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Posted: 11 years ago



this is really very funny to see a girl is playing with so many people and they don't even have that much strength to tackle her...

The Mighty Khurana Men are like puppets in Sameera's hands...

Dev ko itni akal nahin hai when he knows Sameera's nature then he should have hired any detective to follow her and collect proofs...he can tell this all to his brother secretly and then they should form a plan to expose her...inka saara paisa saari akal kub kaam aayegi...

nice update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

read all parts...lovely story...loved how you progressed the story...feeling bad for dev...without his mistake he stuck up with sameera...even meera is also suffering b'coss of her...hope she will not create mu bet maaneet and hope dadi will be soon alright...

pl i want geet to complete her study as she is not yet 18, so young ...and study was her dream...
hope dev or geet could tell maan everything about sameera and throw her out of their family
sent buddy request, pl accept it and send pm me

this story is not like that yaar. i would like to make her study but... you have to wait for that. few more updates and the story is over.
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Posted: 11 years ago

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this is really very funny to see a girl is playing with so many people and they don't even have that much strength to tackle her...

The Mighty Khurana Men are like puppets in Sameera's hands...

Dev ko itni akal nahin hai when he knows Sameera's nature then he should have hired any detective to follow her and collect proofs...he can tell this all to his brother secretly and then they should form a plan to expose her...inka saara paisa saari akal kub kaam aayegi...

nice update...

thanx for pm...


the actuall story is from here only yaar. all will be out in the open in few more parts.
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Posted: 11 years ago

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It was nearly 3 days since Dadi was bought back home. She was in the hospital for 4 days and the doctors discharged her warning the family that they should not give her any news that would hurt her. Hearing this had dulled Dev's plans of divorce for now. He had much bigger things to worry abt. For the past 3 days, every individual in KM has been busy and wrapped in their own work. Geet was fully with Dadi and the house hold whereas Dev was busy with Meera. Samira had her own new problem which she had found out recently and Maan was in deep confusion.

Maan dint know what to do. This project was his dream. He had worked hard for this and now when it was time to reap the benefit all this has happened. This was really angering him. The door of the study knocked and entered Dev.

Dev was here to tell Maan everything. He wanted to tell him abt Samira and her plans and also abt Meera. If he couldn't tell Dadi, he would tell Maan. Geet only had told him to relay on his brother and disclose all this. Maan would surely find a solution and all will be good. Trusting her trust he came forward to tell Maan everything. But here seeing Maan's mood Dev was having second thoughts.

Han Dev what happened? Maan asked in a really irritated mood.

Wo bh..a..i.. Dev stammered not knowing how to start the topic.

What Dev? Stop wasting my time and spit it out Maan snapped at him

Actually Bhai, I wanted to ask you what is the matter. Dev spoke as he understood this was not the correct time to talk abt his matter.

Maan's first thoughts was to just ask him to leave but later he thought he should tell him. May be Dev could provide a solution

Dev you remember the project that we were going to do in London? Maan asked

Yes Bhai. You did win the tender right?

Yes. But I have to go to London for 7 days. It is important as I have to sign the contract there. If I'm not there in 2 days, we will lose this contract.

So what is stopping you?

Dev how can I go with Dadi being like this?

Bhai, I am here, Bhabhi is here. What more do you need?

But Dev

No but Bhai. It is the matter of 7 days only. I believe we can manage all this Dev spoke with confidence.

Just then the door opened and Geet came in with a try of coffee.

Bhabhi you tell him no. Dev asked Geet

Kya kahna hai? she asked keeping the tray on the table and giving the cup to Maan

You tell Bhai that it is ok to leave to London and we can take care of Dadi.

Kya? You are going to London? Geet asked surprised by the sudden news

No Geet. I don't think under present conditions I should go. signed Maan. He really was confused

But the project is really very important. Bhai ka sapna tha. Dev added

Tho aapko jana chahiye. Hum hai na. Geet said with a small smile

No Geet you both cannot take care of everything. Dev has to handle office. You have to manage both Dadi and the house. All will be too taxing.

But Bhai.. but Dev was stopped by Geet. She had suddenly been hit by an idea

Hum na ek ladki ko janthey hai. vo Dadi ki dekhbal karegi. Aur me ghar ka kyal rakhungi. Geet smiled secretly as she said this.

Ok. Yeh teek rahega. Maan said after thinking for a while. If someone else was there 24/7 with Dadi then things would be better.

