MG :~pyaar~~ pt 10 ,11 pg 31,33 apr 22

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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

awesome start

starting me hi mu

maan leave her

n geet cut her wrist!!!!!!!!!!

hope maan will save her...

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preeti.1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

very intesting ..eagerly waiting for next ...plz pm me ur both ffs

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

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part 1
nice start...
though painful...
cont soon...

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Gmsk..

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: spvd
part 1
nice start...
though painful...
cont soon...

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thx

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Gmsk..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

~PYAAR~

PART 2

everything seems to be an illusion , a nightmare that she wanted to end as soon as possible... the bright sun that she wanted to rise in her dark and gloomy life .. though she was in the dark alley of his betrayal and loneliness was killing her every second...

his betrayal the deep and dark accusations that he inflicted on her soul cannot be forgotton neither he can be forgiven...

the warm blood was turning into ice cold as it was flowing freely draining each and every ounce of her self concious that was still pleading somewhere telling her " NOT TO LEAVE HIM... YOU CAN"T LEAVE YOUR OWN SOUL TO DIMINISH GEET..."

still his everyword was ringing in her ear ... but strangely the love that she holds for the man in her life cannot change... , the deep faith that still her heart is having for him cannot go just with their some conflicts...

she once remembered her mother saying...

" agar pati patni ke beech ladai ya jhagada na ho geet toh phir unme pyaar kaise bhadega..."

her unconcious mind was still drifted to her fast..while her body was numb and cold... blood was all scattered on the floor... her dress was soaked with the red dark blood of her love..proving her truth...

here he stopped his fast raging jeep only to get lost in the deep thoughts the innocent face of his love that was actually never his... the rain was pouring mingling his tears with the water drenching him... he in utmost frustation banged his hand to the bonnet of the jeep... and cried in agony...

pyaar ka khamosh dard zehar ban gaya tha gumsum lamhe zindagi ke nasoor ban gaye the...

maan: KYUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

" KYUN GEET ... KYUN KIYA MERE SAATH AISA... ITNA BADA SACH CHUPAYA... "

he was guilty ... the irritation that he was feeling within him cannot be described...

" ITNA BADA JHOOTH.. TUM TOH MERI GEET HO HI NAHI... TUM KABHI BHI NAHI THI... KABHI BHI NAHI THI WO GEET JISE MENE HAMESHA SE CHAHA THA... TUM TOH SACH JAANTI THI PHIR BHI CHUP RAHI... KUCH NAHI KAHA... KYUN!!!!!!..."

The words that he was saying now were lost infront of her... he didnot ..actually was not able to say her that he knew about her LIE that was caught now... he was feeling disgusted on him...

how can he not know that the girl was not his love...

he cried again in the burning sensation of his heart...

" WO TOH MERI GEET THI HI NAHI... KAHAN HO TUM GEET... WOH TOH KOI GEETANJALI HAI... "

she was still lying in that dead state no one was there to even look at her... she was truly an abondoned soul today...

uski zindagi usee rooth gayi...
humsafar ne saath chod diya...

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hiii all thank you for your response

here is part 2

please those who want to read can check daily updates thread 5

i will be posting my ffs there with daily updates...

so i dont think there is a need of pm coz i can only update or send pm in the time limit i have these days

Edited by maanlovesgeet - 12 years ago