DIVINE LOVE MG SS Epilouge Page 161 27/6/2013 - Page 27

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
fantastic update
very well written
liked a lot dear
continue soon
waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago


Yoyo smiley 003 Hi Soniyo...
Pyari si update do na...Super onion smiley 041
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24




Yoyo smiley 003 <font color="#9966ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Hi Soniyo...</font>
<font color="#9966ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Pyari si update do na...</font>Super onion smiley 041



hehehe sure sweety
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updare Richu...
Tht Viraj is ssoo disgusting..how could her leave his blind sister alone???
Hhaaayyeee...Maan cares for Geet very much...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i loveee the way Maan cares for geet..
poor geet she is suffering soo much but she cant do anything about it..
how can viraj be so heartless and call his own sister a burden?!!
loved how Geet just opened up her heart in front of a stranger.. it was great..
wonderful update 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART - 5

GEET know somewhere he is lieing may b but her heart forced her to trust on him. Both turn silent 4 a momnt. He is very confused how he can leave her alone after her treatment. How she manage this tough life? These thoughts banged his mind like hammer.

"Miss Geet u told me that ur brother leaved u,so how u can manage without him?",he wants to assure himslf dat she even can manage without him thats y he wants to know what she will do? But his words pierced her and her face turn pale,which filled his heart with ennui."i m sorry,mujhe itna personal que nai krna chahiye tha.",everytime when he sw hr pain filled lifeless eyes,his guilt rosed.

"no isme apki koi galti nai hai. Viraj 3 dinn pehle subah ye keh k nikala ki wo ab kabi wapis nai aayega. He wants to live his life peacefuly.but that momnt i was with my Daima,who helped me out in my all works.",Geet told him everything without any hesitation.

"lekin us waqt to... I mean kal rat to apke ghar pe koi nai tha.",he quickly cover up and get involved her with his questionaire.

"ha wo Daima k bete bimar hai,to wo kal dopahr me unhe dekhne apne gau chali gai thi.",she cleared his doubts.

"aise kaise ja skti hai wo apko akela chhod k jabki unhe pata hai ki apka dhyan rakhne wala koi nai hai.",his voice is sharp and reflects the concerned. Though she wont able to see him but his voice's gestures told many things."i mean she have to b careful regadring u."

"dekhiye aisi koi baat nai hai or maine hi unse kaha tha.waise b apne ghar ki har cheez mujhe pata hai to 1 dinn to main manage kr hi skti thi.or jitna majboor aap mujhe samjh rae main utni hu nai.mana dekh nahi skti par sunn or chal firr to skti hu."her words touched his souls. He realized that his sympathy hurts her more.


"main dr se apki reports le aata hu.",he felt suffocated and need some break. He compared her and his pain and found her more courageous then him. 1 side he is who wants to run from life and on the other side he sw her who lost evrything but not her courage to live her life.


Maan went to Doc to concerned him. Wen he came back and not found her in a room his soul shivers with many bad thoughts. He look for her in a whole room but no clue of her. He ran in a corridor madly to search and peep in almost evry room of the floor,asked evry by-passer. His tension rosed and he went to reception. She calmed him and told him where is she. He ran immediately towrds the direction she showed to him. Geet was in Hospital's garden area. She loves flowers. Maan siged seeing her alright and take a sharp breath,which told her that here he is without hearing his voice even.

"aa gaye aap?",she asked politly with a smile on her baby pink lips. Maan sw her amusingly that how she got to know.

"apko kaise pata chala ki main hu?",he asked shockingly.

"apke kadmo ki aahat se. Pichhle 12 ghanto se jab se hosh me aai hu inhe sunn rai hu. To kya kaha doc ne ab main ghar ja skti hu na",she looks very simple but still she graving deep inside his heart with evry passing sec. He is impressed by her presence of mind and conciousness.

"i m impressed. Apne sai kaha tha ap kisi ki mahutaj nai hai.par firr b apko iss tarah yaha akele nai aana chahiye tha.ye jagah nai hai apke liye. Agar kuch ho jata to.",his simple que have lot of hiding meaning which he himself dont realize now. She turned her face in the source of direction of voice. Everytime his concern and care effects her so much.

"apne btaya nai ghar kab ja skte hai?",she changed the topic,dont want to pay heed on his words.

"bas discharge papers ready kr rae hai doc.aap chaliye."

Geet moved slowly slowly but mud was wet there and her foot slipped over it. She was about to fall on ground when a two strong pairs of hand grabbed her. Maan circled her waist and pulled her up to his hard frame. Geet shivered dredfuly out of fear. She bcm restless and Maan too feels her unesyness. He strongly grasped her both arms.

"what happnd Geet? Calm down u r fine.",he worried seeing her wlterdness. Hearing his soothing voice,Geet stop wriggling. She clencehd his arms so tightly,due to which her nails dig in his bare skin.

"Maan aap ho?",4 d 1st time she cald hs name as she ws vry disturbd nd scared. Hr voice mummbles.Hr grip is vry strong evn tore hs skin,leave scratch marks on his arms.Its very paining but he avoids coz her disturbance is bigger issue for him

"relax,shant ho jao.sab theek hai.",he caresses her hairs so lovingly. He trying to composed her. Her breath is get uneven,so Maan hold her arm and made her lead to her room. He helpd her in stting on her bed and went outside. Geet clenched her sheet tugged to her neck,still panting heavily.
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Posted: 12 years ago
PRECAP GEET:pls Maan aap roz yaha mat aaya keejiye... GUYS Me realyy sobbing sobbing 😭 itne kam likes... Pls ab aise mat karna... 😔 silent readers pls atlest hit like. This time i realy need 150 likes. ]
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update

Is There any mystery behind geet Bro missing out ?

Maan is impressed by geet courage n consciousness to live the life

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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum ud dr geet is in dilema wheather to trust maan or nt bt stil her heart wants to trust him maan is realy proud of geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
awee actually both r really cute.maan care for geet nd geet liking maan 😉😛..chalo maan save geet from failing😉😉..waise precap mein geet mana karing maanu ko😲

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