Han. This is a good plan. Dev said, unaware of what Geet was thinking.

Ok you both talk mujhe kam hai saying Geet left the room with a smile. Dev and Maan continued to discuss what they should do.

Meanwhile Geet took her phone and called Meera.

Meera ji apke pase Punjabi suit hai kya? She asked as soon as Meera picked the call.

Geet Bhabhi kya kah rahe ho? Punjabi suit? For what? Meera was confused

Oh fo. Meri hone wali bhabhi, you need to get few sets of this if you want to stay in KM. Geet said in a matter of fact way.

Kya mathlab hai? Has Dev talked to Maan Bhai? Did he understand and accept me? Meera asked getting excited and nervous at the same time.

Nahi Meera ji. But Maan is going to London for few days aur hume Dadi ke dekhbal keliye ek ladki chahiye and that girl is you. Geet filled in her plan to Meera

Kya? Meera was shocked

Yes. You see Bhai is always worried abt you and the baby. So if you are here then koi problem nahi hogi. You get you Dai ma also. She will take care of Dadi and you can take care of my Bhai. Geet teased.

Bhabhi aap bhi na. Meera blushed. Plan is nice but I don't have Punjabi suits.

Ok then we will meet tomorrow and me aapke liye kuch le ati hun Geet offered

Ok. Then see you tomorrow saying Meera cut the call

Geet smiled and turned only to see Dev standing in the door with a shocked expression

Kya hua?

Bhabhi you know you are great right? He asked still with the same expression

Ha han. I know. She pulled her invisible collars and then both started laughing.

Meanwhile in some hotel room

How could you do this to me Rahul? Screamed Samira.

Just chill babes. You can get an abortion no. Rahul said not bothering abt anything

Shut up Rahul. I know but the doctor said I cannot as it would be dangerous for my life. Even if I'm saved I would never be able to conceive again.

Ok then just put the child on Dev's head. kya problem hai

Stupid I cannot as he knows that I have relationship with you. If I say this is his child he will go for a DNA test then all is gonners. Samira slumped down on the bed, dejected. Cos of this child all her dreams were going to be shattered.

Samira closed her eyes hoping to find a solution. Then it clicked her. Her mother. She would help her. But before that she needed evidence

Rahul I need your help. Samira smiled evilly

In the evening back in KM

Maan ji aap ka bag ready hai. Geet tried to say cheerfully but she could not hide the sadness in front of Maan.

Tho tum mujhe miss karogi? He asked her

Ji? Ji.. she blushed and looked down

Ji kya? Karo gi ya nahi

Geet smiled and blushed more and tried to look elsewhere.

Tho you will not miss me. Aur me yaha shochta raha that my wife will miss me so much. Maan pouted and put on a sad face

Awww.. of course me aapko miss karungi. Geet blurted out unable to see the sadness in his face

Accha? What will you miss abt me? He asked in a teasing tone

Wo.. pura apko she replied innocently

Nahi ese nahi. Tell properly

Geet dint know what he was asking. She looked confused at him

Ok me help kartha hun

Will you miss me doing this? he asked as he pulled her to him

Or this saying he gently kissed her neck

Ya yeh he said huskily kissing his way up to her ear and gently nipping it. Geet couldn't think anymore. Whenever he is close to her all thoughts leave her mind and only he remains and today also this was happening. She was overcome with all these emotions and feeling that she just couldn't say or think anymore

Will you miss me doing this? he asked in his husky voice as he kiss her jaw. He stopped and looked at her face. She was blushing but he also could see her full submission towards him. This only strengthened his resolve to go on with their relationship.

He kissed her forehead and her eyes and rested his forehead on hers I want you to miss me Geet. Me chahta hu tume mere liye tadpo he spoke in a really low voice

Itna tatpo jitna me tadapta hun tumareliye. He said looking at her.

Listening to this Geet opened her eyes only to look directly into his molten brown which held so much of passion and truth.

Me chahta hun tum mere bare me din rath socho. Jis tara me shochta hun he whispered as he gently caressed her cheek with his thumb

Me chahta hun tum meri banoo jis tara me tumara hun he confessed his feeling. Geet couldn't believe what she heard

Me aapki hun. Meri zindagi ki har lamha par aapka haq hai. She whispered

Meri har soch aur sapne me apka nam hoga

Meri zindagi apki sath hogi aur apki bahome me meri mooth. Before she could continue Maan kissed her. He couldn't bear to hear this and kissed her will all his love, hurt and longing. How could she think of all this when he was planning their future together?

