MG :~pyaar~~ pt 10 ,11 pg 31,33 apr 22 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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THERE ARE TWO GIRLS - GEET AND GEETANJALI
BUT SHE LOVES HIM - AND HE LOVES SOME BODY ELSE
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesome update suhana dii
soo geet n geetanjali doo person the
but geet is dying koi bacha lo use maan goo bak she needs u
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 2
nice...
what did she do that hes blaming her?
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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~PYAAR~

Part 3

TWO DAYS LATER

There was a aloofness , the loneliness in his life no matter how much he try to forget her but the memories that they have created with each other cannot be just ignored... they keep on haunting in their life... she was like a fresh flower in his life which was now crushed by him by his own hands... a raw beauty was made like a dead soul even before it can gain a life of its own...

no matter how much he will try to forget her to remain aloof from her memories but he cannot stay away .. well how can he when she was in his soul.. she was his better half.. his soul mate .. his wife whom he had loved with all his life and heart but a sudden commencement of a truth in their life made them to part like they never meet...
he was restless... torn.. shattered between his own self and his love.. his heart was yearning for its peace that lies in her.. her arms... she was his everything and in a sudden rage he lost what he owned...

maan was looking at the files ... he know that he wont be able to think or take any more of her but he forget that she will always and always will remain with him.. either in the form of his heartbeat or in the form of her love...

"maan no leave me... please aisa mat karo... dekho i cant take it anymore.. fits of laughter were echoed in the room... she was giggling... twisting and turning on the comfortable bed while he was holding her legs...

maan no... dekho please aisa mat karo... my stomach is aching...

hhehehhehe... nahi maan...

his own index finger touched her toe.. circling in a round direction.. while his hand moved under her kurti... his slightly cold hand met her warm gentle smooth skin... she flinched at a sudden contact of the skin...

MA...A..N.. a painful seducing moan.. erupted deep from her throat ..that was actually from the bottom of her heart he ache and craving for him was making him vulnerable...
his hands caressed her skin...

geet gasped.. he pinched her soft skin...

"a..ahhh..."

his finger just ticked her toe again.. making her to look at him in a certain pleading manner ...

"U CANT TAKE IT MORE NA JAAN... I KNOW THAT YOU ARE VERY TICKLISH...

but his plans were some other...

while his one hand started..coming up rubbing her soft smooth legs on the cloth while his other hand tickled her at hers sensitive spot of her tummy...

MAAN~!!!!!

haan jaan..

dont do...

why...am i not allowed to love you honey...

she looked in his eyes looking intendly... no words came out from her mouth..in an instant she hugged him up...

A PAINFUL SOB ESCAPED FROM HER MOUTH...

I NEVER LIED TO YOU...

~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~


waiting for readers review...

Edited by maanlovesgeet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update! well written! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
wow soo maan is missing her
but geet ka kya hua
use koi hospital le gaya kya she cuted her viens na
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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MAAN IS THINKING ABOUT THE PAST
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
maan is missing geet
but where is geet?????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 3
nice part...
poor Geet...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
what happened2 geet
if maan is thinking about past..
then wats the last l9..it seems present

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