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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites



yup me me me 😆😆😆 kaha thi

books ki andar 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites


oyee tu kya kya quote karke comnt deti hai 😆😆😆

mujhi tu spaming se matlab hai baki saab i don't care 😛
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ohh exam na .. bhul gayi thi 😛 .. ho gaya preparation
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kkiddoopms

mujhi tu spaming se matlab hai baki saab i don't care 😛


LOLL 😆😆😆

okay chalo now update post karne jati hu 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

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ohh exam na .. bhul gayi thi 😛 .. ho gaya preparation

its done long back now to revision is on 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

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LOLL 😆😆😆

okay chalo now update post karne jati hu 😉

tu jaldi karna 😆
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Heyy Kathrina h r u ??
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wowww lovu lovely update...wowww kya demagh lagya dev ne kaise palti mara...satir demagh😡...kher mein khus hu ki kam se kam maaneet ek hai...fir koe kuch nehi kar sakte I hope dadi ma thik ho jaye...hayeee precap is awesome...
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Heartily thanks to those who read, liked and commented for me 😊

( As i will update this FF almost daily, i could not be able PM for it. so please check yourself every night. Its my sincere request )



Part 23

Dev left from there and came in an empty room. After being sure no one is watching him he picked out his cell and dialed a number.

Dev- "Hello!! Did you meet him?''


Receiver- Yes sir .. And he is ready to meet you


Dev- great!! So when he is coming here Delhi?


Receiver- After two days Dev sir..


Dev-Good!! Send him to my farmhouse and be sure Brij should be alone..


Receiver- Yes sir..


They hung up..

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Geet was shocked and so was Maan. Both came to know the very new thing which they were unaware of till now. Geet was shocked, shivered with the thought what if she had been married to that Dev.. "NO".. Her heart throbbed badly, could not bear even a mere think of him in place of Maan. She held Maan hand in anxiety; felt someone would snatch him from her.

Feeling her cold shaking hold Maan busy thoughts came to pause and realized she was there, closest to him. He looked her who was looking him from how long he did not know. But one thing he knew that Geet was his and his only. No one.. NO ONE could ever think of separating her from him otherwise he would just KILL him leaving no place to wince even once. He felt her hand was tensed, stiffed. He knew she was having the same thoughts he had and thus he felt how strong their untouched , untied relation had grown up in few days. He kept his hand on hers, held it, pressed it with intensity with an assuring look that she had not to think anything which causes any thin line of worry on her forehead. He held her head-back with one hand brought her face nearer. Geet could feel how rigid his hold was. She started to feel sensation, butterflies in her body with the closeness which he was decreasing with every passing moment. Maan other hand went on her waist clutched it tight pressed it. He had possessiveness in his hold a fire which could burn everyone everything which would come in between his and hers. Geet was not sure what he wanted to do.. What was running in his mind but one thing she was sure on that he loved her so much.. Much beyond for any most treasured thing one could.. Much beyond one could do with other. A love which could scarifies the last breath of his for a dying loved one's. Love which could see through the image of other's hidden heart without opening his eyes. Love which could feel the presence of other's without having a smell of him or her but could hear breathe from poles apart distance. That much she found love for her in his every expression and act. She was numb freeze immobilized but loving and accepting his moves with heart.


Maan brought her face near him. Her breathe was wheezing coming in and going out with so much difficulties that he could count it easily. But he was not free to do that. He was engaged in his own thoughts, his own rage filled thoughts which could rip him apart in pieces without giving a pain and guilt but will savour though. He wanted her for him forever. He did not need any ritual any rule but a heart to accept his longing for her.. for her body ..for her soul. But.. not without having her agreement in it.


Geet felt his stop, his hesitation, his increasing emotional turmoil. She looked his eyes were closed, trying compressing his inner longing which caused giving redness and stiffness to his face. She remembered her own words that they were not married. She felt a lump in heart knowing how he was following her belief so neatly, holding his own yearning back, however how much painful it would be for him. Tears welled up in her eyes washing her every barrier of unnatural customs, every barrier which was stopping her to cuddle him up in her concealed embrace from where he could reach out inside her soul. She lifted her hand and kept on his cheek. He shrunk finding his wait was over but did not open his eyes. she waited for his move but when did not get, started to caressed his cheek softly, giving him time to accept that she had given her affirmation in whatever he was waiting for. After doing taking her move she was not sure what to do next so her hand been paused on his face unsure where to head now. Maan smiled. He was calm. Her touch made him calm and he was enjoying her act, was waiting for more but when she stopped he felt dart in heart. In jerk he opens his eyes to see why she paused. Did she feel guilt? But witnessing the red hue of her face his heart felt full. "No she is not guilt but shying!! '' he thought enjoyed his thought. Her blush her shyness that for me, for accepting my authority on her' made him fly on cloud nine. Her bowed lashes were inviting him and he took his step, kissed those eyes one by one giving her pleasure of sensation. She clutched his shirt tight in reflex was breathing hard. The time had stopped for them but not for all. Maan heard sound of livingness around him and came back in sense thinking where they were. He withdrew from her. Geet felt chillness suddenly and opened her eyes to see, he was looking her lovingly. She blushed smiling. Maan gave a tender kiss on her forehead gladly for her complete submission. "Dadi!'' Maan said .. she nodded.


They both came back to Dadi room where she was still. Again an ache comes and filled Maan heart with grieve but she kept her hand on his heart, made him stronger and quite relax. He kept his arm around her shoulder took her in his embrace by side. She kept her head on his shoulder took his support accepted it. Both looked a weak old lady was suffering.. Was in pain.. Battling with life.. Through the glass door…



Precap : "Maan what're you doing. pls mujhe niche utaariye''

"kyu Geet tumhe mere sath akele me dar lagta hai "😉


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