha? She snapped at them as she got up and went towards the bed

Bhabhi Meera called meekly.

Mujhe aapse kuch nahi kahna Geet replied in a rude manner. Please leave the room she said not looking at them. Both Meera and Dev left the room hurt and confused by her actions. This was the first day that Geet has not visited Dadi also. Dev entered his room and decided to call his doctor friend.

After the call Dev looked even more tensed. The doctor had clearly told him that Geet is in trauma. Not every person reacts to an incident in a same manner. Some people might become silent and might inwardly suffer while others might just simply blow and close others out of their lives. In this case Geet has just blown off. It might also have something to do with her past. Dev described all this to Meera and both of them decided to take Geet to the hospital tomorrow.

It was late night but Dev did not sleep in his room. Whole night he was sitting outside Geet's bedroom door so that she doesn't feel alone. Just then he heard crying sound and he entered the room to see Geet struggling in her sleep. Dev went inside and held her trying to calm her down but Geet was nowhere to stop. She was living her nightmare again and was kicking and hitting him.

Bhabhi.. he called out as he rocked her...

Maan.. she cried out again and again as she slowly calmed down.

Mere sath hi kyo hota hai she whimpered in her sleep. Pehle Darji ne mujhe marne ki koshish ki abt koi aur. She cried in her sleep.

Meri kya galthi thi? She cried. Me buri hu na? issliye? she whispered as Dev rocked her trying to make her sleep peacefully. But in vain. His heart pained hearing to all this. The doctor was correct. Her past experiences along with this incident has affected his bhabhi's mind.

Next morning

Meera entered Geet's room and saw Dev holding Geet and sleeping in a very uncomfortable way.

Dev she gently called shaking him.

Dev opened his eyes and groaned as his neck and back ached.

He looked up at Meera's concerned face

No he shook his head negatively. The full night she was murmuring and crying in her sleep. I don't know what to do. Dev said as he understood her unasked question.

We need to take her to the doctor Meera reminded him.

Hmm. You get her ready and I'll too get started. Saying Dev left the room with Meera trying to wake Geet.

It was past 10 am when Geet and Dev entered the hospital. Geet was furious with this.

I'm not mad she yelled at him when he told her he was taking her to the hospital to consult a psychiatrist.

But Dev dint want to hear anything from her. He forcibly took her.

Why are you forcing me? Why does everyone force me? She cried all the way to the hospital.

I hate you all for doing this to me. She cried but Dev just drove to the doctor.

On reaching the cabin of the psychiatrist, Dev left Geet in the room and was instructed to be back on one hour.

Hi I'm Dhruv Singhania. The doctor introduced himself but Geet glared at him and turned away.

What is your name? He asked her amused at her childishness

But Geet dint answer him.

Where are you from? I heard you are from bandergaun he said smirking

Geet again dint answer. She dint even look at him. She was busy looking at the walls or at the door hoping Dev would come and take her

Like this one hour passed with the Dhruv trying to talk and Geet ignoring him.

The time given was up and Dev came in to take Geet. He looked at Dhruv but the doctor just passed him a small smile. With a sigh he led Geet out of the building.

The day passed with Geet stuck inside her room. She dint come out or talk to anyone. She dint even go and see Dadi. It was as though she was punishing herself and keeping herself arrested inside her room. She slept on the floor and cried all the time she was alone.

The next 2 days pass the similar way. Geet showed no improvement. On the contrary she only glared at the doctor and sometimes cussed at him. But the doctor dint seemed to mind all this.

The next day Dev and Meera came in and were shocked to see Geet lying on the floor. She looked so pale and her hair was a mess. Meera tried to walk near Geet by Dev held her elbow and stopped her. He dint want Geet to hurt her. Something in him warned him to be very careful with Geet. He moved slowly towards her feeling pins prick his heard as he looked at this fragile girl.

Geet bhabhi you need to get freshen up. He told her. Trying to keep his voice straight.

Geet looked at him with no emotions. Me nahi a rahi hun. She told him like every other day.

Bhabhi. Dev spoke in a pleading voice. He dint know how to help her. She looked clearly like a ghost now. Her clothes were the one she wore yesterday to the hospital. Her face was puffy and her eyes blood shot. She looked as though she had cried the whole night. He knew she dint sleep as he was sitting outside her door waiting to hear her call.

Get out.. She ordered not bothered by the look of hurt that Dev gave her.

