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Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

wow, u had us blushing😳😆

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aashi14

@aashi14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

very very hot update...😳😳

lovely part atlast dey r one..⭐️⭐️

waiting for more romance...

continue soon...

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Rumana Begum

@Chahhat4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Awesomeee update dear...👏👏👏

Sooo hottt & romantic dear... 😳😳😳

Loved it sooo muchhh...❤️❤️❤️

Eagerly waiting for next part...

Post it as soon as possible...plzzz z z z z z ..😊😉😛

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Both part ws Superb...Loved it alot
Maaneey moment.were Beautiful romantic
Loved Maan surprise for Geet
waitng for next..continue soon

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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

part 28

awesome update

so passionate..

loved it

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

part 27...awesome...loved the way he asked her before proceeding further...

and also her excitement for going to watch effil tower...heheh...jhat se uth gayi!! innocent geet...

part 28...wat do i say...hawwttt...!!!!

also how maan wants her share of pleasure too was so good at his part...

i hope now she get rids of her insecurities fully...

luking forward to their morning after...

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Fantastic update...

Hot and happening SR...

Very beautifully written and captured the most awesome emotions starting from Eiffel Tower to the decoration of the cottage...

Next update soon please

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

aww he is the best aint he
pati ho toh inke jaise hai naa
wow now that was just beautiful
the cottage decorated for their first night finally
he took her to Eiffel tower to see the night lights
now those are really beautiful to be seen in the night
bless he was thinking if she goes out wearing what she did then no one will be checking the tower but her
but how could he forget she would never do that
yeh aapse itna pyaar kaise nahin kar sakte
like he said if he doesnt love his life who else can he love
will they wont they guess will know when i read the next part

and onto to the next part then
she said yes to it oh what we have been waiting for is here
well now you know dear all of your hubby dearest nooks and cranny and he shall know of yours
aww he is taking it slow for her well better not scare her shall we
he is really making sure she gets as much out of this night as he does
haiyye main mar jawan with you even we are blushing and blushing like hell
but am glad after the wait of more than five years they are finally one
wow that was just seriously indescribable for sure
and enough to make us turn into mush
no really that was one hell of a sex scene and the intensity was matched by our maneet for sure
cool new banner for a new story
wait in this who is the possessive one is it geet for a chnage
or maan man that dude can be one hell of a possessive lover for sure
am glad you came back with this
ahhh that was just too magically beautiful to be missed out on

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

That was so lovely update..
Only maan can bring her childish and innocent nature..
Loved his cute jealousy over her dress and then she changing it understanding his mind..
Their SR was just so serene and beautiful with no amt of vulgarity..
Superb part..

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