If Only You Saw Me (2)

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

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Posted: 12 years ago

#491

The story is getting pretty interesting.Tho less but Maaneet are talking.But really yaar,jake ko aaj ka hi din mila tha to talk with Maan.

Anyways loved d update.

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mayyo

@mayyo

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#492

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

nice update dear
loved it
thanx for the pm
next part soon dear

Thanks! 😊

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#493

Originally posted by: Neeju
awesome update

Thank you! 😊

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: krati5
nice part

Thanks Krati! 😊

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#495

How sweet & romantic. The best thing about your writing is that it emphasis on minutest details & subtely makes you feel the emotions felt by the leads here. The whole update leaves a sweet tingle within me ... which makes me want to just smile & appreciate all in it. 😊

Bechara Maan everything & everyone conspires against him to make a good impression on her. It was real - the way you showed their interactions... the uncertainity with the nervousness well potrayed. Usually it's the bad or untrue image that is perceived following which good impression is formed but here it was totally reverse... Her good & somewhat comfort level she was expecting & presuming to be felt with him & all that she regarded about him was blown away by his apprehensions & jittery feeling of not ruining it... But somehow even after all difficulties in actually establishing a good friendly rapport with her, he has at the end of the day made some progress in knowing about her & also having had near normal conversation without much akwardness.

Thanks for the PM... please continue soon. Want to see how this duo put together their whole act inspite the initial goof-ups, nervousness & hesitations... & overcome their own prejudices & assumptions about the other... 😉