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Posted: 12 years ago
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HI FRIENDS

again i came not with os or ss but with a poem which my friend wrote yesterday i.e 4.2.2013
this is not her first attempt but would like to share with you all
The situation is such that maan n geet get separated because of some misunderstanding n this is the Geet Point of View

tere jaane se gayi saari khushiya
un khushiyo se bhari meri duniya

[ You gone n take away my happiness
That contains all my world ]

teri duniya se door hoke pyaar ka ehsaas hai mujhe
tu aake milega is baat ka intezaar hai mujhe

[After separating from your world i realize your true feeling of love
You will meet me again i am waiting for that ]

tere aane se mitenge saare shikve
door honge phir saare gile

[When you will come back we will erase all our complaints
Then all the differences will be sought out ]

Ab aa bhi jaa laut kar saamne mere
mita de ab yeh faasle

[Now come in front of me
And wipe away this gap]





i dont know if it will be like by you all but i will be waiting for your precious comment n hit the like button

So that it will encourage me n my friend to share

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yipeee👏👏 me second😃
wow the poem was really gud😊
i dono this much of hindi but used my GURU google translator👏 to read t..
.it was nyc😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi
the poem is really good
i loved reading it
plz cont with moreee and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is awsome loved the feel of the poem
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely poem 🤗 It was embedded with feelings 😃 very nice 😊 it made me remember my maaneet 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow the poem was really gud
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice poem

liked it

thnx for sharing and for pm as well

looking forward for more ... 😉


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful poem with beautiful expressions.
And d most important thing is its languge.
English bahut sundar aur upyogi bhasha hai par Hindi toh advitiya hai.Iski koi tulna nahi.
Dhanyavaad Hindi mein likhne ke liye.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Beautiful poem with beautiful expressions.
And d most important thing is its languge.
English bahut sundar aur upyogi bhasha hai par Hindi toh advitiya hai.Iski koi tulna nahi.
Dhanyavaad Hindi mein likhne ke liye.

bilkul sahi kahaa aapne..👏
hindi ki koi tulna ho bhi nahi sakti..😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rami92

yipeee👏👏 me second😃

wow the poem was really gud😊
i dono this much of hindi but used my GURU google translator👏 to read t..
.it was nyc😊😊



thanks for commenting dear

oh i didnt know that you dont know much hindi

i will translate it for you

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