After something both sat down breathing heavily.

Geet jab me vapas aonga, hum dono ke beech koi nahi hoga. Koi bandishe nahi koi diwar nahi. I want you fully as my wife in my life. I want a family and a life jisme thum meri sath pure haq se rahogi. He said and Geet smiled shyly understanding his words

Geet tume koi problem nahi hai na? I know ki you want this but I just want to confirm he asked hesitatingly

Hum bhi chahte hai Maan ji. She said confidently but the blush that adored her already red cheek showed him how she felt

Just then the door was knocked and the servant entered to get Maan's bags.

Geet straightened herself and both walked out of the room to bid byes to everyone.

Geet and Dev went along with Maan to see him off. Geet tearfully bid her bye to Maan and both were in the car returning home. It was late night and the road was empty. Geet was immersed in her thought and so was Dev. Just then they saw that a man was lying on the road Dev stopped the car and got out to see what happened. Geet also saw this. The man seemed to have fallen off his bike which was lying down near him. Both Geet and Dev walked towards the man.

Aap teek ho? Dev enquired as he neared the man.

Suddenly the man got up and smirked at Dev.

Before Dev could do something another man came from behind and snatched Geet. He held a gun at her forehead

Dekho chikne chupchap nikalle. Hume ladki chahiye tu nahi. The man stated as he slowly dragged Geet behind. There was a vehicle waiting for them.

Just leave her. Dekho me tume pese doonga. Bohot zyada. Pls unhe chodo Dev pleaded.

Oye yaar yeh bohot boltha hai. chup karao use yelled the man holding Geet. Just then one guy who Dev dint notice standing behind him, punched him on the stomach. Then he elbowed his back making Dev scream in pain. Dev fell on the floor. His eyes were blurring cos of the pain. In the blured vision he saw Geet struggling with the men and heard her calling for him.

Geet struggled with the men who held her. Bhai.. She called again and again. One man slapped her to make her silent and she fainted.

By the time she woke up, she found that the car has stopped and the men were dragging her into a house. She struggled but was very weak now. The men took her into the place and there she saw a man waiting for her.

Tho yeh ladki hai? he asked his men but his eyes were glued to her. She felt intimidated by this. The man oozed negativity. She dint want to be here. The thought of what these men wanted to do to her scared her.

The man looked her up. She was really beautiful. Her cute face and rosy cheek. Her soft supple, inviting lips and those innocent eyes filled with fear and questions was so turning him on. He smirked as he walked towards her. Mere badh tum theeno le sakthe ho he said as he grabbed her arm.

Pura hafta rakhenge. Use thodna math yelled one of the goons as this guys lifted her and took her to a room.

Geet could hear the men laughing outside. She struggled in his arms but this man was strong.

Tume pata hai I love a challenge. Jitna tum ladogi utna hi mujhe kushi hogi tume todne me. Smirked the man as he pulled her duppata and tied her arms to the bed

Geet wriggled and kicked her legs, fighting for her freedom. The man seemed pissed. He ripped her salwars pan and tied her legs.

If you cooperate we both will get pleasure nahi tho mujhe pleasure hogi and tume pain laughed the man. Geet was sweating in fear. She was doomed now. Only hours before Maan was showing her dreams of their happyly ever after and now this man would destroy her. She dint want this. She wanted to die but not this. She screamed hoping for someone to come for her. The guy ripped her sleeve of and stuffed it into her mouth to shut her off. He tore of her top. She lay naked only for her inners. The shame was killing her. She wanted to die. The man came on top of her and caressed her tummy

You are so soft. God I think I'm gonna blow before doing anything to you. He said to her. He was enjoying her state.

Have you ever seen a man blow before? He asked her and Geet prayed for her death. She was innocent in these areas. She understood the relationship between a man and a wife but to be force was something she never imagined in her life

You will see today. Have you seen a full man? You want to feel it? he smirked as he lay fully on her.

Geet could feel his thing poke her. Disgust ran through her blood. His vile and dirty words were already making her feel sick and this was just the limit. Unable to stop herself she puked on his face. Even the cloth in her mouth couldn't stop it. The man was furious and slapped her

You think this is disgusting yeh??? Don't worry.. I'm gonna make you do so many disgusting things that this would look very simple in front of them he yelled at her as he wiped his face

Geet body froze with shock. She dint want this. This was something that no woman could take. It would destroy her. MAAN she yelled out repeatedly as fear grew inside her. The door broke open. She heard noise but she couldn't see anything. All this while she was living what that vile man was saying and doing to her. How cheap and disgusted she was feeling.

