DIVINE LOVE MG SS Epilouge Page 161 27/6/2013 - Page 85

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajshree12

Lovelyyy update Richu...
Loved the way Maan supported Geet...
Awww..Daaima is ssooo sweet...she realized tht until she goes away frm Geet;Geet will not go near to Maan...
Maan took Geet to Durgah...
Haaayyyeee...the way Maan was telling his dependance on Geet..."Usse meri nahi mujhe uski zyada zaroorat hai"...*sigh*...i am totally gone after reading this line..


Thanx sweety 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#cc00ff">hi thanks 4 da pm...update soon! well written! read n commented already! Hope all is well</font>


Thanx sweety 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ash1991

amazing update...

ok so daima left so that geet starts accepting this relation n maneet move ahead in their relation...
loved how maan answered that lady in the end...


Thanx sweety 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KomaLSunny

welocome back missed u alot


i also miss u all dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update after a long time. But worth it.


Hope u won't make us wait for long for another update.
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PART - 13 (LAST PART)

Love is the most beautiful and Divine feeling,which was now found by Geet for her Maan. She knew he never leave her alone. Maan's love is pure and Divine. He love her beyond limits. She knew he is perfect and as told by daima,about his features she knew how handsome he is. So the perfect person like him can get any girl. He is a dream man of any girl. But she found herself lucky as she have him in her life. They walked along with their arms entwined from dargah.. The purpose of Maan to gave her solace is now fulfilled. Geet looked more stabled and content before.

Maan took her to few more places,which are far away from mob and crowd as he love lonliness. Both daily go to that kind of a places. One day she asked the reason behind and in ans he put her palm on her heart.

'Geet i just want you only. Your every gesture,evry moment, and every beat tells me about you,which not possible to hear at crowded places,but here under the sky roof i can feel you more than any other things.',Maan open his heart to her and felt lightened. Her heart thump in rejoice. Every passing day makes her feel fall for him. They love and relation getting mature and deep more then any can imagine. Before talking much then easily understood other feelings.

Geet adored him more and more. Suddenly rain started and both drenched in it. Maan ask to go back home,but she denied as she very found of rain.

'Maan apko nai pasand baarish.',she asked clenching his shoulders firmly.

'bahut pasand thi. Shreya or main pura time baarish me khlete the. Geet tume pata hai Shreya ko b baarish me bheegna bahut pasand tha,or jab wo muskurati thi,meri puri duniya muskura uthti thi or...',he stooped suddenly as someone clenched his throat tightly. His voice turn heavy and and throat chocked. He cant able to explain more.

Geet understands how he feels right now. She raised her palm and caress on his cheek lovingly.'Maan aap ro rae ho? Pls Maan. Aap hi kehte ho na Shreya apke paas hai to firr? Kya use achha lagega?',her words leave him stunned. Though she cant able to see but still she knows he is crying. Maan felt weaken at the moment and filled Geet in a bone crush hug. Geet resipocrate and soothing his pain,which pierced deep in his heart. She hear the thumping sound of his heart which reflects his restlestness and insecurity. Except he loose every relation of his life and now he cant loose her.'Geet never leave me',he hardly utter this line in her ear turn silent again. Geet eyes welled up too. She bear her Maan's miserable condition. Who ever thought who alone able to defeat 50 men of enemy side and they threned from his name,can ever cry like a small child. But beneth his rough and tough body,there is a small heart which is very soft and sensitive and cribbing for someone's love.

'Maan,jo mere bhai ne apse cheena hai use main apko lautaungi. this is my promise to you. I will bring back Shreya to our life again. Use aana hi hoga.',Geet thought while strocking his back softly.

Geet loosen the hug and wiped off his tears first. Then she raised herself and kissed on his forehead. She cleanched his shoulders and come to kiss his both eyes one by one. Maan shuddred feeling her petals on his face. He clenched his eyes and she placed a soft kisses on his cheeks.

'Maan i love you and wants you make me yours. Mark me yours Maan.',she whispered softly in his ears. Maan look her astonishingly.

'but Geet...',before he completes Geet placed her buttery soft fingers on his lips ans stopped him.

'pls Maan mana mat karna. I want to confess this before sevral times but my courage leave me always. Today i want my husband. I wants to live our marrige,proceed our relationship. Pls Maan...',she pleads to compelll him.

