Life partner 4,CH 28-PG135,NEXT THREAD-PG153 - Page 72

Originally posted by: Susegad

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Chulbu Pandey ki amma yaad aa gayi asthama wale scene mein. It was a sad scene supposedly, but all I could think when that scene was going on was, kyal haal banaya diya inhone saagar jaisi aankho wali ka.😆

More later.

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

Palin u r too good yaar🤣🤣

i cant stop myself from laughing🤣

maan ko pink dupatta pehne hue MAYA aunty ne dekha!!!!!!!!!!!!🤣

OMG!!!!!!!!!!🤣🤣

that was hilarious moment🤣🤣

imagine MSK behaving like a shy bride!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤣🤣

Originally posted by: moni6262

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OMG..that was too awesome..🤣

i don't even get to know, how swiftly and brilliatnly you change the flavour and feelings with ur words👏{and makes supposedly romantic squence a stupid comedy...😆}

first the cute scene of maaneet..and then the health advice😊

and the last part was extremely wonderful🤣

but anybody in maya aunty's place would think the same🤣

its not at all her fault...😆

moni..

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Originally posted by: TheBrat

Since how many days have I been not commenting? Please tell me. And after that please kick me on my ass😕{No probs dear..i know you are busy...!!😊
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Arav's hatred only had me wondering the insecurity an elder child would have faced. And I couldn't stop laughing thinking what my brother must have felt back then. Had he wanted to press a pillow too? I bet he had😆{you younger ones don't understand our{elders} love...😆..you know about my younger bro no..he was saying yesterday..i know didi why are you taking care of me so much..because I am very cute...😕😆}
Her being jealous, or at least a pinch of it is justified. She isn't a super human after all and that is so damned natural. Because it wasn't a conscious feeling. Rather it was a fleeting thought haina. I admit even I felt a teeny bit of jealousy sometime ago, just for a beat, that too because of my possessiveness towards my sister. Rofl. And due to that fleeting thought I spent the rest of the day cursing myself so I empathize with Geet and there's nothing she should feel bad about since it wasn't a concrete thought. But his reaction was enchanting. It was the "undo" button of the melancholy that was pitched due to Geet's regret{ wow...👏Can i add this line in to my update..I wish i could write like you shiku...}. You fleshed out their characters so very well that I almost can say how these characters would behave. It is so definite and so consistent and that's something I admire because trust me maintaining consistency of characters is such a pain and I struggle at it. {I completely understand you dear..Its really very difficult and it becomes more difficult when you start an other story at the same time where characters are completely different{I am really regretting "The parent" at this moment}..It like living in two completely different universes...😆}Big time. Rofl.
And coming to today's episode, I didn't laugh. Actually couldn't. Since mumma was standing beside me and I was suppressing my laughter so very badly that I ended up biting my lips hard. Ouch.😆
His excitement at enacting the scene only had me grin but the shallow breaths had me want to howl with laughter. When he gave short breaths and he asked why was she laughing, I got to know she was going to compare it with pranayama before hand. Not bad Shika *pats back*{let me pat your back dear..You know this geet very well...😊}
Oh btw when he said he was trying to merge the pics, I said aloud "Mujhe bhejde" as a reflex action and then hit my head at my stupidity😆{would you believe if i say i was thinking about you when i wrote that line...😊}
Kill me😆
PS: Did I tell you lately that I lub you?🤗{no...😆say it again now...}

Originally posted by: aashi14

hey!i m a big fan of all ur ff's ...

read each n every ff's of urs bt never commented...😕😕

bt i lik lif partner d most

i ws laughin lik hell imagining maan doin all dis...😃😃

lovely update

lookin forwad 2 read a bit of romance...

plz update soon...👏👏👏

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

i pity ur hubby Palin 🤣

here i was thinking maan will take advantage and ask geet to "show" him how to bretahe ...lekin wo laddu ka laddu hi rahega 😡

Originally posted by: had2bu

Palin! The last one was smiley for reserved...

My stomach is hurting from laughing.

Your imagination knows no bounds girl...{Thank you so much dear..same applies to you..i could never imagine that "Dough" can be a prop for romance...😉😆}

The whole update was rocking but you stole my heart when she said that they are not your kids Maan, they are ours...{There are very few who has commented about this line but you noticed as well as pointed it..you truly have very sensitive heart.,,thats why only you can find some positiveness in "MAYA"...😊}

So true the acceptance we women have as part of our nature.

The opposite is also true when Maan was talking about opening up to his inlaws it was harder for him.

Must be from the hunting days of the old cavemen, they could show no vulnerability. That's why the poker face

Caveman se yaad aaya, In case you missed it Nisha has made Dr. Khurana as a caveman in my story on my thread pg 84. It is hilarious... do check it out.{ i would surely do...} I am going to post it as a reply right before my post when I next update so everyone can see it then.

Back to the update, fabulous. Maya aunty ko dara diya, loved it...

Loved the role playing, asthma and Baba parts... too good Palin.

Eagerly anticipating more...

here also and chidi also...{chidi k liye wait karna padega thoda....}

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