Bhabhi.. called the voice. She felt her self being shook. In fear she started struggling. She hit, scratched and kicked the person holding her. MAAN she cried out

Bhabhi.. bhabhi me hun.. please bhabhi called the voice and that was when she recognized it. It was Dev not Maan it was Dev. Her blurred vision cleared and she took in the dishelmed look of her Bhai.

Bhai.. she called in a feeble tone. She dint know whether to cry or laugh.

Bhai she called out as she cried and hugged him. Suddenly she realized her position. How she was. She was ashamed. She pushed Dev and tried to run out of that place. She dint deserve to live. She was dirty. Before she could more, Dev held her and covered her with the spread that was there on the bed. He then removed his shirt and made her wear it. All this time Geet stood like a doll not knowing what was happening. Her mind was repeatedly tell her that she was dirty and unclean. She dint deserve to be Maan's wife as someone had touched.

Bhabhi Dev called her in a pleading voice

Please look at me. He begged.

Geet looked up with empty eyes. Mujhe chodo. I need to get cleaned. She said in a voice devoid of emotions.

Dev left her hand not knowing what to do. She ran out of the room and picked up a bottle and smashed it. She took the broken piece and was about to cut herself when Dev slapped her.

Kya kar rahe ho? Are you mad?

Bhai I am dirtied. I cannot live with Maan ji anymore. She cried

Kisne kaha? Kuch nahi hua hai samjhe kuch nahi. I am here and you are safe. Bhabhi please understand. Dev pleaded. He was angry and miserable at the same time.

Nahi Dev you don't understand Geet said still lost in her thoughts

You don't understand. Think abt Bhai. He will die if he knows what you have done. kabhi socha and why should you kill yourself? Us admi ko marna chahiye. Usne guna ki na ki aapne. Please bhabhi. Trust me kuch nahi hua hai. Cried Dev in desperation.

Suchi. Geet asked the child in her was still there.

Yes Bhabhi suchi. Please trust me. Aap ka bhai will never lie to you.

Geet tried to walk but the night has taken her strength. Her legs wobbled and she was abt to fall when Dev held her. He carried her and placed her gently in the car. He drove back home praying no one should be awake.

They reached home and Dev carried a sleeping Geet to her room. He was worried abt her. He then came to his room and cleaned himself. It was good that the goons did not go very far. He was able to trace them. He thanked God that nothing serious happened. What irritated him was the fact that he was not able to catch that guy. He had hit him nicely but on seeing Geet his first instinct was to cover her. In that gap the man had fled. He sat near the mirror and gently applied medicine to his wound and then tried to sleep.

It might be around 3 am when he heard a shouting sound. Dev dashed out of his room and entered Geet's room to see her shivering.

Bhabhi aap teek ho? He asked hesitantly as he dint want her to behave violently like before

Bhai.. she cried. And Dev knew she was living her nightmare again.

Bhai.. Geet broke into tears in his arms.. Dev dint know how to make her stop. He couldn't see his sister like that. He hugged her trying to take away the pain she was feeling.

Yadhi aap nahi ate tho?? She shuddered at the thought.

Don't... he said in a stern voice. Mere hote hue nothing will happen. Ssshhh now calm down he rocked her gently. Soon Geet fell asleep. But somehow he dint want to leave her. The next few hours Dev kept on rocking a sleeping Geet like a baby. Hoping this dark phase will fade.

x---x

Please tell me how this was. This will be the beginning. More 5 parts may be guys. You know who that guy is don't you? Next part next week.

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Edited by ar_art - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet is saved from them.
but wat would be the info Maan receives
something really bad gonna happen wen Maan returns.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hope maan geet ko galat na samjee lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
dev came at right time par geet is still in shock patha nahi jab maan ko patha chalega tho kaise react karega
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
sam wil try to
poison maan brain
but maan knows dev and geet
very wel
i think she only blackmail dev
waiting fr nxt

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Posted: 11 years ago


I want to see samira destroyed...

she should be in hell...maan should make her cry drops of blood...

thank god dev reached in time to save Geet...

hope Maan come soon...

very interesting update...

waiting for next part...


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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
hope maan not misunderstand geet

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