MG :~pyaar~~ pt 10 ,11 pg 31,33 apr 22

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

nishnal

@nishnal

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Ur new stories PYAAR,U R MINE...r amazng plz PM me too...waitng 4 the update... 😊

Quote

Gmsk..

@Gmsk..

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

~~pyaar~~

PART 4

I NEVER LIED TO YOU MAAN...

she opened her eyes.. she was not in her room... her hands were having pain..she looked around but didn't find anyone..she was not aware where was she.. soon someone came .. he looked at her and gave her an angry glare... she didn't knew who was he why he was here...

he hold her wrist gently and looked at her eyes..he was a doctor she thought looking at his attire the way he was checking her...

she didnt said anything nothing...

so man bhar gaya khud ko maarne ka ya abhi kuch aur bhi karna baki hai..mujhe keh deti geet main ek aur asaan raasta bata deta...

JAY!!!

she whispered in a low voice... and looked down...tears again stung in her eyes waiting to fall down... but she hide them.. he checked her heart beats... she was now fine but weak... she has lost a good amount of blood and now she needs to look after herself...

where is your husband...

he questioned expecting an answer... but to his utter dismay the girl didnt even bothered to open her mouth...

where is he... why are you alone in this condition geet ... he clearly questioned her but geet prefered to stay quiet...

uski wajah se you tried to commit suicide na ...

geet looked at him with her helpless self...

she couldnt held anymore ..and clinged to her brother cum only friend...

i didnt lied to him jay..maine kuch nahi kiya... i was never at fault..main kyun unse jhooth boleungi jay..i love him..i love him so much...
jay please tell him to come back to me... i didnt want to stay aloone now..darr lagta hain ab akele rehne se...

jay was also having tears listening to her they were brought up in the same orphanage and she was very dear to him..she was the only one who had been befriended with him inspite of him being a handicap..jay had a slight problem in walking which is now perfectly fine...but she ..she being a noble soul never hurted him or bullied him like others...

even jay couldnt help but to shed a tear for her pain...

you come with me... mere saath rehna..leave him who doesnt care for you... then he asked something that no one asked her till now...

geet are you fine now... uss accident ke baad i thought i lost you forever phir sister mary se pata chala that you are fine...and they gave me your photo and address to locate you ...waise you are more pretty now.. i didnt knew choti that you will look so beautiful... meri galti hai..that i was not there when you needed your brother most...
now come with me...

geet didnt said anything..neither she moved...

jay looked at her she was still ..she didnt even moved ..

chal choti... you cant keep yourself here for the entire life...

jay bhaiyya i am fine... i cant come with you... she looked away hiding her torn life ..but jay knew what she was feeling...

yah you are right you cant come with your friend but bhai ke ghar toh tera haq hai na...

~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~

waiting for readers review

Edited by maanlovesgeet - 12 years ago

111

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

nice part..

but how she came to jays house..

what lie they are talking about..

Quote

simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Awesome update

how she is in jay place

continue soon

Quote

Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

part 4
nice...
poor Geet...
why is Maan like this?
cont soon dear...

Quote

khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

emotional update! Poor Geet! Jay takes her! update soon

Quote

Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

nice update

what accident????

now geet in jay's house...

Quote

Rufia

@..Enigma..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

poor geet...y maan is lyk dis yaar???simple but its is awesme update...waitng for nxt updates...😊

Quote

Gmsk..

@Gmsk..

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

~~PYAAR~~

PART 5

Relations r really like the soft paper that can be mould in what ever way u want even MAAN did this he married me that was for his convenience just because he claimed to have loved me , we were married six months back geet sighed tears were still there but the pain that he has instilled on her soul cannot be taken back..

jay took her in his embrace he couldnt see her helpless..

choti kyun aansu baha rahi hai uss insaan ke liye jise kabhi teri kadr hi nai thi . Tu janti hai na i cant c u in pain , bas ab chup ho ja

jay was not liking this person whom his dear sister trusted with her life and in turn she got the betrayal and the step she had taken by trying to end her life had left him in certain rage ...

HERE IN DELHI.
.

maan had came back no one was aware of him getting married ... He was there for a project and all the while away from his family with his LOVE...

that love that he had himself crushed with his own hands.. Maan had reached in the early morning he was all drenched with the wetness of tears that heavens poured for them.. Lost in his own life he was not even having knowledge that his geet had actually tried to take her life.. He was getting just harsh and tough MSK who was not having any kind of warmth for anyone maan was sitting in his cabin

when someone came in his cabin maan just didnt saw anyone when the person shut his laptop

what do u think of yourself Mr MAAN SINGH KHURANA where is geet kahan hai wo how can u do this maan you know she is alone koi nai hai uske paas kabhi socha hai kya karegi wo kahan jayegi ..

Maan just averted his gaze he pretended not to have heard her..

MEERA how come u here .. Meera who was already fuming on the man in
front of her just shouted at him and his ignorance

that doesnt matter now maan the person who matters now is your wife .. You left her alone maan how can you be so insensitive kahan hai geet

maan just gave a cold shoulder and tried to ignore the coming questioning towards him

i dont know and i dont care meera she lied to me usne kabhi bhi ye nahi bataya that she is not geet wo toh geetanjali hai and she knowing that how much i hate lies usne kabhi nahi kaha meera..

meera couldnt believe what maan was saying about geet though she has met her only for two times but the girl seems to be too innocent to lie..

how does it matter know maan you married her and you love her phir kyun dard de rahe ho khud ko bhi aur usko bhi ..

meera was maan's friend cum associate now ... she was there all the time when he married her .. she all knew about their relation about geet and about maan ... she had seen them so in love and now maan's behavior is not justified... just yesterday she came back and went to see him in mansion but on not finding geet she was shocked... just not that but no one in the family knew who is geet ...

it does matter meera do you want me to love that girl who was not loyal to our relation from the very first day.. jo masoomiyat tumne dekhi thi meera that was all a perfect white lie... she is just another girl who tried to come in my life in the name of GEET

meera knew that right know maan is not going to listen anything so she tried to make him understand...

you are wrong maan.. you married her ... she didnt came to you... you were attracted towards her .. and now you are saying that she doesnt matter.. why dont you understand you are playing with two lives .. and believe me bring her before its too late...

saying so she left only to left maan in remorse ...

his right senses had left him.. he just knew that the girl he married ..the girl he proposed is not the one he thought .. she was not his love but she was a huge lie in the form of love...

jay was consoling geet ..while she was sobbing hard...

bhaiyya why did you save me .. acha hota main marr jati..atleast i wouldnt have to face all this.. kyun maan ne aisa kiya...

jay didnt want geet to think all this he just snapped her ...

choti marne deta tujhe . did you even know what i felt seeing you almost died.. teri saanse ja rahi thi.. kitna khoon tha ... agar main waqt par nahi aata toh pata nahi kya ho jaata...
did you even know how eager i was to meet you... after all these years i want to meet the only relation i felt from my heart but dekha kya.. my sister was on the verge on dying...

now geet understood what she has done in all the emotions that betrayed her that day...

i am sorry bhaiyya main itni kamzor kaise padh gayi i dont even know... i am so sorry...

~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~

readers review awaited...

Edited by maanlovesgeet - 12 years ago

102

Quote