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piya27

@piya27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#571

I would love it more he darjee and pammi are punished brutally but a very painful update

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#572

Very beautifully written palin

It was more painful part than earlier one...geet is so innocent. I had tears reading that part, when she told rano her meaning of rape...sach me duniya me bhagwan hai, to kaha hai, kya vo ye sab dekh anhi raha tha...crushing innocent life of innocent geet...but still she was consouling her mother not to cry

Ufff...this darji was worse than the real darji of GHSP...he killed channi just to keep intact his reputation...at least balwinder had some sense that he told mohinder about geet's marriage

Now what darji was planning

Is that maan in the start who was watching all the chaos

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palindrome

@palindrome

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#573

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
Very beautifully written palin
It was more painful part than earlier one...geet is so innocent. I had tears reading that part, when she told rano her meaning of rape...sach me duniya me bhagwan hai, to kaha hai, kya vo ye sab dekh anhi raha tha...crushing innocent life of innocent geet...but still she was consouling her mother not to cry
Ufff...this darji was worse than the real darji of GHSP...he killed channi just to keep intact his reputation...at least balwinder had some sense that he told mohinder about geet's marriage
Now what darji was planning
Is that maan in the start who was watching all the chaos

No dear he is balwinder..

Maan toh delhi mein hai na abhi..he is only 12...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#574

Originally posted by: palindrome

No dear he is balwinder..
Maan toh delhi mein hai na abhi..he is only 12...

Oh...yes...vo to delhi me hai

Geet me itni involve ho gayi ke mai maan ke baare me bhool gayi

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Susegad

@Susegad

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#575

Originally posted by: palindrome

Complete comment caused much needed relief to me...😃
You are absolutely right about bringing a change in society and culture..Punishments can't solve anything..The mentality should be changed...
Everyone is asking me to send them to jail..As a writer,i don't know anything about all the legal procedures and i don't want to add imaginary things in my story.I have no idea what should be done according to law once mohinder had filed a FIR against them...
Parjai ji,I prefer to research alot before adding a particular thing in my update..right now i don't want to spend my time in researching all the legal details for them,..hence i have chosen to attack on their sick mentality rather than making them rot in prison...
PS- i was googling about the "pistols" while writing this update..If my mum would have seen me,you can imagine what she would have thought...🤣

Same pinch Pilli. You have no idea how long I googled for the damned IPC code, in regards to attacking a cop, for Pari and finally gave up the search as futile and went the easy route and put 123😆

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#576

Originally posted by: Susegad

Whatever punishment you have planned will be perfect, I'm sure. Most of the readers are in a reactionary mode right now. They are in a 'maro, mat chodo' frame of mind. But you as an author have had time to live with these characters and these kind of things are not solved easily just through punishments. To see real change in people's attitudes, the whole Soci-Cultural environment has to change and that definitely takes time and effort.

So don'tworry too much about it and just continue to write. We all want that from you.

Very well said Nisha...street justice is usually never possible and can probably be never correct too...

one question a person should ask is - Is the punishment in any way helping the victim and is it avoiding the problem again. If not, justice has to be served by law but whatever emotional rage we may feel is incidental...

We may want to hang Daarji/Pammi but isn't law taking it's course or some way they become example to village a better solution. Villagers probably judged what happened but their silence and acceptance is as chilly and sordid as the act...

Sokie's mother is a greedy woman...her own son should show her the mirror of life

All I am saying is Palin, don't worry about the reaction of the readers. They are emotional outburst wanting to take out rage on fictional characters. But as a writer, you will want to keep things realistic, even keeping in mind the setting and Geet's welfare...they are your characters and there is no right or wrong way...in the end, does everyone get justice in this world and if yes, is it always in tune to the act and as expected. No right...

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#577

Read further discussion Palin between you and Nisha...

I agree with your POV...you want to reach to the main story quickly and it is ok...as I said earlier...a village setting actually gives you as a writer a flexibility to deal with this issue as you want...most of the times, these cases don't come to light leave alone proper justice...

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#578

Exactly Ritzy. If real life played out by the rules, we'd be living in an utopian world.

Punishing them is the right thing, by the book of rules we live by, but they are not people who live by the same rules. There is no correct or wrong way of punishing them. Even if they escape punishment, as much as it would madden me, I would think that to be a much more realistic portrayal.

Good analysis Ritzy. I loved it.👍🏼