Nahi. He also said as he grabbed her elbow and pulled her up.

You are coming. He told her in a strict voice

Geet glared at him but went inside the bathroom as it was not in her nature to be disobedient or stubborn. But somehow she was feeling like a rebel now days.

After 30 minutes Geet and Dev left to the hospital. Geet stared aimlessly out of the glass as Dev drove the car lost in his thoughts.

Geet hated the place where Dev was taking her. She dint like the ever smiling doctor. Why the hell was he not hitting her? She needed the pain. If she was in hoshiarpur her darji and brothers would have killed her by now. Why the hell are they being so nice? She wanted them to give her so much pain that she would get numb from all the feelings she was having at the moment. She dint want to live anymore. She knew she was used goods. Now one is going to believe she is pure now. She shuddered when she remembered the man's face close to hers. She felt snakes moved around her body thinking of how his hands were on hers. She wanted to cry shout and do something that would relieve her of this feeling but alas there was nothing she could do.

She hated how Dev and Meera came to console her. Why the hell weren't they blaming her? Why weren't they keeping her starved and hitting her? She wanted it. She wanted them to give her all this that she deserves. She should be tortured for letting some other man touch her like this. She should have died when that man touched her. But she was alive to rot in that memory till she died.

Bhabhi. Dev called her as he motioned her to walk towards the doctor's room. With a frown Geet entered the room and her blood boiled seeing the doctor smiled at her softly.

Why the hell was he smiling? she thought. But she just sat down like usual as Dev left the room.

Tho tell me aaj apne kya kia? Dhruv asked and Geet as usual ignore him.

He kept asking her normal questions but she dint even acknowledge him.

With a sigh the doctor rose from his seat.

At last he was going to punish her. Geet thought and somewhere this thought made her happy.

But she frowned when she saw him pull a chair and sit close to her.

Geet you need to speak to me.. please he said in a soft soothing voice. This dint have the desired result on Geet instead it made her angry. She took the pen stand on the table and threw it on the doctor making him yelp in pain and shock. Geet froze for a minute. What has she done? She looked at him in fear thinking he was going to hurt her. But the doctor closed his eyes for a minute and then gave her a gentle smile.

Sit down Geet he told her but Geet glared at him

Why are you not punishing me? She yelled why you are not giving me the same pain that I gave you she cried as tears broke down form her eyes

Why do you want me to punish you Geet? The doctor asked slowly.

You should. I have sinned haven't i? I have committed a big sin. She cried as she covered her face with her palm crying into them.

What crime have you committed? He asked her in a low voice not wanting to scare her... but Geet was still crying. Just then the door opened as Dev came in. The doctor motioned him by his eyes to stay quiet.

Geet in her grief, dint hear the door.

Both the men looked on as Geet cried her heart out. Both having only one thought will she open up?

...

How was this update? I have tried to describe the pain she is in. She is just going to be 18 years old girl who has grown up with such beastly family. I hope I have managed it ok. No Maan here. Next part will have Maan in it.

The next part will be up on Friday.

Check out my other Maaneet stories.

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Posted: 11 years ago
dev meera helping scared geet
sam planning against geet and dev
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Yet another Painful update.

Awesome

U described well wat is Geet going through. It was heart touching.
She is in trauma. Dev n Meera can't see her like this. Trying their level best to come out of her state.

Dev taking her to Doctor. Liked her treatment. How she was glaring at the doctor n he patiently waited for her to open up.
Finally she broke down. I liked Druv character.

I want justice to Geet whether Maaneet are together or not. Pls it's a request. There should be something positive in her life age after all she suffered so much.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 16
nice...
poor Geet...
where the heck is Maan?
and only Maan can console her...
hope he doesnt take her wrong and listen to her...
and damn that chudail Sameera...
hope she gets punished so badly...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Felling really bad for geet waiting 4 next part hope maan geet par vishwash kare
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update dear!! waiting fr the next1...😳
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part 16 - loved how geet answered sam back...but she is making new plans to troble them...
feeling bad for geet...how much she is suffering...
liked the idea of dev-meera to take her to psyco doc...
whatever she behaved with doc was justified...
but what she is thinking about hierself is wrong...hope doc will suceed in curing her...
hope maan comes soon and give her moral support so that she comes out of this truama...
what had happened in her past...was she abused in her past
cont soon

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