MG :~pyaar~~ pt 10 ,11 pg 31,33 apr 22 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago


update check page 31
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
maan cant accept her death
and when he saw her he was happy and he is also in remorse
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part..still the mystery should be unfolded..if that geet is of maans age then who is this geet..precap..interesting..
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all 10 Parts in One go 😊
Awesome Updte dear 👏
Update next part soon 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
me puzzled
if she is geet or not
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
she is geet or not
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet n geetanjali...whts happening...geet is dead...geetanjali came to maan's house fr job...whts going to happen nw...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
~~PYAAR~~


PART 11

Geet with dejected voice said that her husband left her..she was about to left when maan entered ..first she didn't noticed him..but when shailja saw him…

Shailja: maan aap aa gaye… aur meera kahan hai aaj wo bhi aane wali thi use kuch zaroori baat karni thi mujhse…

She asked maan ..maan who was looking at geet with his piercing gaze went was not able to answer… geet was about to leave she was having no clue that he was in delhi..and know she wont stay here..

Maan's strong grip held her hand … she was shocked even shailja was shocked…. What maan was doing she was not his geet and his behavior and moves were totally inept…

Shailja looked at maan's grip she tried to made her grip loose…

Shailja: maan leave her wo geet nahi hai…

Maan didn't respond….

Maan instead looked at geet…

Maan: you are not going anywhere do you listen to me geet..kahin nahi ja rahi tum…

Geet was numb..she was speechless she was angry on him how dare he insult her and now he wants her back..he never loved her instead he just made the fun of her feelings…

Geet getting angry with rueful voice

Geet: leave my hand… I dont have anything to do with you MR MAAN SINGH KHURANA…. Just leave me…

Maan looked at her and her eyes… he didn't knew that why did he left her…he was feeling pathetic what he did..the days he spent without her were like walking on fire..she was his life and he got to know it know..he loved her truly his life his heart belongs to her..not geet…she was his…

Maan: look geet I know what I did was wrong and you cant leave me like this… you have full right to get angry to do anything with me but you cant leave your maan….

Geet was having tears he was having pain of loosing her and she was feeling his pain…

Geet: you say I am having the right..where were you when I was dying… you left me maan…know just leave me…. I had enough of you… we are not meant for each other you love someone else… I lied to you…

She was chocking….

Maan kneeled down and still holding his hands…

Maan: I am sorry geet.. I was in fit of rage…mujhe nahi pata chala what I was doing…. Geet is no more she left me and I am having no memory of her..ek halki si jhalak thi uski mere man me..jisne mujhe tumhari taraf kheecha tha …. And I married you… you were and will remain my … you are my wife geet…please forgive me..i was completely lost when I got to know that you are not geet ..tum toh geetanjali ho…

Geet: agar aabhi me aapko ye pata na chalta aur baad me you would have make me responsible maan….

Leave me I cant stay here…. When maan saw that geet was going away from his..his mother was shocked to know that maan was married….

Maan hold geet and was not ready to leave….

Geet: aur ek baat maan.. aap jis chehre se pyar karte hain wo toh mera hai hi nahi.. mera ek saal pehle aacident hua tha…jiski wajah se I lost my identity… ye shayad aapki geet ka chahra hai…. Usi ka chehra hai…. Ye bhi ek sach hai maan…

Maan and shailja were shocked and meera who had came there was looking at geet revealing everything and she came and supported geet….

Meera: ye sach hai maan… ye tumhari geet ka chehra hai.. aur ittifaak se iska naam bhi geetanjali hai..jise tumne geet samjha kyunki geetanjali hume kabhi ise pukara hi nahi…. Jab tum shimla aaye the hum sabko laga tha ki tum aapni zindagi me aage bhadhoge and you did move on but what an irony maan it was with geet… you got attracted to her and in that you married her… and maan believe me you never loved geet …coz he pain and longing I have seen you bearing for her was never for your geet …..

Geet didn't want to leave but she cant stay with him… she was about to leave .. when maan didn't let her go….

Maan: you cant leave me geet …. I am your husband dammit…. He said in frustration building up…

Geet was getting angry… she looked at him and with anger laden voice….

Geet: husband you left me to die when I needed you… did you listen to me what I was saying..no you didn't and know you want me to stay with you .taaki jab aapka man kare mujhe phir se jhoota saabit kardo aur mujhe chor ke chale jao…then I am sorry mr sorry mr khurana …you can assume your wife is dead…mar chuki hai wo… I am sorry maan..nahi karti main aapse pyar… bahut dard diya hai iss pyar ne mujhe abb aur sahan nahi hota… main marna pasand karungi maan… aapne haaton se maar dijiye kyunki aage I wont be able to bear your indifference….

Maan wanted to make her understand…

Maan: geet … he was having no clue how to mend for his mistake….

Geet: listen to me maan… I am not your geet… main aapki geet nahi hun….

Maan : jaanta hun tum meri geet nahi ho..phir bhi you are only mine …sirf meri…. Samjhi tum… sirf meri… and I cant let you go … jo saza deni hai dedo geet … maar do magar mujhe chor ke mat jao..i wont be able to live geet….

Geet was enraged .. first he made her suffer and know he was giving her lifetime punishment by saying this..she slapped him.. the loud was enough to get echoed in the room…

Geet: zindagi har ki saza dena chahte hain mujhe …. He engulfed his love in his arms.. this was love..pyaar.. unki saanson se juda pyaar …ek dusre ke liye pyar..

Tears of longing remorse were flowing out of their eyes… life was short but if it is filled with the love of your partner it meant heaven to you….

Things were cleared ..geet told the family who was she..and khurana's accepted her … maan told them everything and geet very superbly hide that she cut her vein for him…but jay was there who when got to know that whole truth was protective for geet but he forgive maan … and maan didn't let geet out of his sight when he got to know about her act….

Jay told them that when geet had to go through the plastic surgery ..she was given a new face since she was badly burnt as during her stay in orphanage she had met an accident… and that face was of geet..but how did this happen was only known to the doctor who operated upon her and the doctor was no more now….

A new beginning of their love.. with the tears of love and affection…and lots of pyar…

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Finally completed my first ff…

So how is it..

Readers share your view on this fanfic of mine…..

Next updates will be on U R MINE ..hope u still remember that


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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part..so geet got her face becoz of plastic surgery..n maan opened up his love to her..all is well atlast

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