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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

"Kahan jaaogi, kab tak bhagogi, laut kar tumhe yahi aana hein waapis mere paas jaise mein aaya hoon thak kar, haar kar, apne aap se ladd kar, bahot koshish ki meine tumhe bhulaane ki, tumhe yaad na karne ki par haar gaya kyunki yaad usse kiya jaata hein jisse bhulaya jaaye par jo dil, dimaag aur sanson mein bas gaya ho usse koi kaise bhula sakta hein. Phir bhi tum koshish karna chahti ho to jao mein tumhe nahi rokunga par jaane se pehle meri amaanat jo tumhare paas hein usse mitta do aur tumhaari ek amaanat jo mere haath mein hein usse le jao".

i loved this part..

superb update...

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alekhika

@alekhika20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Superb part,luv it.
Waiting 4 their confrontation.

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

wow wow

that was so beautiful

hain.. maaneet together.. muskan gala land

amazing.. I loved every word spoken by maan👏👏👏

simply amazing

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

hi js read pt 2 - 4 nw! Added u as a buddy! Pls accept n add me to ur pm list! Sorry 4 late lieks n comments! Fab emotional updates! Thank God Maan sees her b4 she left! update soon! Well written

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sweetkj

@sweetkj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

wow heytal..!!

you are doing wonderful.!!

awesome yaar..

so confrontation coming up..!! waiting for it..!!

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change12

@change12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

wonderful story pls add me to ur pm list

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@Koolsmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Beautiful morning 😳
They have been bound to b togather now 😃
She still wants to leave
Maan stopped her 😃
Powerful dialogues of Maan, Heytu 👏
Priceless Possession, thoughtful Heytu 👏 😉
Loved it 😃
Waiting for more 😉
The story is appealing me to read more n more n more 😉

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

I was literally holding my breath when Maan's voice called out just before she steps out of the house. I was praying in my head, 'no Geet don't go, don't go!' 😆

And when he did stop her, I was like 'phew'. 😆

So we have a new piece of information here. I have to say, Heytal, I never expected the possession to be divorce papers! It's difficult to decide whether Geet is more happy because she is free or more sorrowful because she got this in return for every single day she spent on her family...

Glad that Maan came clean with Geet about his feelings. Now waiting to see if he can get Geet to agree to stay with him, like his wife. I'm curious to know about the other morning she thought if, though.

Confrontation better come soon Heytal! Thanks for updating! 🤗

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640638

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

First of all this seemed like an integral part of the story

While the words you have used convey a long story, the timeline is only a day

Makes me wonder if Maan had never driven that road, never seen her, would he have taken this step?

In that sense, Geet would wonder how far she can trust him. I know she loves him and he loves her but is it only fate that is bringing them together.

Having gone through so much hurt in her past, how easy will it be to take a chance on someone who has left her before.

Love the symbolism that you bring in the story.

Very nice dialogues, very nice descriptions.

Awesome update Heytal

Eager to know the story more...

Hope you don't mind the questions.

Thanks for updating.

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#280

abb kaise ja paogi geet...apni zindagi ko peechhe chhod kar...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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