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Posted: 12 years ago


mona kaha chali gayi????
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Part 19


Maan took out the things from packet. It was her Shaadi Ka Jora which she had changed in hotel and her jewelleries. "sayad yahi dhundhna chahti ho Geet!!'' he guessed still not sure whether he had brought right things or not! But he wanted to see her in this dress once again. And that would be very special day of them it was sure. Maan smiled on his own increasing ardent thoughts. "Per sabse pahle I will have to talk to Dadi and tell everything!'' his expression changed to serious.


Geet was walking round n round, back and fro in room twisting her Dupatta corner in tension. "Kase milu mai Maan se'' she was not getting any chance to meet him. Every time someone or other would be sitting or working in hall and going up to his room.. was not easy task that too concealing from all eyes. "Kuch toh karna parega.. mai Dadima ko aur dhokha nahi de sakti. I can't cheat her anymore now'' her inner soul was not giving her permission to face Dadima and get any care from her until she tells all truth. "But how!!'' "Soch Geet kuch soch.. Babaji please show me any way!!'' and then something comes in her mind.

After fifteen minutes, in living hall, Dadi was sitting with a lady which was her old friend and neighbor. Both were chatting when suddenly some fall sound followed with Geet cry comes and all run to her room. "What happened!!!'' Dadi rushed in room and witnessed Geet was sitting on floor holding her leg and broken pieces of glassy flower vase were scattered everywhere. She rushed to her "Geet are you alright Beta?''

"Dadi you don't come here. Glass chubh jaayengi aapko'' Geet tried to stand up but could not and winced in pain. "Ahh!!!''


"You don't worry Dadi.. I carry her to bed'' Dadi and her friend heard sound from their back and turned.. Dev was there stood and looking everything and now, was stepping to Geet. Geet shivered within with his heading steps to her. She did not like him and now when only he was there instead of Maan whom she had expected will come hearing her cry, she wanted to run away from there rather be touched by him. Her gaze met with him. She knew he was not doing this for her help but something else was playing in his mind but what! .. she could not guess. The moments were slipping from her hand but there was no sign of Maan and also she could not escape from the game she had started now. She had thought Maan will come hearing her scream and she could at least talk him for few minutes but now, everything had turned upside down. "Babaji!!!'' she made a little pray.


She one more time tried to stand up as her legs were perfectly alright but "Aree Beta your pain will increase. Don't try yourself'' Dadi had been much more worried what she had expected still she tried to protest but it had already gone late. Dev had bend down to her till then and her time had been over. Geet shook her head tried to protest and he smirked on her understood plead. He raised his hand to carry her when a hand paused on his shoulder following by " Ruk Jaao Dev!!!''

All stopped with the commanding voice of Maan, who was stood behind Dev and had rested his hand on Dev shoulder with a firm expression which was wandering on his face. Dev moved back knowing a slight the mean of Maan unsaid expression and gave the way to Geet who was relieved and was staring her husband with a look which had soothe. Her eyes met with Maan who had a odd emotion in his eyes which she was witnessing for the very first time but.. She could not understand what it was!! Was it tinge of jealous or the ocean of possessiveness, whatever was, she liked it!! A slight smile appeared on her lips which Maan did not notice because he was shaking within. It was unnatural for him own what he was feeling. He never had felt it before. Without giving any care to all he bend and carried Geet in his arm carefully. He made her lay on bed and sat next. The worry was visible in him which gave utmost happiness to Geet.


"Nakul!.. Nakul!!!'' Maan shouted. A short heighted man rushed inside hearing his shout and been ordered to bring medicines and milk. Maan was going out of mind, not knowing that everyone was looking him in awe. But Geet noticed and was fearing "Sab kya soch rahe honge'' question was troubling her. She nervously looked to Dadi who had frown on her face with confusion. Nakul brought balm and stood rooted not sure whom to give it. "Give me!!'' Maan spoke..

"Ye Maan kya kar rahe hai !!'' Geet worried with the prevision of what Maan could do next and that would surely not be acceptable form anyone. As she guessed Maan was going to apply balm in her leg she screamed " Ahhh Dadimaa!!!! '' and this brought out Maan from his lost state where he had been travelling till now. He moved back and composed himself. He knew matter has spread in all direction and now he had to recollect it. But how!!!''

Geet was thinking same and now she had to help him out. "Ahhh dadi.. bahut dard ho raha hai..!!!'' she made severe face which made Dadi forget what she had saw before and rushed to Geet. She made her eat painkiller which Geet gulped down remembering her Babaji and smiled showing she is okay now. After assuring she is fine all started to leave. When Maan turned Geet held his hand being sure no one was looking them and gave a note in his fist. Maan frowned what it was but Geet pressed her eyes. He nodded and left.


"Bro why had you stopped me?'' Dev asked catching everyone attention which, all had forgotten while returning back to their respective places.

"Dev you hadn't had your shoes on and pieces could have hurt you'' Maan replied with confidence and he left. Both ladies too left not giving much attention to this matter leaving Dev alone with his thoughts.. "Bro not me but I'm sure it would have hurt you more if wouldn't have stopped me'' Dev smirked when got a call. He left talking.


Precap : (Same 😛) "What're you doing here Geet. chup chup ke ghar ki baante sun rahi ho !!'' Dev shouts while looking her strangely ..


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



dekho meine dekha hai yeh ek sapna

phoolon ke shahar main hi ghar apna...

kitna haseen hei yeh ek sapna
phoolon ke shar mein hei ghar apna...
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Posted: 12 years ago

am not at all getting devs intentions... is he a flirty one having an eye on geet or he have a doubt on maaneet seeing their eye convo???

i loved the way geet was calling her babaji when dev came to carry her instead of maan... and maan when told "ruk jaao dev"... i was jumping over here...i just love it when our maan is possessive... and thanx for this jhalak... hope to have this possessive maan more in future...

maan forgetting about dadi and others and geet reminding it was cute... and maans bahaana was just superb!!!

next update lambaaa waala plomish????




Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hamen long updt abhi chayeaaa...hamara sur jindabad...



😆 😆 ab aaj ka toh ho gaya.. next time na long wala 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

kitna haseen hei yeh ek sapna

phoolon ke shar mein hei ghar apna...


oo wowww lakshmi .. lovely pic .. ye wala bhi le liya mane 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
I came here to post a waiting msg, but yaha to update hi milgaya.

Will comment after reading the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww lovu lovely update...accha toh wo sadhi ka joda tha jiske liye geet etna bechain thi...thank god maan found it ...awww geet made drama to get attention frm maan but maan was nt at home geet ...thank god bal bal bach gaye geet nehi toh dev geet ko lift kar leta ewww...😡...hayeee in few days maan fall in love with geet blindly that he didn't even notice there were dadi who noticed him, how he worried for geet ...kher geet ne samhal li thi...fir se keh rahi hu dev stay away frm maaneet...😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites



😆 😆 ab aaj ka toh ho gaya.. next time na long wala 😛

nd romantic 2 wid only mneet widout dis dev😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anuandavi

I came here to post a waiting msg, but yaha to update hi milgaya.

Will comment after reading the update


😆 😆 lucky you 😉

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