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Mitu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

As i expceted but i thought about twins

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p.maan

@p.maan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Superb:) maan emotion and realization of truth are described beautifully:)

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your next story
thanks for the pm

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

hain no twin I thougt it would be a twon

loved the update

can't wait for next con sooon

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shri12

@shri12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Awesome
it was a big twist waiting for next

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

atlast maan met his angel...his daughter...till nw he is in pain fr leaving geet fr fulfilling his wish n dream ... nw one more reason fr his pain ...his daughter...fr whm he was not dere whm geet n angel needed him more...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Loved the way you portrayed complete shock on his part.

He could not understand her behaviour but stll decided to compy with her wishes so that she will be happy and stay with him. So he went house hunting. It was so sweet and it was equally heart breaking when she said I know that you are busy.

His thoughts around who the girl was and the way he askes "who r ur parents" shows how surprised he was and then her answer "why u r not happy that she is here"...that just expressed her all the insecurities. Will he accept her, will he be angry etc...

These 2 years have suddenly brought such a big communication gap between them. I loved Geet's explanation that how could she take steps to kill something which was part of him, if it was there. Only sad part was that she needed to explain and thier unsaid understanding was lost.

Maan never told her the real reason for going and hence his anguish was palpable. His thought of Geet going through all that alone which he was scared that she will go through with him was so well portrayed. He is just understanding the enormit of her loneliness, her pain and offcourse the knowledge that he has a kid...a sweet angel called "Maanya" in their life.

Special mention to precap - His angel and princess...Maan indeed has his hands full...

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Divya

@april12

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

awesome update!

so there was a baby.

now what will they do?

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anmirza

@anmirza

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Beautiful!!! Didn't want the update to end =) so wanted it to go on and one =) but the funny thing was that Maan thought about the after pill instantly the moment he came to know that he has a daughter =D