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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

both updates r awesome... too hot to handle...

maan loves geet too much finally he made her his by claiming her...

ab wi nikki kuch nahi kar payegi ...maan should find out about her evil plan soon ...

new banner is superb ..concept is looking very interesting and different ...

waiting for next

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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

both the updts are awesumly fabulously funtabulous...loved it...so beautifully written ...loved how they feeel fr each other...loved the intense part too...really beautifully written...continue soon...waiting fr the nxt part eagerly...

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Hayee u left me speechless and blushing. 😳
And u are expecting long comments 😆
That was terrifically HOT 😳
Very well written though, it didnt appeared vulgar 👏
Maan has been really caring and pleasuring geet. 😳 👏
Geet left her inhibitions and left herself float in maan's love 😉
Cant wait for the next part 😊

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Oye forget to reply for part 27 😆
It was too cute. 👏
Maan planned everything so well for his lady love. 😳
Very well written dear. So well described. 😳
Ratatouille hmmm yum 😆
Eiffel Tower is a beautiful 😳
You wont believe me i live in paris since my childhood. But never went in the tower 😆
It was always crowdy 😆 always seen it from different angle.
We should planned it like maan i think 😃

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

omg main kya boloon...I'M SPEECHLESS phewww.

awesome mindblowing updates yar muahhh.

amazing banner loved it and eagerly waiting for start of new story.

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

lovely as well as hooottt

i was feeling somthing churning inside me

loved it

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sumaiyariya

@sumaiyariya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

too roamntic yar.😳 geet ktna cute nd maan love her most😛...maan want to make geet his😳 .wating for geet results😉

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sridevi

@sridevi_n

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Both Updates are Awesome.

Maan planning to give geet suprise, Maaneet spending time at Effiel tower. Maan giving surprise to geet by decorating the cottage.

Finally they became one. Hope nikki realises that maan and geet love each other and leave them alone once they came back from honeymoon. Wish their life goes smoothly after becomming one now geets insecurities may go.

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

The love making scene was beautifully written 👏.So Geet knew all about what happens during the wedding night ...I was expecting a jungli billi ...

anyways thanks again for coming bc to IF

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Sneha

@sneha137

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

love this ff of urs...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
thanks for updating ur work...😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
both the parts were awwwsumm...😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
the way u potrait geet i was expecting her to be dumb...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
so finally she knows everything...😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
thanks for the beautiful update...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛
waiting for next part update soon...😊 😊 😊 😊😊

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