Maan cupped her face.,'shh. Geet tume pls kehne ki koi zarurat nai. I also want to proceed our relationship to next level. But are you realy ready for that?',he enquired softly and Geet nodded yes.

Maan took her back to home. Rain is falling conti. As the night darkens,thunder sound of lightening increased more. Geet struggling with her wet clothes,which is cling to her wet body. Maan gazed her antics and his desired rosed at its peak.
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HE steps towards her and help in opening the doori of her kurti. He opened it jerkly and jiper down the jip,exposing her creamy white back. His long fingers sending her ripples of sensation and cold body of hers start burning in her own desires. This was something new for her,she never feels before. She gasped,feeling his cold lips on the bare skin of her shoulder. She falls on his rock hard chest. Maan pulled down her kurti from her right soulder and nibbled the sensitive skin of her neckline,while his hands were busy in caraessing her exposive back. She felt his razor sharp teeth and moaned in both pain and pleasure
Her body aroused beyound expectations. Maan grazed her cheeks and his one hand slipped inside her kurti. Geet twisted immediately and hugged him tightly leaving no space between them.

Maan tilted his head back and leaned over to her petal lips to taste them. He slammed first then,his hungry tongue licking the parted line,seekin entry in her mouth. Geet grasped his nape and shoulder to support herself as she felt weaken at her knee. Her forbidden part throbbed badly.

Maan inavded hungerily,quenching his thurst of ages.'oh she tasted so sweet',he thought while sucking every ounce of her mouth. She responded the way he wants. Both's tongue toyed and he pulled her more to him. He slipped her kurti till her waist. She felt shied and blushed crimson red. Maan tempted seeing her furiously shied wife and wants to eat her alive. Maan scooped her in his arms and made her laid on bed comfortably. He was in no hurry wants to make this moments spl lusiery ful.Maan hoverd her. Both driven by desires and the intensity of a passion such as she nevr known b4. She waved her hand to touch him and Maan letting her hands caress on his cheek. she wanted more than this. she wanted all the things. He bend on her face and kiss evrywhere not leaving any place untouched.his hands slipped down so he could claim the aching fullness of her eager breasts. He squezeed both one by one. She moaned his name in pleasure. He drive her to heaven of pleasure. He lick her hardened peaks with his wet tounge and teased her. He rasied a little bit. He cant stop gazing and devouring he perfect curvaceous body. Hr full pink lips suddnly curved into a smile and his deep dark eyes twinkled. She again felt lack of his warmth and waved her hand in air. Maan remove his shirt and put his hand on his body to make her calm. She shoved her hand against his hardend chest,his deliciously muscular taut body. Maan leaned over her slowly kissed her throat. she closed her eyes tossing her head back with a silent gasp. Geet felt his teeth festing her neck.while biting,she felt his hands skimming from her bare shoulder down to the leanth of her arm. With the proficiency of a master,he read her body's silent language. Drawing his toungue teasingly down the silken valley between her aching bossoms and chuckling softly at her stifled little groan of need. His one hand sliding over each breast,he cupped them as if dey were prize roses. Vry gently he dipped his head to suckle first on one and then the other,tasting each sensitive tip b4 exploring pink halo around it with his toungue. He incresed her pleasure with the cooling dew of his saliva. She wanted him more,wanted him as she never wanted any man.Wanted him without the barriers of any clothes between them. Maan bite on her waist to which she feels pain and cleanched the sheet tightly. Maan leave her for few sec.to gt rid of hs pants and shorts. He also ripped off her panty. Maan kissed on her toe first,then her ankle,her calf nd den thighs. She parted her legs to feel him against her.

But Maan taking his time. He dipped his head between her thighs and flicking his tongue in her V-lips. She moaned more louder. Soon his tongue replaced by his two fingers and he grinned more deeper to made her wet enough. She clenched her pillow more firmly and her naked body made up and down moments. Soon she release her juice which he suck hungrilyafter quenching his thurst he again came over her and adjust himself between her legs. He grind his hardness against her sensitive area. feeling her ready wetness. He entered in her with a jerk. "Maaannn",she moaned in pleasure and encircling his waist in her legs tighter pulling him closer as he thrust in and out again and again in a friction of sec. Maan pulld her up. Geet dig her nails in his bare skin,and suck his lips and his earlobes. He moved his hands on her back. Both made love for next sevral hours until their bodies get tired completely. She is sweating badly and releaze soon. He removed himself and both parted from each other. Both panting heavily. Both laid on their backs to calm down their over excited bodies. Both hugged each other. She is sweating and panting badly. Maan pushed back her messy hairs to saw her angelic face. He kissed her on her forehead and eyes again. Geet hugged him tight and buried her face in cork of his neck where she pecked gently.

