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PART 8:



Changing into saree Geet realized that it was late .. She was supposed to leave for mandir. She sighed thinking how she would tell her mother that she wanted to go.



She descended down looking so beautiful and breathtaking, more than anyone or probably Maan it was Sana who was staring at Geet with open mouth. This girl was just perfect with looks ... she was damn gorgeous. Sana felt inferior ... Jealousy emerged through veins. She felt like her sister was taking a revenge on her, like she wanted to show her right place in Maan's life.



She saw Geet sitting beside Maan on the insistence of Tara, the grace in her blew her away. Suddenly more than those words of her sister, Geet's appearance made her feel like an idiot. Tears threatened to fall ... she excused asking Rano for the way to washroom.



Mohinder hesitantly spoke not wanting anyone to take his words wrong ... they had just come and he was insisting onto to leave for temple ... Savitri Devi ji, kya aap hamare saath mandir chalenge?? But to his utter dismay she gave a smile and replied ... hum aaye bhi toh issi liye, sab chalte hai



Sana was left behind and no one cared to check she was still in the washroom, all the while Dev and Tara watched the little understanding that was emerging between Maaneet who were probably talking to each other with eyes ... sometimes stealing glances, sometimes staring each other.



Lagta hai tu aisi hi dekhte rahega Geet ko ... I wonder tum dono ki track kaha tak jayega aise?? Dev held Maan's arm stopping him from taking his seat in the car.



He didn't answer instead slipped inside sitting beside Geet who was smiling ... she heard the comment of Dev. Lowering her head she blushed brushing her hair back with both hands turning crimson red.



Tara overtook from the other side ... dekhte hai kaha tak jayega, mujhe toh darr hai ki Ayan ko jaldi bhai ya behen nahi milne wala, she giggled straightening herself. Both Maaneet looked at each other and then turned them away feeling shy .. literally shy!!



They reached the temple and Geet dragged herself towards her father still lost in the words of DevTara.



Kya hua beta?? Kuch kehna tha?? Mohinder caressed her hair in concern ... Geet always ends up hugging him when she is probably lost in deep thoughts or when she needs his advice. She treats her father like God, her Krishna Bhagwan. This time she didn't want to discuss something that was inevitable, what DevTara spoke was right. Now it was time for her to hold few things inside her heart, for privacy ... for they are meant to be kept between her and Maan. She nodded for a no and smiled ... papaji main Prasad deke aati hoon, saying she ran away feeling shy.



While the whole family joined for Pooja inside the temple, Geet was the only person who stood at the counter to distribute Prasad. The temple was special for them, she didn't know why ... it was something she couldn't ask her father personally. They take care of the needs like its their own home, needless to say ... it was her second home. She cleans up, prepares Prasad and distributes it once atleast in a week. Geet was waiting for her friend, her best friend ... her eyes were searching for the person who meant the world to her ... Madhuri. She was south Indian but was very much like a family to her. She promised to be with her for a sometime before she gets married ... Maan was was sitting with the other family members was watching Geet from far. He wondered where her eyes were busy ... She almost spilled the Prasad while serving it to a person.



Her eyes were turning teary ... she was controlling, didn't know why. He couldn't stop himself from raising to his feet to approach her. As his steps were reaching Geet, he saw her running like a mad person. She ran into someone's arms and began to yell. Something which he had never seen ... her chulbuli side. Both the girls were actually crying,



Tu mujhe bhool gayi na?? Geet wiped her eyes complaining, snorting her nose.



Haan bhool gayi thi ... yaad karne aagayi tujhe, tera chehra kuch alag lag raha hai ... tu wahi wali Geet hai na?? She laughed kissing her cheeks, understanding that the joke was bad, baby sorry ... sachi bol rahi hoon I was held up with work upar se my boyfriend ... he eats up my time.



Yaa I know ... you will have time for your boyfriend lekin mere liye nahi, she retorted not accepting her excuse.



Ab tu engaged nahi na main dekhti hoon tu kitna time deti hai mujhe ... Geet didn't answer. She just started to walk for dahi handi, while Geet just saw her with a naughty grin.



She walked ahead towards the human pyramid to break the curd pot, Maan who was the silence spectator of their talks joined Geet. He didn't even ask who the girl was ... my childhood friend, we were together until both of us got jobs in the same firm, maine join nahi kiya coz I wanted to stay back with my father but she joined ... we meet up once in an year, she said sighing.



The mixture of milk and curd in the handi fell on Madhu, Geet couldn't stop herself from clapping. She gave a flying kiss to Geet and came down ... so you love your father?? He asked looking at her face directly for the first time without hesitance.



Mere bhagwan hai, he is everything to me ... not because he is the reason of my birth but because he has brought me up ... he had given me everything thing without asking, sab kuch kiya mere liye ... maanti hoon sabke mata pita hain par mere liye mere papaji sab kuch hai, bhagwan se bhi jyada main unko maanti hoon, she said smiling at Madhu who was receiving her prize money.



Maan was numb for sometime, lost in her words ... he was only ten when he lost his parents and since then Dev, Dadima had been his family. He never had those relations ... never had father with him, never had mother with him. He missed his parents but when Tara came home as his bhabhi she had given him all the motherly love, she was the one who had delayed her pregnancy so that he settles. For him DevTara were everything.



Aap pareshaan ho?? Geet held his arm turning Maan to face her, she was scared thinking that she might have spoken out something which she is not supposed to.



Nahi ... soch raha tha ki meri bhabhi ne kitna kuch kiya mere liye ... I lost my parents in my childhood aur mujhe nahi pata ki ... I am sorry, she said not wanting Maan to continue. She understood that her talks have made him nostalgic.



Nahi Geet its ok



She regretted all of that, she hated herself ... ek baar pooch toh leti, jaanti hai ki unke mama papa nahi hai aur tune bol di, she gulped hard controlling the tears that threatened to fall ... I am sorry, lekin ab mere papaji aapke bhi papaji hai ... he stared at her realizing the depth of what she said.


Precap: thode badmaash ho tum ... thode naadaan ho tum ... Haan magar yeh sach hai hamari Maan ho tum😲


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Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
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hope sana understands what is her place in maans life

lovely devtara comments now geet understood about privacy and feeling shy to sharewith her father

emotional scene between maaneet about parents discussion

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