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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
thanks for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago


who is Maan's Geet and how she died...

I assume when Maan met this Geet and heard her name he thought that she is his Geet...whom he once loved and lost her...but when he came to know that she is not same then he left her...

very interesting...

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Posted: 12 years ago
omg i am confused
interesting update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

i am loving this story
very well written
superb piece of work
great
please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for them to meet!!!
So update soon!!!
I really love face offs!!!
Great ...and I liked it too much

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
but what is geet dead or alive
pls pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
~~PYAAR~~


PART 10

Next day as silky told geet she met the parents of the girl they called her at her residence .. since geet was having her classes in the morning so she asked if she could come in the evening they agreed…

The next day the preparations were going on for geet's barsi.. even geet's parents were there..since the handa's and khurana's were family friends so they could deny them… geet was more close to shailja and yash too… that was the day maan lost his geet .. but he was having no clue that the person whom he was searching was no more… the bright sunrays fall in his room making him to open his dark eyes which were concealing the pain of loosing his love..though his heart was telling him that it was geetanjali but he was refusing saying it was his friend geet… the feelings that he had for geet were nothing infront of what he meant for geetanjali..she was his love and wife whom he loved and desired… strangely today was the day he met geetanjali six months back….

Shailja came in the room , she looked at maan sitting in lost state on his bed… he looked at his mom and looked down…

Maan: GOOD MORNING MOM….

Shailja knew that today the day was gonna be a tough day for maan.. she knew that today everything was not going to be in its place she was feeling that today everything will be in its place….

Shailja: I AM TAKING OUT YOUR CLOTHES MAAN ….GET READY AND COME DOWN FAST… THE POOJA AND HAVAN ARE GOING TO START ….

Maan was puzzled ..which pooja and havan.. he needed his answers .. his mind was having various queries that he wanted to answer…

Maan: POOJA KIS LIYE MOM…

Shaija tried to keep quiet but she told the to maan….

SHAILJA: geet barsi hai aaj..

Saying so she left before he could ask further questions….

Maan was not able to comprehend what his mother said.. barsi..for a second his mind went back to geet … his wife geet..but why he was fearing if something happens to her.. he was strangely least bothered about geet whom his mom called dead… having no option other than to discover he got ready in a white kurta and pyjama and went down…

There geet's photo was having garland… he looked at everyone..all were in white attire like knew what they were doing… but why he was having no memory if geet left him..there was a strange pain in his heart…

Maan looked at his father he questioned without knowing what to ask further….

Maan: ye kya hai dad… aur geet kahan hai…. Main ye sab nahi jaanta ye kya mazak hai.. his voice was appearing feeble yet strong like he knew that nothing happen to his geet….

Yash looked at his son and told him the truth….

Yash: yehi sach hai maan geet is no more … wo usi sccident tumhe aur hum sab ko chod ke chali gayi jisme tum apni yaddasht ko baithe…. She is no more son… wo ab kabhi nahi aayegi…..

Maan was not able to believe what his dad said…

Maan: YE KYA KEH RAHE HAI AAP DAD.. YE SACH NAHI HAI…

Yash tried to tell maan ..but he was not able to listen to anyone..ad left the mansion to seek some peace he was puzzled … they were saying is geet left him then who was she….

The havan was done… maan didn't participated in it but strangely at last aahuti he came and completed the havan shedding the lone tears for his love which was now occupied by someone else…. It was difficult for him to believe this … he left the mansion to search for some answers his condition was not good still he wanted some aloofness…

Later at the day geetanjali came to khurana mansion first she was puzzled seeing the big mansion later ..her eyes went to the surname she was feeling something familiar but didn't recognize….

When she entered maan's mom was informed by the servant she was in a shock to see her…she was looking like their geet..but shaija could clearly differentiate that though she was looking alike but she was not their geet..since they got geet's dead body….

She was not able to believe to believe what she was seeing..she looked at geet she was waering sindoor..but there was no mangalsutra…

Geet greeted shailja….

Geet: NAMASTE MAIN GEET.. MERA MATLAB HAI GEETANJALI..AAPSE TUTIONS KE BAARE MAIN BAAT KI THI…

Shaija nodded she replied politely..and looked at geet..she was addressing herself as geetanjali… and looking like nineteen or twenty year old girl… she was having sharp features but she was pure white that was contradicting her being geet….while their geet was of maan's age and the girl infront of her seems five six year younger than him..she cant be geet her mind refused….

Shailja inquired everything about geet and geet politely told about herself she being an orphan studying in hostel…. Shailja quite liked geet but she was having dilemma whether to appoint geet as priya's tutor she her looks and similarities were just like geet and seeing maan she could say yes to her… but then she saw her parted filled and out of eagerness she asked her…

Shaija: beta aapki shaadi ho chuki hai…

Geet: ji…

Shaija: toh aapke pati unke saath nahi rehti….

Geet: unhone mujhe chod diya..her reply was cold and unnerved…she was not looking ashamed of telling the truth..that's when maan saw her … he was happy to see her… his heart was beating fast seeing her alright … and moreover she stills means their relation was a great recognition for him….

Maan was about to come when he heard geet saying that her husband left her..something broke within him leaving him in remorse….

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Next : you cant leave me geet …. I am your husband dammit…. He said in frustration building up…


waiting for readers review


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Posted: 12 years ago
updated part 10

i hope readers will like my effort

next one or two chapters will conclude this story
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

geet toh zinda hai...phir maan k mummy papa kyun bol rahe hai kya geet ki death ho gayi hai...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...



thats becoz she is not the same geet na
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Reading this FF for the first time and found it interesting.As it looks Maan has lost his memory in an accident and his parents think Geet died in that accident but she is alive smwhere.

Thanx for d pm,i got to read this superb story.




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