'Geet...',he wants to ask from her weather she is ok or not but before he asked Geet confirmed him.

'i m fine Maan.dont worry',her words,her content voice bring smile on his sculptured lips and he pulled her more nearer and slept soon.

Next day when Geet woke up,she found Maan sleeping,resting his head on her chest. Geet smiles and stroke her slynder fingers in his hairs. Maan wake up with her touch. He tilted his head up and gaze her innocent gleamed face. He raised himself and kissed on her nose.

'good mrng mrs Khurana.',he wished her softly. Geet flushed more. And wished him back.
'Maan aaj ki subah bahut khas hai',she told him with a wide smile on her glowing face.

'wo kaise?',he enquired.

'kyunki ye huari nayi zindagi ki shuruat ki pehli subah hai. Aaj k baad hum apni kadvi yaado me nai jhankenge. Bas sirf hum dono.',

'you are right jaan',Maan convienced and kissed on her knuckles. He embrased her and laid back once again.

They indeed found their true happiness and true love in each other. After Shreay's death Maan broked and quit from his life. He take retirement also from his job. But when Geet came to his life he can develop a intrest in his life. Geet who also disperced with herself still fought courageously with her weakness,finally get her true soulmate in form of Maan,who loved her insanly. Mostly Love started from eyes but their Love is Divine,which started direct from heart. Geet never saw him but she know he is her only hers. No need of eyes in such kind of a pure love. And Maan never bother weakness before his love.

They establish new meaning of love. As by time passes Maan shifted to Australia,where his distant uncle leave his property and business on his name as he is alone in this whole world. Maan get incharge of everything. He took Geet and Daima there along with him. There Maaneet love blossomed more. She concieved and gave immence happiness to Maan. Daima came in action and take incharge of her health. Both Maan and daima take very good care of her and her all needs. Maan never missed a single appointment with doc. She gets best care and love from both Maan and Daima. Time came and Geet delivered a baby girl,as she wished for always.

Maan took the baby in his arms and tear drops falls on his cheek. He sat besides her.

'Maan aap firr se ro rae ho?',she pouts and bring smile from tears on his face.

'Geet tume pata hai ye...',before he speak Geet complete his words by her own.

'ye bilkul Shreya jaisi dikhti hai.'Maan again turned astonished.'i know Maan use to apke paas wapis aana hi tha. Ye meri mannat hai,apki Shreya. Bas aaj pehli baar ek apni weakness ka ehsaas ho raha hai. Kaash main b apni baby ka chehra dekh pati bhale sirf ek baar.',her eyes poured tears.

Daima's heart pierecd with her demand. Maan too felt defeated. He handover the baby in Geet's lap and she kissed her softly. Maan enveloped her in his embrace and kissed her.

'kisne kaha tume koi weakness hai. Geet aaj agr main zinda hu to sirf tumhari strength ki wajhse. Tumhari wajhse hi aaj mujhe meri zindagi ki sabse badi khushi mili hai. Tum meri taqakt or insperation dono ho to firr tum weak kaise ho skti ho. Or jaha tak dekhne ka swal hai Geet to tumhare paas mann ki aanke hai jo bina dekhe hi sab pad leti hai. Aise hi tum humari beti ka chehra b dekhogi.'Maan supports her and strenghten her.

Geet caress her face and loved her more. Their small world filled with immence happiness with her arrival. They named her Shreya after his sister's name. Shreya,symbol of their Divine Love filled all the emptiness of both. Daima blessed her childeren ad felt sighed seeing them happy. Geet fulfilled her silent promise and make Maan happy.

Their love proved more stronger then their weaknesses and together they defeat all hurles of their life. Thats we called a DIVINE LOVE...
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
IT was a superb story
Really Devine
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Posted: 12 years ago
so sweet dear😊

lovely ending😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
perfect ending to a divine story
beautiful the way geet could know everything about maan before man telling her says the love they have for each other
geet and maan got blessed with a baby girl and maan was shocked in a good way😳

will miss this story veery much

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