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Posted: 12 years ago



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Part 15


"Geet!!" Maan held her chin to make her face him, look him, in his eyes which had the beginning of a dream where the two people will live their own life with wholeness. Geet looked him with same ardour he had, and wanted for her to have. The mere thought of a name will be given to their unripened relation, filled the intensity of devotion in their hearts. The natural expressions and emotions started to flourish.



Geet' who easily had opened her heart out without any hesitation, now felt like, the slight cold wind of spring make feel alike in evening, The soft and shivery. She was unable to peek inside his eyes, but Maan, did not let her bow the thick, curly lashes of her. She shyly stared him. The eyes of both matched, moved both sides with same steps. He smiled, she followed. He moved nearer, she moved back, then stops, looked down again, giving a shy smile, which made Maan heart full with wisdom.



"Lets go Geet.. sham ho gayi hai'' He spoke making the surround normal. They came out of room. For the first time Geet noticed the grandness of this office. It had become evening and office was empty. Maan reached to lift and turn to see her and found, her not there. "where she gone?'' Maan thought and returned back. His steps paused and lip made a happy smile looking her lost, staring a beautiful painting of the rising sun, hanging on wall. He came from back " Did you like it?'' his husky voice startled her.



"It's beautiful Maan!!'' she stated turning to him. "Chaliye!'' She started to leave when Maan pulled her back in force, letting her turn and tremble, made her held his shoulder to support. Her breath made silent sound in reflex. Exude of her tender, skipped breath made the side of his neck warm and the feel, made him realize their daring closeness. Yet, he did not move back, alike wanted to live this moment for longer. But Geet couldn't handle the intensity and moved back, concealing her shivery body. Maan felt she moved cause she dint like the sudden act of him. he felt bad and "I'm sorry.. "



Geet stopped him saying further making his lips cover with her palm. She nodded no, with a expression of acceptance for the move, he did take. The shy smile of her face given him assurance. The tender palm was living her moment rested on his lips which Geet did not realize till how long, and when realized, she pulled it back in cursory but Maan, held it and kissed. Geet felt like electric motion inside her body, made a reflex sound of struggling breaths and her eyes, bowed down.



"Ab chalo!'' Maan spoke teasingly. They left in car. Drive was silent and mawkish. They were passing from the same hotel when Geet suddenly shouted "Maan stop!!'' .. Maan looked her confused. "Why. What happened?''



"Nothing ..just stop here. I have to go in this hotel''



"No..you won't step inside here'' Maan was almost adamant.



"Maan please.. I had forgotten something here. It's very important. Let me go na''.. Hearing her request and urgency Maan let her came out from car and both moved to there. Geet was feeling something different, seeing this place. It's not that she was thinking about her insult but something more strange'.. She reached to entrance and found it sealed. She looked Maan confused as why this place had been sealed. Maan did not reply picked out a key from his pocket which always he used to keep in car. Opened the lock and let her enter. Geet shocked.. seeing the place abandoned. The place she had witnessed last in the grandest way now was looking buried and ruined. She couldn't understand the reason nor did ask. She just started to go to lift way. Maan stopped from behind.. "Where are you going Geet.. lift isn't working!''



Geet looked him.. "Per kyu.. what happened here? Why this place is desert? Where're all people Maan?''



"This hotel has been sealed!!'' He spoke with serious tone..



Geet guessed it was related with the same incident which she had faced. She felt overwhelm yet felt bad for the people who had been working here. She thought for talking him later about this topic as, Maan was not looking in mood of hear anything this time. She took stairway. "Geet tumhe jana kaha hai..why don't you tell me! "



"Room me!'' She said while ascending up. Maan followed her. "Hmm.. and you think it's easy going in this dark? " (As it was already evening and they don't know the switchs control room way)



"But where's dark Maan.. look lights coming from windows''



"Haa.. but soon it'll be night Geet and do you even know on which floor we have to reach!! "

"Haan.. on fourteen'' She smiled..



"Really!! .. I dint know.. Geet I think we should return back. You tell me what you needing I'll send my men to bring that.. now please come back!!'' He stopped on first floor.



"Maan aap yahi rahiye.. mai leke aati hu.. wsae bhi you'll get tired'' she teased..



"Really you think so Geet.. then you be here and see.. " He started taking two steps at one and soon disappeared from her eyes.



"Maan!!" Geet called. It was not that enlighten now and she, started to get fear in slight dark. "Maan aap kaha hai!!''



Maan was seeing her from upper floor, seeing her scare and impatience for him, for his being near her. He liked it. He had eyes on her every step. She was just two three steps far from him when he saw her skipping a step .. "Geet!!!'' He runs down and holds her hand before she could fall.



She found herself in his secure arms, hearing his fasten heartbeats. She closed her eyes in warmth. She rested her hand on his chest to feel his beats and smiled, feeling secure. She knew, now she had him to protect her from any fall and evil..




Precap : "Maan where it gone?? .. nahi mil rahi ''

"Geet thik se dekho yahi hogi''

"No Maan its not here.. it was my Mother gift for me'' She became emotional and her eyes started to fall tears...


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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update glad they are coming close to each other wish the both talking to each other don't want them to misunderstand each other maan sealed the building loved the update
Gurmeet Chaudary as Maan and Drashti Dhami as Geet
Edited by dumas - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
like not working yaar

lovely update 😉

maaneet teasing eacother was so cute 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update maan punishing the manager was expected but the hotel shutting down ...hmm nice ...love the way maneet r...haaawww geet teasing maan
Edited by mehak173 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cute Part 😳
Edited by Sheen-Coolkiwi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
so cute and beautiful update
loved it
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update lovuuu...❤️👏

maaneet ki nok jhok start ho gayi...😉 hayeee 😃😉😛
Edited by soma.gurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely part


maaneet teasing each other and maan shut down the hotel

amazing update
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww sweet simple awesome update yar,
loved it a lot.

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